江苏省常熟市高考英语书面表达冲刺训练3(1).doc

江苏省常熟市2014高考英语书面表达训练【广东省六校第二次联考】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。around twenty years ago i was living in seattle and going through hard times. with rich experience and a masters degree, to my shame, i could only drive a school bus to make ends meet.later that afternoon, i dropped off a little girl in a quiet suburban neighborhood. as she passed she handed me an earring, saying i should keep it in case somebody claimed it. the earring was painted black and said be happy. it hit me. i had been putting all of my energies into what was wrong with my life rather than what was right! i decided then and there to make a list of 50 things i was grateful for. at first it was hard, then it got easier. one day i decided to up it to 75. my life was completely changed. i know that it was because i changed my attitude to gratitude, which is the key to happiness. i spent the next year conducting training workshops all around the seattle area and then decided to risk everything and go back to scotland where i had lived previously. i closed my one man business, bought a plane ticket and got a six month visa. one month later i met my wonderful english wife and best friend of 15 years now. we live in a small beautiful cottage, two miles from a paved road in the highlands of scotland. 【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括以上短文的主要内容；2. 然后以约120个词就“幸福”话题写一篇短文，内容包括：(1) 请讲述一件你经历过的幸福的事情；(2) 简述你对幸福的理解。【写作要求】1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）概括应该包括以下要点：1、作者一直觉得生活不顺利；2、女孩给他earring，让他等失主；3、他意识到：对生活心存感激才会享受到幸福。one possible version:being a school bus driver, the author has been feeling unsatisfied with his life until the girl gave him the “be happy” earring, which was waiting for its owner. he learned that being grateful will lead to happiness. (37)actually, i experienced great happiness last weekend when my parents came from home to meet me for a dinner. with heavy schoolwork in senior three, i have been staying in school for nearly one month, just talking to my parents on the phone occasionally. last weekend, i almost cried saying i missed them so much and they promised to see me at weekend. when the bell rang, i rushed to the school gate where i knew my parents were waiting for me. we had a big hug and hand in hand walked into a restaurant nearby for dinner. we ate chatting and laughing, greatly relieving my anxiety. i was the luckiest and happiest girl at that time. thank you! love you both, mum and dad! in my opinion, being grateful is absolutely the road leading to happiness. i thank my parents for their bringing me up and driving a long way to see me from home. i enjoyed the happiness of staying with them. as to the author, he didnt sense the fragrance of happiness until he changed his attitude and was grateful to his existing life. so, be grateful before enjoying your happiness! 【北京市丰台区2014统一模拟】第二节 情景作文(20分) 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，下面四幅图描述了你们家上周收留流浪狗的真实故事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。注意：1. 文章的开头已为你写好。 2. 词数不少于60。last friday， 第二节 情景作文(20分)一、评分原则： 1. 本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。 4. 拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5. 词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。二、内容要点：1. 发现流浪狗并带回家2. 给小狗喂食、洗澡3. 讨论是否留下小狗4. 遛狗、和小狗玩耍三、各档次的给分范围和要求：第一档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇；语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；体现了较强的语言运用能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯、结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。18分20分第二档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点：运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求；语法和用词基本准确，少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。15分17分第三档基本完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了内容要点：运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求；语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。12分14分第四档未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容；所用句式和词汇有限；语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。6分11分第五档未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容；句式单调、词汇贫乏；语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。1分5分0分未能传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。四、possible versions:possible version 1:last friday, on the way home from school, i found a dirty puppy dog lying beside the dustbin. he was so weak that he couldnt open his eyes. i felt sorry for the puppy and carried him home immediately. after feeding him food and milk, i gave him a shower. i was so glad to see the dog recover. he was so lovely and i wanted to keep him. after discussing the situation with my parents, i decided to adopt him. today the dog has become part of our family. we walk him in the park, play with him and take good care of him. he brings us happiness and keeps us company.(111 words)possible version 2: last friday, a chance encounter changed me and my familys life greatly. after school, i was about to enter my apartment building when a little dirty dog, lying beside the dustbin, caught my eye. he looked extremely weak. immediately the homeless dog filled me with sympathy. so i bent down and held him in my arms. i rushed him upstairs and right away fixed him some food. then, i gave him a bath. after the bath he looked energetic and refreshed. what a lovely dog! when my parents got home, i asked if i could keep the dog. to my surprise and happiness, they agreed. from that day, he has become a member of our family. everyone has enjoyed his company. my parents walk him often. he and i play joyfully. looking at the cute, happy dog today. i realize that i did the fight thing. i brought him to a warm, loving home and he has brought us great happiness and laughter. (161 words)【高考英语广东省潮州市二模】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分) 你接受了一项写作任务，要为学校英语报写一篇介绍祖国名胜的文章。【写作内容】请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇庐山国家公园的简介。景点名称庐山国家公园地理概况地处江西省北部，总面积302平方公里历史文化庐山是中国古代教育和宗教中心；自东晋以来，诗人们关于庐山的诗有4000余首；1996年12月被评为“世界文化景观”自然风光云海、瀑布、绝壁开放时间一年四季到庐山旅游都能欣赏到优美的风景，最佳为夏季【写作要求】1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【参考词汇】世界文化景观 world heritage centre-cultural landscape ；绝壁cliff；东晋east jin dynasty【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） one possible version.lushan national park, covering an area of 302 square kilo metres, is located in the north of jiangxi province. as an ancient educational and religious center, lushan was awarded world heritage centre-cultural landscape in december, 1996. it is said that over 4000 poems have been written about lushan mountain since east jin dynasty. not only is it famous for its culture, but also it attracts tourists for its seas of clouds, waterfalls, cliffs and so on. when it comes to the best time to travel there, its summer, but you can enjoy beautiful scenery all the year round.【2013高考英语广东省潮州市二模】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。never put off until tomorrow what you can do todaywe have been told never to put off until tomorrow what you can do today since childhood. however, there are still many people who like putting off the things that they should do today until tomorrow. they have no plans for their work and their time. as a result, they will not accomplish their goals in the end.for example, one sunday i felt so tired after having a football match that i did not finish my homework even at night. i thought i could get up earlier to go to school the next morning so that i could finish my homework before class. but the next morning, i was not able to get to school in time because of the traffic jam. i was punished by the teacher. it taught me a lesson. from then on i made a determination that i would never put off anything important until the next day.please remember: work today, for you dont know how much you may be hindered tomorrow. seize the present day, cherish every minute you have now and trust the tomorrow as little as possible.【写作内容】1以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120词对“今日事今日毕”展开议论，内容包括：(1) 你读了本篇文章后，有什么感想；(2) 谈谈你对“今日事今日毕”的看法；(3) 你平时是怎样合理安排时间，及时完成老师布置的任务的。【写作要求】 1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） the author tries to tell us with his example that we should never put off until tomorrow what you can do today, as you never know what would happen tomorrow.as the saying goes, “time and tide wait for no man.” if you put off what you should do today, your tomorrow would be in a mess. what a shame it is to think of myself in the past! many times, i put