【状元之路】高考英语二轮复习 疯狂时刻 短文改错2(1).docVIP

2014英语高考疯狂时刻引领状元之路：短文改错2(建议用时: 40分钟)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误; 2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 3. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。1dear dad, you are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. i was worried about your health all the time. id like to give you some advices. i hear that walking is the best sport. your company isnt far away from home, is it? why not to walk to the office? youd better take exercise at most once a week. you can play a basketball in the gym. going to swim is a nice choice, too. trying not to stay up too lately. having enough sleep can help your brain work better. of course, this is very important to have healthy food. dad, please receive my advice. i really wish you healthy! your loving daughter, mary2yesterday morning i was surprising to hear that my friend allen had been hit by a car and was in hospital. the other day he is going to cross a street. he was very careful and didnt go after he saw traffic lights turn green. but when he got the middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come directly towards him. that was too late for allen to dodge(躲闪). he was hit by a car and thrown a few meter away. he was sent to hospital immediate and had an operation. when i went to see him last night, he out of danger but still looked pale. 3as students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. therefore, take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. during the ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness. what we need is to have real rest, instead of getting even tired. so dont do anything that will make you too excited. my ten-minute break is always pleased. i usually take some exercise. sometime i have a free chat with my classmates. when the new class begins, i feel freshly again. 4its reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. in my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. while used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others. in the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. after all, life is not a small matter. 答案解析1答案: dear dad, you are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health.soi was worried about your health all the time. id like to give you some advices. am advicei hear that walking is the best sport. your company isnt far away from home, is it? why not to walk to the office? youd better take exercise at most once a week. you leastcan play a basketball in the gym. going to swim is a nice choice, too. trying trynot to stay up too lately. having enough sleep can help your brain work better. of latecourse, this is very important to have healthy food. itdad, please receive my advice. i really wish you healthy! accept your loving daughter, mary1. 【解析】将第一句中的very改为so。so. . . that引导结果状语从句。2. 【解析】将第二句中的was改为am。此处是一般现在时。3. 【解析】将第三句中的advices改为advice。advice不可数名词。4. 【解析】将第六句中的第一个to去掉。why not+动词原形, 表示建议。5. 【解析】将第七句中的most改为least。at least至少。6. 【解析】将第八句中的a去掉。球类前面不加冠词。7. 【解析】将第十句中的trying改为try。此处为祈使句, 动词原形开头。8. 【解析】将第十句中的lately改为late。late表示时间晚。9. 【解析】将第十二句中的this改为it。it是形式主语。10. 【解析】将第十三句中的receive改为accept。接受意见用accept。2答案: yesterday morning i was surprising to hear that my friend allen had been hit surprised by a car and was in hospital. the other day he is going to cross a street. he was very wascareful and didnt go after he saw traffic lights turn green. but when he got the before tomiddle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come his directly towards him. that was too late for allen to dodge(躲闪). he was hit itby a car and thrown a few meter away. he was sent to hospital immediate and had the meters immediatelyan operation. when i went to see him last night, he out of danger but still looked waspale. 1. 【解析】第一句中的surprisingsurprised修饰人时, 要用-ed形容词, 意为“感到吃惊的”。2. 【解析】第二句中的iswas时间状语the other day说明事情发生在过去, 故用一般过去时。3. 【解析】第三句中的afterbefore根据句意“他看到绿灯亮之前没穿过马路。”可知用before。4. 【解析】第四句中got后加toget to到达, 为固定搭配。5. 【解析】第四句中的herhis根据前文可知我的朋友allen是男性。6. 【解析】第五句中的thatit分析句子结构可知真正的主语为后面的不定式, 故采用形式主语it。7. 【解析】第六句中的第一个athe特指前面已经提到的汽车, 用定冠词the。8. 【解析】第六句中的metermetersmeter为可数名词, a few修饰可数名词复数。9. 【解析】第七句中的immediateimmediately修饰动词要用副词。10. 【解析】在第八句中的he后加was根据并列连词but可知其前面应为完整的句子, 此处是主系表结构, 根据上下文时态和主谓一致, 故加was。3答案: as students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. therefore, fromtake a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. taking classes otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. during the ten-minute break andwe did something to get rid of tiredness. what we need is to have real rest, instead do aof getting even 或even tired. so dont do anything that will make you too excited. moremy ten-minute break is always pleased. i usually take some exercise. sometime i pleasing sometimeshave a free chat with my classmates. when the new class begins, i feel freshly again. fresh1. 【解析】将第一句中的for改为from。from. . . till固定结构, 从到 。2. 【解析】将第二句中的take改为taking。构成v. -ing短语作主语。3. 【解析】将第二句中的class改为classes。在两节课之间。4. 【解析】将第三句中的or改为and。并列关系, 与前面的both构成both. . . and. . . 。5. 【解析】将第四句中的did改为do。全文以一般现在时为基础时态。6. 【解析】在第五句中的have后面加a。have a rest休息。7. 【解析】将第五句中的even去掉, 或者在even后面加more。even不可以修饰形容词原级, 但可以修饰比较级。8. 【解析】将第七句中的pleased改为pleasing。主语是事情, 故用v. -ing形式的形容词作表语。9. 【解析】将第九句中的sometime改为sometimes。有时。10. 【解析】将第十句中的freshly改为fresh。feel是连系动词, 后面用形容词作表语。4答案: its reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. road safety diehas aroused the widely attention of the public. many rules have made to wide beenreduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. in my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. while used the take usingroad,