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【备战2013】高考英语 5年高考真题精选与最新模拟 专题17 短文改错【2012高考真题精选】（2012课标全国卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。i learned early in life that i had to be more patient and little aggressive. from the time i was about four until i was about six, i destroyed each of my toy. i was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, i got angry and broke it. for a while parents bought me new toys. but before long they began to see which was happening. when i tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “thats it. no more toys to you.” my punishment lasted a year. meanwhile, i found out that with more patience i must make my toys to last. my attitude changed from then on.【解析】i learned early in life that i had to be more patient and littl aggressive. from the time i was about four until i was about six, i destroyed each of my to. i was happy when the toys worked, but when things di wrong, i got angry and broke i. for a while parents bought me new toys. but before long they began to see whic was happening. when i tea apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “thats it. no more toys t you.” my punishment lasted a year. meanwhile, i found out that with more patience i mus make my toys tolast. my attitude changed from then on.1. littleless考查副词的用法。根据句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。此处less修饰形容词。2. toytoys考查名词的单复数形式。根据each of 可知，应该是“我”的玩具中的每一个，故用复数形式toys。3. didwent或者did 后加go考查固定短语的表达法。解题关键：掌握短语go wrong意为：出错。9. mustcould/might考查情态动词。根据句意：拥有更多的耐心，“我”就可能使玩具使用得更久。10. 去掉last前的to考查不定式作宾语补足语。解题关键：make sb/sth do，此处make作“使”解，其后接不带to的不定式作宾补。（2012浙江卷）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。two years before, i traveled to brazil and i rented for a car. unfortunate, i had an accident and hit another car, and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. i called my parents, so i did not tell them what had happened. i knew that they will be worried about myself because i was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. therefore, i told them interested stories and how i was enjoying brazil. as a result, nobody knew truth. i still think that it was the right thing to do.【答案】two years befor， i traveled to brazil and i rented fora car. unfortunat， i had an accident and hit another car, and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two wee. i called my parents, s i did not tell them what had happened. i knew that they wil be worried about mysel because i was so farthe away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. therefore, i told them intereste stories and how i was enjoying brazil. as a result, nobody knew truth. i still think that it was the right thing to do.（2011陕西卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线(_)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。my father and i stayed at the south lake hotel for a week when we visit beijing last month. it is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.we lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath. what i liked best were the free highspeed internet connection in the room. i checked my email messages every day. i also shared for my friends many photos taking in beijing. the food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.it is such great hotel that i would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to beijing.it is such great hotel that i would recommend it to any friend of m who is going to beijing.8dishdishes由several修饰，名词应用复数。9such后加asuch修饰的hotel是可数名词单数，需加不定冠词a。10memine双重所有格的构成是“of 名词性物主代词或名词所有格”。（2012辽宁卷） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear diana，thank you for the lovely day we have with you. it was so kind for you to let us bring annes friend, gina. unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. there had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. in the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. in the car park here gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. they finally dropped gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.【解析】dear diana，thank you for the lovely day we hav with you. it was so kind fo you to let us bring annes friend, gina. unfortunat， the only problem was the journey home. there had been a terrible accident on the highway and, fo a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mil. in the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unles the road was clear. in the car park her gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. the finally dropped gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.【2012四川卷】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。dear mom，mothers day is coming.im sorry that i am abroad66_and cant send your flowers，so im writing to you.67_mom，i know i have never expressed my thank to you68_ before.but on today，at this special time，i just want to tell69_you loudly：i love you ，mom! thank you so much by not70_only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good71_person.thank you for all you had done for me. mom，though72_i may often say it, i do love you. nobody can take your73_part in my heart.whenever i am，i will always love you.74_hope you good health and much happiness every day!75_ your little girl， jennifer73. may后加not。考查句意衔接。句意为：妈妈，虽然我可能没有经常说，但我确实很爱你。74. whenever改为wherever。考查连词。根据句意：无论我在哪里，我总是爱你的。75. hope改为wish。考查动词辨析。动词hope后不能接双宾语，而wish可以，wish符合语境和语法规则。（2012全国卷）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。dear editor，im writing to tell you opinion about water saving.76._water is important. we, as well as animal, cannot live77._without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._without it. yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._many countries in the world find we dont have enough water.80._to deal with a problem, i think, we should first go all81._out to plant trees though trees will help save water. next, no82._drinking water should be left running. third, we should find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85._sincerely，li hua【解析】dear editor，im writing to tell youopinion about water saving.76._my_water is important. we, as well as animal,_cannot live77._animals_without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._nor_without it. yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._seems_many countries in the world find we dont have enough water.80._they_to deal with a problem, i think, we should first go all81._the/this/that_out to plant trees though trees will help save water. next, no82._because/since/as_drinking water should be left running. third, we should find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._used_water forkg3mm which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85._for_sincerely，li hua84. usingused根据后面的in washing可知是洗衣服用过的水，所以用used。