江西省莲花县高考英语二轮复习 书面表达基础品析（6）.doc

江西莲花县2016高考英语书面表达（二轮）基础品析（6） 【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在房东tricia家中，回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢，要点如下：1、安全抵家2、回顾英国游学体会3、感谢房东的帮助4、附寄两张合影5、表达愿望注意：1、词数100左右。2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3、结束语已为你写好。dear tricia,_looking forward to your reply.yours，li hua【参考范文】书面表达：dear tricia,ive come back home safely. looking back to my stay in britain, i felt so happy and satisfied. the beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot. i also benefited a lot from learning together with local students. more importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of british cultural and adapt to the life there. so im so grateful to you.by the way, attached to the letter are two photos taken with you, which i believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together. you are expected to come to china soon.looking forward to your reply.yoursli hua书面表达假如你是李华，你的美国朋友alice在学校的演讲比赛中得了第一名，给她写封信，词数120左右，包括如下内容：1祝贺她取得优异成绩；2告诉她你在高三学习中的苦与乐；3邀请她方便的时候来中国玩。_【参考范文】dear alice，how are you doing these days?from your letter，i know that you won the first place in the speech contest of your school.congratulations！i strongly believe that you have the ability and undoubtedly，your hard work and determination contribute to your success.it is several months since i entered senior three.during these days，anxiety and happiness accompany me.sometimes when i meet with some difficulties，i feel depressed.but i feel content more often because study occupies most of my time，for i know success lies in hard work.only by making every effort will i realize my dream of entering peking university.welcome to china if it is convenient for you！i promise that i will take you to many places of interest and you can taste delicious dishes.i know you must like it.im looking forward to your reply.yours，li hua【2013界广东省惠州市三模】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分)上周一你们班围绕“追星族”现象进行了一次讨论会，同学们就“追星”的现象、原因等展开了讨论1.年轻人作为追星族的主体花太量的时间、精力，甚至金钱收集明星的资料参加他们的演唱会。2.许多年轻人深感压力.、缺乏信任感，“追星可给他们带来厂定的安全感。3.明星常引领当舍被尚潮流。【写作内容】1.根据以上内容，描述这次讨论会；2.谈谈你对“追星族”现象的看法。 【写作要求】只能使用五个句子表达全部内容。 【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。 参考词汇： 追星族 fans of celebrities 【参考范文】基础写作 last week we had a heated discussion in our class on the issue of pursuing celebrities,in which we talked about the phenomenon and the reasons.young people,making up the major about celebrities ,not only spend plenty of time and energy in collecting information abourt celebrites but also pay a large amount of money for their concerts .their crazy behavior shows that they are under great pressure and lack sense of trust.being fans can bring them sense of security to some degree and the fact that celebrities often lead the fashion trend of modern times also contributes to their admiration,as for me,i think we students should try to achieve the balance between chasing celebritise and studying hard because after all,accumulating knowledge and learning skills are our main task at present.【2016高考训练题】书面表达 (25分) 为配合我县开展“创建卫生文明城市(build a civilized and clean city)”活动，学校举办以“how to behave well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。提示：1. 衣着整洁； 2. 保持环境卫生，不随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾； 3. 待人有礼，乐于助人； 4. 遵守交通规则； 5. 要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中14 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；3. 词数：80-100词左右。how to behave well?in order to build a civilized and clean city, we students should_【参考范文】书面表达how to behave well? in order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities. its a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. our city should be kept clean every day. dont throw litter or spit about. its good manners to say thank you and please and so on. we should never say dirty words. be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. for example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. we should also obey traffic rules. when the traffic lights are red, we should stop. and wed better not talk or laugh loudly in public. if everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，最近收到一封英国笔友tom的来信。他希望了解你校如何保证学生在校期间的安全。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一封回信，介绍你校的做法并发表你的看法或建议。学校已采取的措施你的看法或建议1. 各方面安全教育，增强安全意识: 如食品、交通2. 安全监督：如与家长及时沟通，3. 保安人员管理：如增加保安人员数量, 明确职责4. 对外来人员：来访出示证件、登记等 注意：(1) 信的开头、结尾已给出、不计入总词数。(2) 词数：100左右，信的内容可适当发挥以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：安全意识 awareness of safety 登记register(vi.) 保安 security guard dear tom, im glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students security._ we believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment. yours, li hua【参考范文】书面表达 dear tom, im glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students security.so far many measures have been taken to ensure the students security in and out of our school. the security issue has been emphasized on. we have organized several school meetings to strengthen the students awareness of safety about food, traffic and so on. by communicating with parents often and in time, our school can supervise and ensure our safety. besides, a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school under a clear duty. stricter security measures have been taken by our school, including a requirement that all visitors provide identification and register. the students have been taught the ways to protect themselves from danger. for example, once we smel