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山西大同市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选编（1）书面表达训练你有一位英国网友,名叫tom, 他听说了中国故宫，但知道不多，于是给你发来e-mail。请你向他介绍一下有关中国故宫的一些情况。请根据下面提供的一些要点给他回一封电子邮件：1. 故宫（the palace museum），又叫紫禁城（the forbidden city）。它于1407 年开始修建，20万人花了13年多的时间，于1420年建成。2. 它所有的宫殿一共有9999个房间。在中国，9这个数字传统地被认为是一个吉祥数。3. 现在，故宫免费向中国中学生于每周星期二开放。4. 故宫有着中国历史上五千多年的珍宝（precious treasure)。请他亲自来看一看。 注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 信的开头已经为你写好：dear tom ,it is nice to receive your e-mail. now id like to tell you something about the palace museum._【参考范文】 the palace museum is also called the forbidden city. it took 200,000 workers more than 13 years to build the forbidden city. the forbidden city was finished being built in 1420. the largest museum in the world ,the palace museum, holds cultural treasures from the past 5,000 years of chinese history . the citys palaces have 9,999 rooms altogether. chinese people traditionally have thought of nine as a lucky number . students from all over china now visit in groups at no charge every tuesday . i hope you can come to china and take a look at this museum with your own eyes. best wishes. yours, li ming书面表达训练高三的你明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。1. 对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢；2. 向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意；3. 努力学习，实现人生梦想；4. 对学弟、学妹的建议。注意：1. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；2. 词数：100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总字数）。high school is always considered as the most cherished period of ones life. as a senior 3 student, it wont be long before i graduate. _【参考范文】high school is always considered as the most cherished period of ones life. as a senior 3 student, it wont be long before i graduate. now, i have much to share with my fellow students. firstly, i would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. without their help and advice, my life would be different. secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates whom i hurt or misunderstood. communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. above all, ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for i believe hard work is the key to success. just as the old saying goes, no pains, no gains.? finally i hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men 【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（5）】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你班举行了一场关于“中学生身心健康问题”的主题班会，请你就此用英语写一篇报道：【写作内容】主题：关注中学生心理健康时间与地点：周三下午在本班教室参加人员：全班学生、班主任、心理辅导老师讨论问题：1、考试焦虑，任性行为；2、脾气暴烈，不愿与人交流；3、青春叛逆期，不听父母和老师的话。应对建议：1、积极参加各项集体活动；2、每天坚持有规律的锻炼；3、保持积极乐观的人生态度。参考词汇：青春叛逆期adolescent treachery period 集体活动collective activities【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 (one possible version) on wednesday afternoon we, in our classroom, held a class meeting on the theme of focusing on mental health of middle school students, and all the classmates together with our head teacher and our psychology teacher attended the meeting. at the meeting, we discussed some mental problems, which mainly referred not only to exam anxiety, wayward behavior and violent temper all leading to students unwillingness to communicate with others, but also to turning a deaf ear to their parents or teachers in the adolescent treachery period. but how do we deal with these problems? first, we are supposed to take an active part in all kinds of collective activities, and then stick to taking physical exercise regularly every day. finally, we should learn to keep a positive and cheerful attitude towards our life. 【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（5）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。a warm welcomea boy quarreled with his parents and ran away from home. he had a hard life without any contact with his family for years. later he wanted to go home but he was afraid that his parents might not welcome him. finally he decided to send a letter to his father expressing his desire to return home and begging his pardon. in his letter he asked his father to tie a white ribbon on the tree near his house by the side of the railway lines if he was ready to welcome him back home. if he did not see the ribbon on the tree, he would think that his family did not welcome him and then he would leave them forever. he boarded the train and became very nervous as the train was about to pass by his home. to his surprise, the tree was fully decorated with hundreds of white ribbons which danced in the wind. his family did not want him to miss the sight of the ribbon and the welcome signal, so they covered the whole tree with ribbons to show their whole-hearted happiness and willingness to welcome him back.【写作内容】1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；2然后以约120个词谈谈你对“父爱如山”的看法，内容包括：(1)你读后的感受或感想；(2)你或他人感受父爱的事例；(3)你对“父爱如山”的理解。【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。_【参考范文】读写任务 (one possible version)a boy quarreled with his parents and left home. after years of hard life, he wrote a letter to his father, asking if he would welcome him back. in fact, his parents had been whole-heartedly expecting his return! i am deeply moved by the story. and it reminds me of my father. at my junior school, my father never showed his love to me, so i thought he did not love me and sometimes i was upset about it. however, when i left home for senior school, he called me frequently and just asked me, “hows your study and life? when will you come back?” gradually, i realized that he missed me although he would never say it out. indeed, fathers love is like a mountain. its heavy because they devote all their love to us and its silent because they do not know how to express it. faced with their love, we should accept it silently to show our appreciation.【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（6）】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 以下是你班“自然灾害”讨论会的记录汇总。【写作内容】 根据下面方框中的信息，为英语校报写篇报道。时间：三月九日，班会课与会人员：全班同学及班主任讨论内容1现象：十年来，水灾、地震、台风、海啸和森林火灾日益频繁。2危害：造成数百万人死亡，破坏了大片的肥沃土地。3原因：让人震惊的是，许多自然灾害是由人类行为引起的，人类过多地砍伐森林树木、 严重污染环境，导致气候发生了巨大变化。4建议：地球是我们的家园，我们应该尽力保护它，使它成为适合于我们生活的好地方。【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 (one possible version) on 9th, march, we had a heated discussion