高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文（69）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（69）及参考范文第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分1 5分) 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报的“科技与发明栏目写一篇环保产品介绍。【写作内容】 请根据以下信息，介绍太阳能汽车。 名称：太阳能汽车(solar car) 原理：通过太阳板(solar panels)从日光中获取能量 外形：与普通车形状相近 优点：低噪音、无污染，环保 车身小、易驾驶、易停车 缺点：价格昂贵 动力不足，最高速度只有70公里小时 最大问题：每次充电(charge)后只能行驶约100公里【写作要求】 1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作：version one:using solar panels to get energy from the sun, solar cars look similar to ordinary cars, but they have several advantages. they produce little noise and almost no air pollution, which is great for the environment. also, as theyre comparatively smaller, solar cars are easy to drive and park.however, solar cars are much more expensive to buy than normal cars, and theyre much less powerful, with a top speed of only 70 km/h. the biggest problem of all is that they can only be driven about 100 km before their battery needs recharging / to be recharged.version two:solar cars, which get their energy from the sun through solar panels, look similar to ordinary cars, but they have several advantages. they produce little noise and almost no air pollution, so theyre quite good for the environment. also, as theyre comparatively smaller, solar cars are easy to drive and park.however, not only are they much more expensive to buy than normal cars, theyre also less powerful, with a top speed of only 70 km/h. the biggest problem of all is that they can only be driven about 100 km before their battery needs recharging / to be recharged.第四部分 写作书面表达某英文报社正在举办 “an unforgettable experience” 征文比赛。假设你是李华，你班参加全校班歌比赛获得一等奖。请根据所给提示写一篇120词左右的英语短文，向报社投稿。写作内容应包括： 1. 准备工作如: 选歌; 展现形式; 服装2. 简述成功原因及个人感受注意：1.短文开头语已给出，不计入总词数。2.短文中不要出现你的真实信息。an unforgettable experiencei will never forget the day when our class won the first prize in the class theme song competition. _【参考范文】keyi. writingi will never forget the day when our class won the first prize in the class theme song competition. proud as we are, it is how we prepared ourselves for the big day that impresses me most. getting prepared for the competition was no easy work. it took us several days to decide on the song written by the “music genius” in our class accompanied by the melody of “when you believe”. then came the two weeks of practice, during which we learnt to cooperate with each other so as to sing a song of harmony in chorus. on top of that, what helped our class stood out were the creative style we showed on stage and the specially designed t-shirts we wore. talking of the highlights of our performance, personally i think it is our enthusiasm and team work that make our class a success in the competition. our enthusiasm put us forward even on stormy days while team work paved the way to better understanding and cooperation. with all the efforts made, not only do we enjoy a great success but we have a closer friendship with each other, which we will keep in mind for ever. 书面表达（满分30分） 目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要有老师辅导比自己学好有更多机会和老师互动可以弥补上课错过或没听懂的东西容易养成依赖习惯学生需要时间休息和娱乐导致有的学生在常规课堂上不认真听讲请您根据以上提示，以are training classes or tutors necessary ?为题，写一篇120 词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头已给出， 不计入总字数。参考词汇：家庭教师：tutor 要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。文章开头已给出： are training classes or tutors necessary ?nowadays, more and more students attend different kinds of training classes or hire tutors to improve their grades at the weekends. are training classes or tutors necessary ? nowadays, more and more students attend different kinds of training classes or hire tutors to improve their grades at the weekends.some think it necessary to do so. firstly, its more effective to study with a teachers help than by themselves. secondly, you can have more chances to communicate with teachers (there are more interaction between students and teachers.) . besides, you can make up for what you miss or fail to understand in classes on weekdays. others think it unnecessary. for one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. for another, students need time for rest and recreation at weekends. whats worse, attending training classes or hiring tutors even causes some students not to listen attentively in their regular classes.in my opinion, whether a training class or tutor is needed just depends. if you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe its ok for you. but be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money. 第四部分 写作（共三节，满分35分）第二节 书面表达 （满分25分）根据漫画，请用英语写一篇短文，描述图画内容，解释图画内涵并提出你的建议,如开发干净又便宜的新能源、提供便捷的公共交通方式等等。词数：120左右 参考词汇：汽车废气 car exhaust 交通方式 means of transportation【参考范文】书面表达（25分）：第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假设你是某校一名高三学生，被校学生会推选参加兄弟学校联合举办主题为“怎样成为一名效率高的学习者”的交流研讨会，请按要求用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网。内容须包括以下要点：1. 制定切实可行的学习日程表；2. 合理分配各科学习时间，均衡发展；3. 适当参加体育锻炼；4. 其他。注意：1. 短文标题和开头句子已给出，不计入总词数;2. 可根据提示适当发挥;3. 词数：120左右。参考词汇：seminar n.研讨会 agenda n. 日程表 well-balanced adj均衡发展 how to be an efficient learner?being senior three students, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. 【参考范文】one possible versionhow to be an efficient learner?being senior three students, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. because of limited time, its important to be an efficient learner. but how can we become efficient learners? firstly, we should make a realistic agenda, which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover.secondly, divide our spare time into several parts to make sure we go through all the subjects and try to be well-balanced students. thirdly, take regular exercise to refresh our mind and energy and ensure we are healthy enough to get round our lessons. remember: all work and no play makes jack a dull boy.besides, hold informal seminars to discuss with classmates about difficult problems and find best solutions. its also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time.all in all, efficiency is the key to success. 第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分) 阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 the serious decline in the health of chinese students is causing concern among parents, schools and experts. the next generations future is in danger and there is a need to understand the causes of the problem and find a solution. in the last 10 years, studies have found an alarming increase in:obesity the number of overweight middle school students has doubled. poor diet, especially the overeating of junk food and the overdrinking of soft drinks, and the lack of physical activity are identified as the main reasons for this problem. poor eyesightmore students now wear glasses and from an earlier age. long hours of study and heavy use of computers and mobile phones are most commonly blamed. stressstudents feel under more pressure to succeed than ever before. the long hours of study and homework they must do to achieve success, plus pressure from parents and schools are the main causes. some have suggested including physical education (p. e.) in the gaokao as a possible solution to students health problems. they say this will force students to be more active, play sports and therefore lose weight. others, however, oppose the idea, saying that adding one more test to the gaokao would only increase students workload and stress and would actually worsen their overall health. although there is no easy answer, all agree that something must be done to stop the serious decline in students health.【写作内容】1以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；2然后以约120个词就“健康与学习”的话题进行写作，内容包括： (1)你是否赞成体育人高考及原因； (2)健康与学习的关系； (3)你认为还有什么方式可以帮助学生提高身体素质。【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务：this passage lists some of the causes for the decline of chinese