高考英语二轮书面表达基础训练题（10）(1).doc

2014高考英语二轮书面表达基础训练题（10）及答案【 山东省菏泽市2014高考英语一模试题】写作 (满分30分) 假如你是红星中学学生会主席李明，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师jack推荐一名学生助手（assistant）。请根据所给提示给jack写封推荐信。1. 欢迎jack的到来；2. 推荐刘佳做学生助手；3. 刘佳的基本情况（18岁，高三学生，学校十佳学生）；4. 刘佳的特点与特长（活泼、乐观；电脑技能；沟通能力；英语水平等）。注意：词数：120150；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【参考范文】写作dear jack,im li ming, chairman of the students union of hongxing middle school. its great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.i was asked to write to you to recommend liu jia, a senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant. liu jia is a friendly, active and optimistic girl. she is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. whats more, she is one of the top ten students in our school, and her spoken english is extremely excellent. im sure she can be helpful in your work and life in china.if you have any questions about it, please contact me.im looking forward to your coming. yours， li ming【2014高考英语广东省梅州市质检试卷】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。right after the second world war, germany was in ruins. almost all the houses, factories and schools were destroyed. plenty of people were homeless as well as jobless. worse still, the supply of water and electricity was often cut off in the city. two american journalists interviewed a german family living in the basement. the husband was disabled from the war and the wife was just dismissed from a clothing company. worse still, there were bills for them to payfour children to care for and food to buy. life was hard for them at that time.after the interview, the journalists chatted with each other on the way back to the company.“do you think the germans could rebuild their homeland?”“absolutely.”“but i cant see any hope for the country at all. how can you be so certain about that?”“have you noticed what they put on the table in the basement? there was a vase of flowers. a nation, suffering at such moment, hasnt forgotten about flowers. it shows that hopes are not lost. they are still able to dream. a nation with hope can create miracles. they are sure to be able to rebuild their homeland.”【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；2. 以约120个词就梦想改变命运的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) 你赞同文中的观点吗？(2) 举例证明你赞同或不赞同的原因；(3) 谈谈你对梦想的看法。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】one possible version:two american journalists interviewed a german family after the war. though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.as is often the case, a man who can dream will try hard to overcome any difficulties in front and make it in turn. therefore，i agree that dreams can change ones life. lisa is my friend and former classmate. she was an energetic girl who always dreamed of becoming an actress. however, at the beginning almost everyone tried to persuade her out of her dream because she was no more than 1.55 meters tall. there is no denying that actresses are usually much taller than her. however, she didnt lose heart. with great determination, she wrote a play by herself and eventually acted as a leading role in it. the show was a success.as far as i am concerned, one who has a dream can see further, work harder, and gain much more. please hold fast to your dreams.读写任务评分说明读写任务是有材料作文：要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。在评分时，应注意以下几方面：1 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分；2 概括的要点包括：two american journalists interviewed a german family after the war. though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.二、读写任务评分标准项目分值评分标准概括5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容【桂林市、防城港市高三第一次调研】书面表达假设你是李华，你班来自美国的交流学生arthur患病住院已有三周，请你用英文给他写封信，主要内容包括： 一询问病情，表示关切二介绍班级近期活动、学习等情况三表达祝愿注意1词数120左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。【参考范文】【湖北八校第一次联考】短文写作（共一题，满分25分）假设你叫李明，下面是你的一位外国笔友kristie给你写的电子邮件，询问有关小悦悦事件的情况。dear li ming,i learned from a news flash that a two-year-old baby girl was ignored by more than a dozen passers-by after being run over twice in a south china townim very shockedi used to think the chinese were hardworking and kindhearted, and they really were when i was on a visit in china two years agoso i doubt whether it was true newscan you tell me what you learned about this incident?sincerely yours,kristie请你给她回一封邮件，要点如下：1社会陷入自责和反思；2某些路人的冷漠或另有原因，可最终还是有一名拾荒婆婆挺身而出；3单个事件不能代表中国，助人为乐一直是中国传统美德。 注意：1不能照抄原信件语句；2可自由发挥添加细节；3词数120左右；4回信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：伦理道德- ethical and moral （adj）; 美德- virtue （n）dear kristie,i was in very low spirits believe me, kristie, and believe in the chinese people!sincerely yours,li ming【江苏南京四校联考】书面表达（共l题，满分25分）2010年，中国“虎妈”蔡美儿以其给两个女儿列出绝对不允许做的“十不准”在全球一炮走红。由此而引发的有关如何教育子女的争论愈演愈烈。请就此给china daily投稿，阐明家长们的不同观点，并发表自己的见解。一些家长的观点子女必须沿着父母为其选择的道路努力.必要时采用高压手段.另一些家长的观点孩子应该自由发展.赏识教育，好孩子是夸出来的.你的观点.(至少两点)注意：1. 对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。amy chua, a professor at yale law school, who listed ten “donts” to her two daughters became famous overnight. she insists that parents should be very strict with their children. it has caused a heated online debate_【参考范文】amy chua, a professor at yale law school, who listed ten “donts” to her two daughters became famous overnight. she insists that parents should be very strict with their children. it has caused a heated online debate. some parents insist that children should make every effort to live up to their parents expectations. they believe it is necessary to be strict with their children. they say parents who set high standards and push their kids to stu