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图表作文型（真题范文）来源:星火教育网 作者:星火教育网 点击:565次Topic 1 2006年6月真题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Traveling Abroad. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.近十年来某城市越来越多Topic 1 2006年6月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Traveling Abroad. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:1.近十年来某城市越来越多的人选择出境旅游2.出现这种现象的原因3.这种现象可能产生的影响Traveling Abroad In recent years, people in growing numbers in city X are seeking to travel abroad. According to the above table, the past 10 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of people who traveled abroad from 10,000 to 120,000 between 1995 and 2005. To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with various reasons listed below. To begin with, as the development of economy, they are rich enough to afford traveling abroad. In addition, the convenience of communication makes them be easily accessible to all kinds of tourism information. Whats more, individuals today are expected and encouraged to go outside to widen their horizon and face the real world of globalization. In this way they hope to keep themselves informed of what is going on around the world. Beneficial as traveling abroad is, it may also bring about some negative effects. People may blindly adopt some unhealthy life style they see and experience in foreign countries. So we should learn to avoid the shortcomings of traveling abroad. (170词)“一句话”点评 毫无疑问，第一段的几个数据将吸引阅卷老师的眼球，同时使用了witness, sharp等好词和the past 10 years作主语的拟人修辞，将形成良好的第一印象。快捷构思 第一段：直接展现该段中心“近十年来某城市越来越多的人选择出境旅游”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示。 第二段：以模板句提出该段中心“出现这种现象的原因”，并用rich enough to afford traveling abroad, be easily accessible to all kinds of tourism information和expected and encouraged to go outside to widen their horizon and face the real world of globalization三个原因来支持段落中心。 第三段：模板句开始，引出段落中心“这种现象可能产生负面影响”，并接着细节化展现这种负面影响，但不做更深层次的展开。美丽词句 （1）seek to 积极寻找机会做 （2）be accessible to 可以获得（或接近） （还可以表达为 have/gain access to） （3）widen ones horizon 开阔某人的眼界 （4）keep themselves informed