高考英语 短文改错 暑假自测题（9）.doc

2014高考英语短文改错：2013暑假自测题（9）及答案或解析 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。i like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. i used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctors advice, i gradually kicked the bad habit. just as an old saying going, “an apple a day keeps the doctor away”. however, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. on contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. in my opinion, we must take action to change them.【答案】i like eating fruit and vegetables what （改为which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. i used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） the doctors advice, i gradually kicked the bad habit. just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ an apple a day keeps the doctor away”. however, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking或在dislike前加who） fruit and vegetables. on（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改为are） crazy about junk food. consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. in my opinion, we must take action to change them.（改为 it）*结束短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（） 划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。last sunday my father and i went fishing along a river. we found the water very dirty that we could hardly catch any fish in it. a lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straightly into the river, which made the river polluting. in this way most of the fish in the river was killed. unless the rivers all over the country are polluted like this, no living things will be exist in the water. as we all know, environmental pollution do great harm to living things. now more and more people have realized what serious this problem is. our government is doing her best to take measure to fight against pollution. we expect that water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.【参考答案】very sostraightly straightpolluting pollutedwas wereunless if be bedo does what howmeasure measures water the water*结束 (2010河北部分重点联考)dear anish，here are the information about manchester university.1._it is about 200 miles far away from london, and it 2._has a very big schoolyard. you can live in the school3._or near the school. they have all sorts of course.4._im sure you will find one you like it. i know you5._are particular interested in human rights. so i will 6._see that there is anything on their website(网址).7._ill send my friend charlie meet you at the airport8._when you arrived. you met him a few years ago, but he 9._has changed a lot since then. both your aunt or i look10._forward to seeing you again.see you soon.peter答案与解析：1areisinformation是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。2去掉farfar通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。34coursecourses根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。5去掉it“(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。6particularparticularlyinterested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。7thatif/whether根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。8meet前加to此处是不定式表示目的。9arrivedarrive如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。10orand此处是“both.and.”结构，表示“两者都”。*结束 (2010石家庄质检)i am a very active girl in my class. i have many hobby，1._such as writing stories, playing piano and singing english2._songs. my most favorite subject is english. i became3._interested in it when i was very young. my dream is 4._to study abroad. but now i need to improve my english5._and learn more about west culture as well. i will be6._able to improving the friendship between china and7._the rest of the world. i hoped my dream will come true.8._and i believe in nobody can change my mind. i will work9._harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10._答案与解析：1hobbyhobbiesmany后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。2piano前加theplay the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。3去掉mostfavorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。45butso前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。6