山西省霍州市高考英语书面表达训练及参考范文（4）.doc

山西省霍州市2014高考英语书面表达训练（4）及参考范文【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（3）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。helping others can really make a difference to your own life. youre always busy living your own life, but every now and then, take a break for a bit and help someone out. you will not regret doing this. here are a few easy ideas how you can help others: spend some time with one of your elderly relatives or neighbors. help them clean up around the house or take them to a grocery store. just sit with them and have a little chat, because sometimes the smallest acts mean the most. teach a friend or a relative how to use a computer or get on the internet: how to start a blog, how to upload photos to a drugstores website so they can be printed out, how to use an ipod and add music to itunes. its probably stuff you write about on your own blog anyway, so talk about it instead of writing about it, which will help you learn how to explain things verbally. donate clothes that you no longer wear or other things that youre no longer using. someone out there will benefit from the stuff you dont need any more.【写作内容】1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词谈谈你对“助人为乐”的看法，内容包括：(1)阅读上文后你的感想；(2)以实例说明你的观点；(3)你对“帮助别人，快乐自己”的体会或评价。【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。_ 【参考范文】读写任务 (one possible version)the passage advises us to find some time to help others, such as doing the chores for our friends and relatives or teaching them how to use a computer. these little acts will improve their lives, as well as ours.for society as a whole, it is worth spending time doing charity work. and i think that what matters most is not how much we offer to people in need, but whether we are willing to give them a hand. sometimes, a little help can make a big difference. i once helped an old woman fix her mosquito net. she said to me gently, “thank you, little girl.” it didnt seem like a big thing, but i was shocked when i was told that the old woman never spoke a word after her only son committed suicide twenty years ago. as an old chinese saying goes, “the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose.” happiness lies in giving help to others.【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（2）】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 以下是一场关于学生十八岁成人礼报道的主要内容。【写作内容】 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯。时间2013年5月4日，五四青年节活动地点与参加人员你校体育馆，高三全体学生倡议的责任与要求对自己负责：已长大，不是小孩；对家庭负责：感恩父母，因为他们艰辛地把我们抚养大；对社会负责：身为社会一份子。意义让学生懂得成人后承担的责任更重；在做决定的时候要考虑周全成人礼growing-up ceremony; 五四青年节chinese youth day【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作(one possible version)on chinese youth day, may 4th, 2013, a growing-up ceremony was held in our school gym to help us recognize our duty for ourselves, our families and the society. taking part in the ceremony, we senior three students realize that we are grown-ups rather than children. therefore, it is important to show our appreciation for our parents who have gone through hardships to bring us up. furthermore, as a member of society, we must fulfill our duty to our country. in a word, as adults, we have more responsibilities on our shoulders and should take more into consideration when making decisions. 【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学三模试题】读写任务 (共25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。as we all know, life is full of dreams and having a good dream is of great importance in our daily life. without a good dream, people cant make progress; without a good dream, countries cant develop; without a good dream, the world cant become so beautiful! and i hold the strong belief that everyone, whether he is old or young, poor or rich, junior or senior, does have a good dream! after all, dreaming is certainly a positive part of our life, and wishing for good things, however, costs nothing!whats more, it is important to fly our dreams, especially for those who are senior 3 students. it is high time for them to fly their dreams. if they cant let their dreams fly, the dream would just die!therefore, it is no wonder that so many people have a dream since their childhood. with a nice dream, china succeeded to host the 29th olympic games in 2008; with a nice dream, hong kong returned to the motherland peacefully in 1997; with a nice dream, yuan longping rids the world of hunger; with a nice dream, michael jordon becomes the most popular basketball star; with a nice dream i can stand on this stage to compete in the final english speech contest. and with an aim of achieving success, i must do the best!so my good friends, if you want to realize your dream, please do not be afraid in face of difficulties or give up in face of failure nor lose your dream in face of pains. you must keep going forward bravely! just fly your dream highly above the sky!【写作内容】 1. 阅读短文后用30词左右概括短文的要点。2. 就“放飞梦想”为主题，以120词左右发表自己的看法，并包括以下内容要点：（1）列举自己或身边现实生活中中学生梦想成真的一件事例；（2）结合自己的实际，谈谈你现在的梦想，并说明打算如何实现。【写作要求】 1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】one possible version:dreams play an important role in our daily life and a good dream is the motivation to success. to realize a dream, one should learn to defeat difficulties through constant struggles as well as persistence.it is a dream that enables one to do better in life. like most classmates, there was a time when i dreamed of being an excellent student in english after entering junior middle school, though my english was very poor then. to catch up with my classmates, i made up my mind to learn english well and made pen-friends with some foreign students so as to practise my spoken english and improve my written english. although some of my classmates often went to the movies in the evening, seldom did i take part in such activities. instead, i set aside to concentrate on my english and won the final english speech contest around the city this term, realizing my dream.at present, i also have another dream. as a senior 3 student, i hope that i can be admitted to a key university after graduation from middle school. of course, whether my dream will come true depends largely on my personal efforts. although life is full of ups and downs, i choose to go forward bravely. i strongly believe that where there is a dream, there is hope and there is a way.【广东省2012届高三考前冲刺卷(六)】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)写作内容人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以此为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。1独立完成：自行安排，自己解决问题；2合作完成：一起讨论，相互学习；3我喜欢的方式及理由。写作要求1只能使用5个句子表达全部所给内容；2将5个句子组成连贯的短文；3开头已经给出但不计入总句数。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，语篇连贯。working individually or working in a teamthere are basically two ways to get work done.one is to work individually._基础写作【参考范文】working individually or working in a teamthere are basically two ways to get work done.one is to work individually.in this way，people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it.whats more，they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.people may also choose to work in a team，where they can learn from each other and help each other.besides，they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.personally，i prefer to work in a team，which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.高中英语书面表达中的高级结构英语书面表达在高考中日益显得重要，高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清楚，把意思表达完整，而是要给我们的句子润色，让我们的句子靓起来。如何让我们的英语句子靓起来呢？很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平。但这种方法需要一定的积累，也 需要一定的基础。而我觉得通过对低级句型的改造，可以迅速达到这一目的。强调句：可以将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。it was not until i arrived home that i realized i had left the bag on the shop counter. it was then that i realized the importance of english. 倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。only when i turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me. only by this means can he escape from the big fire. with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with结构。with the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, i went to school in high spirits he always likes to sleep with the windows open. 巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。hearing that, the drivers wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (=when he heard that, ) 恰到好处的被动句：适合应用于较简短的句子，这样显得语言简洁生动，宾语一般是 nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。i searched all my pockets, but nothing was found.感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“i feel ”之类表达感情的句子皆可 如此改造。how terrible i felt today! i failed again in the math exam. 高级定语从句：若定语从句中的动词带有介词，只需将介词移至先行词后。we came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before. 进行时态：有时会含有一定情绪，尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。i am always feeling terrible when i take a bus. 婉转表达：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫画型作文题。i coul