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广西德保县2016高考英语二轮书面表达精练（1）（2014北京卷）第一节 (15分) 你给英国朋友chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意： 1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear chris,_yours,joe【考点】考察提纲类作文【写作指导】本文属于应用文中的书信，要求写信给英国朋友chris说明取消计划的原因并建议推测旅行至8月份。以第一人称为主。要点：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【一句多译】我可以建议把旅行推迟到8月份早些时候吗？（1）can i suggest that we put it off until early august?（2）would you mind if we we put it off until early august?【参考范文】dear chris,how is everything going?i remember we planned to visit yunnan in july but now bucause my left foot was injured, i cannot go with you as planned.im sorry about it. can i suggest that we put it off until early august? i wish you could understand. im looking forward to hearing from you soon.yours, joe（2014北京卷）第二节（20 分）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。注意：1. 词数不少于 60. 2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 there was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.【考点】考察看图作文【写作指导】本文属于看图作文。叙述的是李华和同学们向学校建议解决自行车存放的问题。属于记叙文，使用第一人称和一般过去时。要点：1.在自行车存放处前面，我看见很多人都拥挤在一起；2.找到几个同学一起讨论具体解决方法。3.找到校长提出建议；4.校方采纳建议，多开了一个进出的门。看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素。【一句多译】在我们学校自行车存放处有一个长久以来就存在的问题。（1）there was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school（2）the parking place for bikes was an existing problem for a long time in our school。【参考范文】one possible version there was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, i noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. so my classmates and i had a discussion and wrote a report. then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. he accepted our suggfestions. soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. now it is easy to park our bikes there.【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（1）】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇中国载人宇宙飞船“神舟号”的简介。【写作内容】 请根据以下信息，写一篇关于“中国载人宇宙飞船辉煌10年”的简讯。时间成功发射航天员标志性成就与突破2003年10月1 5日神州五号杨利伟世界第三个载人进太空的国 家中国第一艘载人飞船2003-2013年三艘载人飞船7男1女中国航天科技迅速发展各自圆满完成任务2013年6月11日神州十号聂海胜、张晓光、王亚平（中国第二位女航天员）王亚平完成多项科学实验，进行了中国首次太空授课目 的为将来探索月球、火星做好准备【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 (one possible version)the last decade has witnessed the rapid development and splendid achievements in chinas manned spacecrafts to prepare for the exploration of the moon and mars in the future. on october 15, 2003, shenzhou v, chinas first manned spacecraft was launched into space with chinas first astronaut yang liwei, which made china the third country to send man to space independently. since then, another three manned spacecrafts have sent 7 men and 1 woman astronauts into space, accomplishing their own tasks successfully with rapid development in science and technology. most proudly, shenzhou x took off carrying a crew of three astronauts: nie haisheng, zhang xiaoguang and wang yaping on 11 june, 2013. during this voyage, wang yaping, chinas second female astronaut, successfully conducted some scientific experiments and delivered chinas first space lecture to chinese students by live television broadcasts. 【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（1）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。benefits of honestysarah darling met a homeless man called billy ray harris and gave him her purse, with all her change in it. it was not until the next morning she realized that she had left her diamond ring in the purse. to her surprise, when she and her husband bill krejci found billy, billy immediately returned the ring. the grateful couple paid him back for his honesty by emptying out their pockets. however, bill krejci, a web designer, felt that he needed to do something more for this honest man. he set up a special page for him on money- raising site give forward with a goal of raising $1,000 in 90 days. in just four days, the donations rose to over $85,000. that was not all. because of all the media coverage, billy reunited with his elder brother, edwin harris who he had not met for 27 years. the two talked for 45 minutes on the phone and edwin was planning to take billy to his home in lubbock, texas. all this good fortune came just because billy did the right thing - he returned something that did not belong to him. honesty is surely the best policy!【写作内容】 1以约30个词概括短文的内容； 2以约120个词就“因诚实而得到的收获”发表你的看法。内容包括： (1)简述你对billy ray harris事例的理解或看法： (2)记述一次你（或你的朋友）“诚实待友”的经历： (3)你对“诚实待友”的建议或方法。【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。_ 【参考范文】读写任务 (one possible version)the passage is a story about honesty. billy ray harris was given many donations after he honestly returned a diamond ring to sarah darling. moreover, he got the opportunity to reunite with his long-lost brother. i appreciate billy ray harris very much. his honesty touched sarah darling and her husband as well as the whole society. the donations offered to him have proved that “one good turn deserves another”.as far as honesty is concerned, i have had an unforgettable story to tell. about ten years ago, my friend susan brought a beautiful pen, which i loved so much that i stole it. that night, i was filled with regrets. after struggling for the whole night, i