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年级初三教师刘铭教材版本仁爱版学生课次日期2014.4.20课文标题初三复习专题：短文填词，作文短文填词 （一）When I came out of my office, it was dark. In order to get home as soon as p_1_, I took a taxi. The car was flying along the road, but later it was in a traffic jam in darkness. I broke the silence for fear that the driver might be too tired to drive. “_2_ do you go back home in the evenings?” “Nine oclock. Ill go home after this trip.” “Then when do you come out in the mornings?” I threw out a_ 3_ question. “Nine oclock, too. And I go home for lunch and dinner, just as if I worked at an office.” I was s_4_at his words , because every time I ride in a taxi, what I hear from the driver is only complaints. They complain that they have to work from morning till night, that it is hard to earn money, that they are bullied by the police, or that the leaders enjoy the fruits of their work. It seems they are not satisfied with everything. But this driver told me, “I find it tiring to be a section chief as I was before. I dont like management work. I like driving, just out of pleasure. Its lucky that I seldom drive without a _5_(乘客). So I can earn three or four thousand yuan a month easily. Any trick? Yes, I never follow an e_6_taxi. If it goes southward, I go northward. If it goes along the highway, I turn into a narrow street. In this way I _7_(总是） get customers.”His words showed his satisfaction with his life and the pride he took in his job. Such feelings are so rare a_8_ people nowadays just as oxygen in high mountains. How many people nowadays can show high ideals by _9_(简单的)living and go with a calm mind? I couldnt _ 10_ feeling moved when I found such a state of mind in a stranger on a cold winter night.（二） Once my mother told me a story. In Africa, when an antelope wakes up every morning, the first thing it thinks about is, “ I must be able to run faster than the fastest lion, or I will be killed. ” At the same time, a lion wakes from his dream. The first thing the lion thinks about is, “I must be able to catch the slowest antelope, or I will die of hunger.” So, _1_(几乎) at the same time, the antelope and the lion get up and start running toward the rising sun. This is life: _2_ of chances and challenge. Whether you are an antelope or a lion, you must go a_3_ when the sun rises. For students, it is just the same. If we do not study hard, sooner or later, we will fall b_4_ the other students. At first, I did not know what the word “exam” meant. Later I knew an exam was a kind of competition. In competitions, there are always _5_ and losers. As I grew up, I got to know competition well. In ones life, there must be competitions, so people can improve. Each time I saw children playing games and _6_(听见） their laughter, I wished I were that age again. However, I remembered my parents words: “You must work very hard in order to have a good _7_( fjt).” So I picked up my pen and began to study hard again. I was still not sure what competition really meant. One day, I was taking _8_ in an English-speaking competition. When I went to the stage, I saw other students looking at me kindly. I _9_( sdnli ) knew what competition was. It is not as cruel as my teacher and parents told me. In fact, competition is the opposite: it is kind and _10_ness()r. I learned a lot from realizing this fact. Now Iunderstand more about the world. Competition is important for us all.(三)It is difficult to _1_(想象) what the world was like in 1254. Europe was living in an age that we call the Medieval Period (中世纪). It was a time of many wars. It was in that time that Marco Polo was born in Venice, Italy. Life in Venice was d_2_ from life in most of Europe. Venice was a city of beautiful buildings and water canals. Many businessmen did business in Venice. Marco Polos father and uncle were businessmen. They had traveled to a far-off country called Cathay. (Cathay is now called China.) There they had friends with the great ruler, Kublai Khan(忽必烈). He _3_（邀请） them to return to Cathay. When Marco Polo was seventeen years old, he began a journey to China with his father and uncle. They sailed the Indian Ocean and crossed the desert and mountains of Asia on camels. The journey to China took three years. Kublai Khan greeted the Polos and sent them lots of gifts. He was _4_ spli impressed with Marco, who could speak four _5_ including Chinese and others. Khan sent Marco on many trips through China. On these trips, Marco saw many amazing things that he had never seen in Europe, such as coal used as fuel, paper money _6_of coins, and papermaking and printing processes. Marco made many notes about life in China. After almost twenty years in China, the Polos began their journey home to Italy. Kublai Khan gave them many gifts of ivory, silk, jewels, and jade. W_7_ they returned to Venice, they found their city at war. Marco Polo was put in prison. He spent his time w_8_a book about his years in China. The book is _9_(叫做) Descriptions of the World. It became the most _10_ ppjl book in Europe. Because of the book, many people in Europe learned about life in China.作文讲解【2013湖北随州】随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过低碳生活。请写一篇英语短文，倡议你的同学们加入低碳一族。要点如下：1. 节约用水、用电、用纸；2. 去超市自备购物袋；3. 不要购买不必要的衣服；4. 不要购买一次性的杯子和碗筷；5. 步行或骑自行车上学。注意：1. 词数80词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。） 2. 可适当增加细节，以行文连贯。With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases. _Lets take action and be a low-carbon people!【范文】With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases. Wed better save much water and paper and electricity. We should use less carbon and oil. Its important to turn off the lights, and computers when leave room. We should take our own bags in shopping instead of using plastic bags from supermarket. We can buy few clothes which are unnecessary. We shouldnt buy or use oneoff cups or chopsticks or bowls. Its good for us to walk or take bikes to school instead of taking cars. We can also plant more trees to change air around us.Lets take action and be a lowcarbon people!【2013广东梅州】八、书面表达。（本题共15分）我国不少城市正在推广公共自行车，提倡人们“绿色出行，低碳生活”。现在某英文网站就此话题正文，请你参考下面的短文内容（不得照搬），再根据短文后面的内容要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈推广公共自行车的好处。Nowadays, it is very important for us to live a lowcarbon life. The first thing we can do is riding bikes instead of driving cars. First, bikes are much cheaper than cars and everyone can afford it. Second, its easier to find the parking places for bikes. Third, the petrol (汽油) is not necessary for bikes , so bikes wont produce the dirty air to make pollution to our environment. Finally, we can ride bikes to keep fit. Lets ride bikes instead of driving cars to protect the environment!内容要点：1、 首先，骑自行车出行方便，可以随时租还。（rent and return）2、 其次，众所周知（as we know），在上学、上班时段交通特别繁忙。（heavy traffic）如果有更多的人选择自行车，街道上就会有更少的汽车，也不会那么拥挤；3、 最重要的是，骑自行车几乎不会带来污染，有助于保护环境。要求：1、短文必须包括所肉内容要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2、80词左右，开头和结尾一给出，不计入总次数。 Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think its a good thing. _ I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a lowcarbon life.【范文】Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think a its good thing. To live a lowcarbon life, we should call on people to ride bikes instead of driving cars. First, bikes are much more convenient than cars and everyone can rent and return them. Second, as we know, theres usually a heavy traffic when we are on the way to school or work. If fewer people ride bikes then there are fewer cars on the road, and there wont be too crowded. Third, its the most important that riding bikes wont produce the dirty air to make pollution to our environment. Lets ride bikes instead of driving cars to protect the environment! And I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a lowcarbon life.【2013四川南充】第三节：书面表达（满分10分）“南充是我家，文明靠大家！”作为中学生，文明应积极参与文明城市(civilized city)的建设。 请根据以下提