江西省奉化市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错基础训练（6）.doc

浙江奉化市2016高考英语短文改错基础训练（6）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear lucy，thanks for your letter. i might get use to the life in american gradually. food here remains the same all day and the school here is more relaxed though i take 2 ap courses and have to catch up with half years courses. all the books are in english and i have to write many articles, that might seem difficult. much more worse, i find out my oral english retrograde (倒退的). i have been out of my school only once, and i guess there are a lot of differences. there are some funny clubs, and i participate the basketball club in this semester. its amazing. by the way, thank you and all the other classmates in china for making souvenirs (纪念品) for myself. send it to me when you all finish and i will be very happy.hope you will reply soon. yours，li hua【参考答案】：dear lucy，thanks for your letter. i might get to the life in gradually. food here remains the same all day and the school here is more though i take 2 ap courses and have to catch up with half years courses. all the books are in english and i have to write many articles, might seem difficult. much more worse, i find out my oral english retrograde (倒退的). i have been out of my school only once, i guess there are a lot of differences. there are some funny clubs, and i participate the basketball club in this semester. its amazing. by the way, thank you and all the other classmates in china for making souvenirs (纪念品) for . send to me when you all finish and i will be very happy.hope you will reply soon. yours，li hua假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。one day，a blind man was sitting on street with a sign by his feet that read：“i am blind，please help me. ” a gentleman walked through and stopped to have a look at the sign，noticed only a few coin in the mans hat. he took out some bills from his wallet and put it into the hat. and then he turned the sign over again, wrote a new message and left. several hours later，the gentleman returned. to his happy, he found the hat almost full of bills and coins. he didnt expect that the new message does work，which read: “its spring now, and i cant see it.”【参考答案】3.1.on后加the 2.through-by 3.noticed-noticing 4.coincoins 5.itthem 6.去掉again 7.happy-happiness 8.hat后加was 9.doesdid 10.and -but短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。most families in china hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. so do teachers in schools! many children are given such much homework that they have hardly any spare time to have sports. the children are forbidden to do anything but to study. no wonder so many children are tiring of lessons. some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! i believe many people already read this kind of news in newspaper or magazines. shouldnt we draw a lesson from the cases? now our government is carried out a plan to solve the education problems.【参考答案】：most families in china their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict their children. so teachers in schools! many children are given much homework that they have hardly any spare time to have sports. the children are forbidden to do anything but to study. no wonder so many children are of lessons. some even attack or kill parents and teachers! i believe many people already read this kind of news in or magazines. shouldnt we draw a lesson from the cases? now ourgovernment is out a plan to solve the education problems.短文改错。下面文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。yesterday i showed to my friend peter around beijing citywe started off at 8： 00 amfirst we went to the forbidden city, which was one of the most popular tourist spot in beijingthen we visited the history museumwe observed a lot of valuable things in them and we learned a lot about chinese historyafter a quick meal, we went to beihai parkupon arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful sceneswe spent a whole afternoon appreciated the wonderit was until 18： 00 pmthat we went backwe did have a wonderful timepeter was very pleased with my arrangement that he invited me to a new-built western restaurant to have a big meal【参考答案】4.yesterday i showed to my friend peter around beijing citywe started off at 8： 00 amfirst we went to the forbidden city, which was one of the most popular tourist isspot in beijingthen we visited the history museumwe observed a lot of valuable spotsthings in them and we learned a lot about chinese historyafter a quick meal, we went itto beihai parkupon arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful sceneswe spent a both thewhole afternoon appreciated the wonderit was until 18： 00 pmthat we went backappreciating notwe did have a wonderful timepeter was very pleased with my arrangement that he soinvited me to a new-built western restaurant to have a big mealnewly-built短文改错。英语课上,老师要求同桌相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。3必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。today i was having a pe lesson while i fell down and hurt my foot. i was in greatly pain at that moment, but i tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. though i had difficulty walk back to my classroom, i still didnt tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. as result, the hurt in my foot became worse. now i know i was wrong. we can tell others our need for help and accept his help. some day we can not help others in r