85. 去掉forwhich指代water，作主语，不需要for。【2011高考真题精选】（2011全国卷）第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。dear george，its been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._back home. thank you very much for showing them around 77._your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. after 78. _we said goodbye to you, we went to washington dc., 79._where we stayed for three days. my brother was so much fond 80._of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81. _another couple of day. however, my father had to return to 82. _work on monday so we fly back last saturday afternoon. it 83. _was really a nice experience. if youd like to make trip to 84. _our city some day, i will be better than happy to be your guide. 85. _yours，mike79. 正确80. 去掉much“soadj”为结果状语从句，much多余。81. staying改为staybeg sb to do sth央求某人做某事。82. day改为dayscouple是复数，所以day加s。83. fly改为flew时态错误，前面使用的过去时，时态应该保持一致。84. 加amake a trip to去旅行。85. better改为moremore than非常。（2011全国卷）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。one of my unforgettable memory of my school in 76_xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. 77._i hold my lunchbox in my hand when i was going to 78_school.the smell from it was very good.since the lunch 79._bell finally rang，my friends and i met under a tall tree 80_and had our lunches.my best friend aigulie was used 81_to share her nangnang82._ cake in xinjiang.i like them very much.now aigulie and 83_ i study at different colleges or we can only see each other 84_ during the summer vacation.i think over her a lot and i miss 85_ the food and the good time we had together.【解析】76. memory memoriesone of后面的名词要用复数形式。77. lunches前加thelunches后面有定语从句修饰，因此为特指。78. hold held本文讲述的是过去的事情。79. since when80. 81. 去掉used前的wasbe used to意思是“习惯于”，后面跟v.nang（2011四川卷）第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66._morning and was always late with work.his boss wanted to 67._fire him if he didnt start coming on time，but he went to 68._the doctor for a help. the doctor gave him some 69._medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70._the man did as told and slept really well，wake up before 71._the alarm had even gone off.he had time for a properly 72._breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.“boss，”he 73._said，“that medicine really works！”“im pleasing to hear 74._it，”said his boss，“but where were you yesterday？” 75._【答案】tom was having much troubles getting up in the trouble66_morning and was always late with work.his boss wanted to for67_fire him if he didnt start coming on time，but he went to so68_the doctor for ahelp. the doctor gave him some akh1 69_medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. it70_the man did as told and slept really well，wake up before waking71_the alarm had even gone off.he had time for a properlyproper72_breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.“boss，”heto73_said，“that medicine really works！”“im pleasing to hear pleased74_it，”said his boss，“but where were you yesterday？” 75_（2011辽宁卷） 第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。in early january this year，the rate of ufo reports were steady，around three per weeks.when，however，on monday，january 16，a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television，there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the states.the commanding officer, wayne tyler，who directly responsible for the study of all such reports，decided to making his findings known.they wrote an article，which said that all ufo reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.follow this explanation，there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings，because the rate remained above the previous level.all ufo reports could be explained forquite naturally by aircraft movements.follow this explanation，there was a following rapid drop in the number of reported sightings，because thealthough/though/but/yetrate remained above the previous level.1. were was主语为the rate，因此谓语动词用单数。2. weeks week“每周”的表达为per week，此处用单数形式。3. to from表“来自”要用from。4. the an这里泛指量的增长，需使用不定冠词。immediate读音为元音音素开头，故应用不定冠词an。5. who后增加was/ is构成结构be responsible for 为负责。6. making make动词decide后常跟不定式作宾语，因此用to make结构。7. they he此处指代的是wayne tyler这个人，因此用he。8. 去掉forexplain为及物动词，其后可直接跟宾语(即该被动句的主语all ufo reports)，故去掉for。9. follow following此处是现在分词短语作伴随状语。10. because although/ though/ but/ yet根据前后两个句子间的逻辑关系可知。（2011全国卷） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。my summer travel started terribly.i was at the shanghai railway station buy a ticket to hangzhou. i was going to visit a friend here and after that i would go to xiamen for long holiday. i bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then i realized that someone had stolen it.luckily，i had all my money on my pocket，but the only clothes i had was those i had on.it felt very strange to travel without any luggages.when i finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. i feel very happy that i could change my clothes at last.【答案】my summer travel started terribly.i was at the shanghai railway station buya ticket buying to hangzhou.i was going to visit a friend here and after that therei would go to xiamen forlong holiday. i bought my ticket abut turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then andi realized that someone had stolen it.luckily i had all my money on my pocket，but the only clothes i had was those i in werehad on.it felt very strange to travel without any luggages. luggagewhen i finally arrived at my friend he lent tokg*2 me lots of friends clothes. i feel very happy that i could change my clothes at last. felt（2011陕西卷）第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线(_)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。last sunday morning, when i was having a walk in the park near my home, i came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. i didnt have my camera with me at that time，but i rushed back home to get.unfortunately，by the time i got back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldnt be seen everywhere.i was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.he was right there in the front of me！i couldnt believe my lucknot only did i had my photo taken with him，but he signed his name on my shirt!him，but he signed his name on my shirt!makemaking作后置定语，用非谓语动词，与所修饰词是主动关系，故用v（2011重庆卷）以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。today is sunday. ive been in canada for two months.this is the first time that ive been away my family for such a 76. _long time. with the help of katia, a roommate of me, ive 77. _soon got used to live without my parents around. katia, like 78. _ many other russian girls, are nice and lively. we becam