高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文（22）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（22）及参考范文 第一节 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社会的编辑写封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括：优点：1. 话题广泛； 2图片丰富；3有助于提高 学习兴趣。建议“适当降低词汇难度。注意：1 词数100左右；2 可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；3 开头语已您写好，不讲总词数。2*结束 (201*淮安第四次调考)某大学教授称，高学历者的贫穷意味着耻辱和失败，并对大学生提出要求，“当你40岁时，没有4000万身价不要来见我，也别说是我的学生。”对此，凤凰网进行了调查。多数人持反对态度，认为教师不应用金钱来衡量学生。有少数人则认为这是一种激励。还有极少数人说不清楚。请你根据漫画并结合饼状图(pie chart)用英语写一篇短文。注意：1适当地发挥想象，增添细节使行文连贯；2字数150左右；3文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；4作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。a survey has been conducted by about whether a teacher should judge his students success by the money they have earned._参考范文a_survey_has_been_conducted_by__about_whether_a_teacher_should_judge_his_students_success_by_the_money_they_have_earned._it is true that some teachers judge their students success by money. as can be seen from the picture, a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and that wealth means success. but opinions are divided among the surveyed people. just as the pie chart shows, 70% of them oppose the teachers view. they think that teachers shouldnt judge their students success by money. however, 25% of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money. there are also a few people who are not clear about how to measure students success. in my opinion, we should understand success in a reasonable way. money is certainly one way to measure success, but it is not the only way. people with higher education provided by our country should be devoted to the construction of our motherland, rather than only think about making more money.*结束 (201*丰台二模)今年4月16号，北京的部分高校开展了校园开放日活动，你和你的父母前往一所你向往的大学参观咨询。请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，叙述你们这一天的活动及感受。注意：1日记的开头已为你写好。2词数不少于60。 april 16 saturday，sunnytoday some universities were open to the public. _ 参考范文april_16_saturday，sunnytoday_some_universities_were_open_to_the_public.its a good chance for me to know more about my dream university. so i , accompanied by my parents , went to beijing university. early in the morning we went there excitedly. to our surprise, many students had already been there. directly we went to the stands where teachers and voluntary students of different departments made introduction and answered questions. since i intend to choose english as my major, we spent lots of time asking the teachers for detailed information and advice. i was deeply impressed by the wonderful course and learned professors.then we were attracted by the stands of various clubs. it was really amazing that they have organized such colorful activities! i just cant wait for such a wonderful college life.inspired by what i saw during the day, i am determined to try my best to be admitted to the university. my parents also encouraged me to work harder for my dream. its not easy ，but i am sure i can do it. *结束(4)(25 min.)(2011沈阳市高三质量检测三改编)假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论大学生开网店的问题。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。赞成反对1. 大学生时间充裕，具有丰富的网购经验；2. 大学生思想活跃，了解时尚需求。1. 大学生开网店浪费时间，会耽误学业；2. 大学生缺乏经商经验，容易失败。你的观点注意：1词数不少于120；2不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3开头已给出，不计入总词数。dear editor， recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops._参考范文one possible version：recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops.some students think that college students have not only enough spare time but also rich experience in online shopping. besides, they know the trend of fashion very well, which is helpful for their jobs in the future. others, however, hold the opposite view that running online shops will waste a lot of time, which can definitely affect their studies. whats more, it is easier for them to fail in the business owing to the lack of experience. as a result, the failure will have a lasting influence on them. in my opinion, college students should focus on studies first. after all, running an online shop requires much time and energy. college students should devote most of their time to studying instead of making money. yours truly，li hua*结束(1)(25 min.) (2012长沙一中月考)以下是一名高三学生王海写给wise博士的一封信。请以wise博士的名义回信。注意：1. 给出至少三点建议；2. 词数不少于120。dear dr. wise，im a senior 3 student. since i became a graduating student, i have been staying up late to finish piles of exercises. i often feel sleepy in class. as a result, i miss lots of key points and it usually takes me more time to finish my homework, which makes it difficult for me to concentrate on what im doing. whats worse, i havent made any progress, which made me lose interest and confidence in studying. what should i do?sincerely, wang hai_参考范文one possible version：dear wang hai, your problem is not unusual among the senior 3 students and ill give you some suggestions based on my own experiences and many others.first of all, make the most of every class. not only do your teachers possess all the knowledge for the college entrance exam, but they are experienced in making the knowledge yours and in coping with exams.second, find out your problems and go all out to solve them. exercises are not merely a means of consolidating what you have learnt but also a means of finding what you are weak in. if you have a problem, make everything, such as books, teachers or the internet, a source to