山西省黎城县高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精选（3）.doc

山西黎城县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精选（3）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。well never forget the day which my classmates and i paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. it was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers.it looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers，grass and trees anywhere.we also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. we talked with them and learned a lot.we understood them farther.on the way home we felt tiring. we all thought that we have a very good day.we really hoped that we could get more chances of leave school and learn social experience.答案：well never forget the day my classmates and i paid a visit to a factory last week.it was a one with nearly 2,000 workers.it looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers，grass and trees .we also visited some workshops and saw workers very hard.we talked with them and learned a lot.we understood them .on the way home we felt .we all thought that we a very good day.we really hoped that we could get more chances leave school and learn social experience.短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。some people prefer to living in a city rather than in a country.there are several reasons.firstly，a city can provide more opportunity to people who want to realize their dreams.secondly，the city life，that offers people tall buildings，huge departments and another facilities，attracted millions of people.thirdly，leading a city life means living in comfort.under the help of buses and subways，people find life there much easily.this is why more and more people choose to live in a city.答案：some people prefer to in a city rather than in country.there are several reasons.firstly，a city can provide more people who want to realize their dreams.secondly，the city life， offers people tall buildings，huge departments and facilities， millions of people.thirdly，leading a city life means living in comfort. the help of buses and subways，people find life there much . is why more and more people choose to live in a city.模拟短文改错qwhen people think about precious things, they usuallythink about money or jewelry. i am not very rich, and i have1._ something very preciously in my room. its not a cd player or2. _ a cellphone. its the view from my window. im lucky live3. _ near a park. my window faces with the tops of the trees in4. _ the park. below the tree i can see children on the playground,5. _ young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and6. _ old people sitting on the beach. the whole world is before7. _ their eyes. my classmates like to go online or listen to music,8. _ but when i have a free time, i just sit on the chair and9. _ enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view.10. _ 【参考答案及解析】1. and but考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处表转折用but。2. preciously precious考查形容词的用法。修饰不定代词用形容词且放在其后。3. lucky后加to考查形容词的用法。此处考查短语be lucky to do sth。4. 去with考查介词的用法。此处face是及物动词，故不用介词with。5. tree trees考查名词的单复数。根据语境应为多棵树。6. walked walking考查现在分词作宾补。此处考查see sb doing sth。7. 正确 经分析本句8. their my考查代词指代一致。根据文意应为“在我眼前”。9. 去a 考查冠词的用法。解题关键：free time是不可数名词，其前不能用a。10. enjoyed enjoy考查动词时态。根据语境应为一般现在时。【由陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟考试改编】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 my cousin tim is pupil. he is clever, and he is very naughty.today he fails in his math and english exam. getting his report,he was deep worried. his poor report was required to be signed by his fatherat home. on the way to home an idea appeared on his mind. he found his fatherwas reading a newspaper before he got home. tim said to his father jokingly,“dad, can you write your name with all of your eyes shut?” his father replied. “of course not, my dear.” and his father did so. tim was satisfied with the report already signed by his father.【答案】9.all改为both 一个人只有两只眼睛，两者都要使用“both”。10.去掉not 根据下句：tim was satisfiedwith the report already signed by his father.可知他的父亲同意了，所以使用肯定的形式。考点：考察短文改错【由陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟试题改编】短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，瀚你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个翻词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1、每处锗误及修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。on the childrens day last year, our city held an interested activity. in theactivity children and their parents act as the rich and the poor. in the dinner, the richcould have delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge. parents allhoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. they hoped that our childrencould taught a lesson from the dinner. now many people on the earth dont have enoughfood and clothes. every day only one half the world can enjoy enough food. the activitywas held make the families understand the differences between the poor and the rich andalso make the parents know that too much material life wont always do good for the children.【参考答案】短文改错on the childrens day last year, our city held an interested activity. in the the interestingactivity children and their parents act as the rich and the poor. in the dinner, the richacted could have delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge. parents allbreadhoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. they hoped that our children theircouldtaught a lesson from the dinner. now many people on the earth dont have en