广东省德庆县孔子中学高中英语论文《针对读写任务写作指导过程的材料》.doc

广东省德庆县孔子中学高中英语论文针对读写任务写作指导过程的材料现今英语高考试题里的读写任务有概括所读文章及发表看法写作的要求。根据这个写作要求编排了一个写作指导。通过课堂上教师的简单指导，和学生的阅读实践取得了良好的效果，所以整理如下，以供参考。本材料分成三部分，分别为读前知识准备，概要的形成过程和文章的分析及参考翻译。（一）读前知识准备：（二）概要的形成过程：（阅读文段1）in order to reduce rush-hour traffic and pollution, the traffic control drill in guangzhou, which limits cars from driving on certain days based on the whether the last number of their license plate is even(偶数) or odd（奇数）, will take place every day from 7:00 to 22:00, july 17th to 20th. 提取出来的句子：the traffic control drill in guangzhou will take place from 7:00 to 22:00, july 17th to 20th. 参考句子：guangzhou will start a traffic control drill from 17 to 20, july. 提取出来的句子：cars will be limited from driving on certain days according to the license plate numbers. ( the last number of the license plate)参考句子：the traffic control will stop cars running on road on some days. （阅读文段2）-it will be effective for the entire city. -those who do not comply with traffic control will be fined of 200 rmb and a deduction(扣除) of 3 points from their driving record. -those vehicles that are not driven away within 30 minutes of being ticketed are punishable with another ticket. -eight special classes of vehicles are exempt(免除) from the traffic control. 提取出来的句子：the drivers who do not comply it will be fined.参考句子：the drivers who dont obey it will get punished.小结对比：提取出来的句子：the news tells us that the traffic control drill in guangzhou will take place from 7:00 to 22:00, july 17th to 20th. cars will be limited from driving on certain days according to the license plate numbers. the drivers who do not comply it will be fined.参考句子：the news tells us that guangzhou will start a traffic control drill from 17 to 20, july. the drivers who dont obey it will get punished. the traffic control will stop cars running on road on some days. （三）文章的分析及参考翻译：拆分：-more and more cars are used.-the traffic especially in big cities is getting heavier and heavier. （especially in big cities ）-it leads to the serious social problem-traffic jam.（原文2）it has a negative influence on peoples daily life and economic development.它对于人们的日常生活和经济发展有着消极的影响。（补充的内容-注意用完整的句子来表达）6peoples daily life-be late for school or work-waste time and money-bring people bad mood -pollute the air -make much noisy noise-bring troubles to many peopleeconomic development-affect the progress of the business-lead to the loss of money-（原文3）in order to solve the problem of heavy traffic, we should take some effective measures . 为了解决繁重的交通问题，我们应该采取一些有效的措施。表示措施，怎样做：1.我们要采取一些有效的措施。2.我们应该做些什么来解决这个问题？3.我们将尽最大努力来克服这些困难。4.我们要做的事情如下。参考：1.we should take some effective measures.2.what should we do to solve the problem?3.well try our best to overcome these difficulties.拆分：-more new roads should be constructed.-the old and narrow streets should be widened and expanded.-it can partly reduce traffic and speed up the flow of buses and cars.（原文5）whats more, our government should increase public transportation. more bus routes should be opened up because buses can carry more passengers. 此外，我们的政府应该增强交通运输。更多的公交线路应该被开通，因为公车可以搭载更多的乘客。（原文6）last but not least, it is necessary for us to ride bikes instead of taking a bus or taxi because it is not only a reasonable way for people to reduce the traffic jams but also a good way for people to keep fit by cycling and to from their working place two times a day. 最后但同样重要的是，我们有必要骑单车来代替坐公交或的士，因为这不仅是减少交通阻塞的合理的方式，也是一个让人们通过骑车上班来健身的好方法。拆分：- it is necessary for us to ride bikes instead of taking a bus or taxi.- it is a reasonable way for people to reduce the traffic jams.- it is a good way for people to keep fit by cycling and to from their working place two times a day.根据本材料，教师可以在课堂上有效地指导学生写作。教师也可以根据内容增减指导内容以适应学生的学习要求。学生也可在教师的指导下学习或自主学习。附：孔子中学2012-2013学年度高二第一学期第一次月考试题 读写任务部分题目要求阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。guangzhou to carry out traffic controls july 17-20in order to reduce rush-hour traffic and pollution, the traffic control drill in guangzhou, which limits cars from driving on certain days based on the whether the last number of their license plate is even or odd, will take place every day from 7:00 to 22:00, july 17th to 20th. it will be effective for the entire city. those who do not comply with traffic control will be fined of 200 rmb and a deduction(扣除) of 3 points from their driving record. those vehicles that are not driven away within 30 minutes of being ticketed are punishable with another ticket.