高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（28）参考范文 英语写作引导句型（10）.doc

2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（28）及参考范文：英语写作引导句型（10）28 perhapsmaybe we shouldit is time to rethinkreexaminehave a fresh look at the ideavalueattitudewisdomdesirability that .*结束8, iii 写作（共两节，满分40分）基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）近年来，我国校车安全事故频发，引发社会强烈关注与反思。请根据以下提示，写一篇有关我国校车安全情况的文章，向21st century英文报投稿。事故回放2011年11月16日上午，甘肃省庆阳市，一辆严重超载的幼儿园校车与大卡车相撞，造成包括司机、1名老师以及19名幼儿在内的21人死亡。社会影响人们感到震惊和痛心，担心事故重演，呼吁政府采取行动。政府措施国务院于2012年4月5日颁布校车安全管理条例，并要求在各地施行。决策意义体现了对生命的关爱，有助于稳定社会。【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯参考词汇：国务院 the state council； 校车安全管理条例 school bus safety regulations第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词的英语短文。the elephant and the flya disciple(信徒), who was disturbed by the fact that his mind was in constant unrest, asked his teacher, “why are most peoples minds restless? what can one do to still the mind?” the teacher looked at the disciple, smiled and told him a story: an elephant was standing and picking leaves from a tree. a small fly came，flying and buzzing(嗡嗡叫) near his ear. the elephant waved it away with his long ears. then the fly came again, and the elephant waved it away once more. this was repeated several times. then the elephant asked the fly, “why are you so restless and noisy? why cant you stay for a while in one place? ”the fly answered, “i am attracted to whatever i see, hear or smell. my five senses pull me constantly in all directions and i cannot resist themwhat is your secret? how can you stay so calm and still?”the elephant stopped eating and said, “my five senses do not rule my attention. whatever i do, i get immersed in it. now that i am eating, i am completely absorbed in eating. in this way i can enjoy my food and chew it better. i rule and control my attention, and not the other way around.” upon hearing these words, a smile appeared on the disciples face, “i understand! if my five senses are in control of my mind and attention, then my mind is in constant unrest. if i am in charge of my five senses and attention, then my mind becomes calm.” 【写作内容】 以约30个词概括短文的内容；然后以约120个词就“专注”这一主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点：大象和苍蝇的故事给你的启示；讲述你（或你朋友）因为太多干扰而受到影响的经历；你认为怎样才能保持专注、专心。【写作要求】 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或者虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 iii 写作第一节 基础写作a possible version:the morning of november 16th, 2011 witnessed a disastrous car accident in qingyang, gansu province. a kindergarten school bus, which was seriously overloaded, crashed into a big truck, causing 21 deaths, including 19 kids，a school teacher and the driver himself. shocked and sad at the news, people feared that accidents like this would happen again and thus called for the government to take immediate action. to peoples relief, the state council officially issued the school bus safety regulations on april 5th, 2012 and ordered the act should be put into effect in all places. the act not only reveals the governments great concern about peoples lives, but also helps create a more stable society.第二节 读写任务possible version： an elephant told a restless fly that being absorbed in doing things helped him stay still. after hearing the story from his teacher, the disciple realized that only by controlling his senses can he obtain calmness. (36 words)after reading the story, i was inspired by what the elephant said. the ability to focus your attention is the key to your success in doing anything. just like the fly, a person who is easily distracted by the surroundings will feel restless and tired, unable to achieve his success. this reminds me of what happened when i entered high school as a senior one student. i was so excited to find that there were various student organizations and after-class activities intended for us students. it seemed that many groups were suitable to me. during the first term, i was attracted whenever there was a notice from a student group and i was eager to find out more about it. as a result, i didnt spend enough time on my studies, nor could i settle down on my homework every day. consequently, i failed in an important exam. i have learned a lesson from this experience that one should focus on one thing at a time before he can get it well done. to do so, we should put what we are doing in the first place and keep it up without being interfered by other events. only when we have a clear and determined mind can we accomplish something in the end.*结束28.1 perhaps we should rethink an idea fast becoming an undisputed premise of our life that a college degree is necessary - and perhaps even a sufficient - precondition for success. i do not wish to quarrel with the assumptions made about the benefits of orthodox education. i want only to expose its false god; the four-year, all-purpose, degree-granting college, aimed at the so-called college-age population and by now almost universally accepted as the stepping-stone to meaningful and better jobs.可能我们应当重新考虑一下这个很快成为我们生活毋庸置疑的前提：对成功来说，大学文凭是必要的，或许是先决的条件。我不想反对正统的大学教育带来种种好处的观点。我只想揭示把大学文凭捧上天的虚假性：对象是所谓读大学的适龄青年，目的是培养各种人材的颁发学位的四年制大学现已差不多被公认为是找到有意义的”、“好的”工作的跳板。28.2 maybe it is time to reexamine our present values of life and try to figure out why life today becomes so difficult, and what can be done about it. not only are things often not what they seem, they may be just the opposite of what they seen. people are discontented these days, for example, not because things are worse than ever, but because things are better than ever. everything is paradoxical.也许现在该是重新检查一下我们现在生活流行的价值观，弄清楚今天的生活为何变得如此艰难，以及该用什么办法加以解决的时候了。现在的事情常常不仅不是它们看上去的那样，事情可能正好与看上去的相反。譬如说，如今人们的不满往往不是因为情况比以往任何时候都糟，而是因为情况从未这么好过。一切事情都变得似是而非了。29 now people in growingincreasingsignificant numbers are beginningcoming to realizerecognizeunderstandacceptbe aware that.29.1 now people in growing numbers are coming to recognize that the business spirit, which carries in its torrential course so many of the talents and energies of men into money-making, has shaped our culture and influenced our ideals and aspirations as a people.现在越来越多的人开始认识到这股下海从商的浪潮把许多人卷进去，使他们把自己的才干和精力都耗在赚钱上。这个重商的风气改变了我们的文化，影响了作为一个民族的我们的理想和抱负。29.2