高考英语 书面表达总动员 5 备考策略课件.ppt

2017年高考英语总动员 书面表达 5 备考策略 1 五档 作文在眼里 抓标准 1 完成了试题规定的任务 2 覆盖了所有内容要点 3 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 4 具备了较强的语言运用能力 5 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 6 完全达到了预期的写作目的 2 五档 标准如何抓 1 抓 应用了较多的词汇 解读 词性多样 词汇高级 短语丰富 2 抓 应用了较多的语法结构 解读 感叹句 倒装句 复合句 强调句 非谓语动词结构 with复合结构等 3 抓 有效使用连接成分 解读 段与段 句与句之间明晰的 合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排 做到文意与结构上层次分明 条理清楚 4 抓 完成规定的任务 解读 对于题干 要点提示 注意事项以及参考词汇要做到读题全面 只有这样才能确保完成规定任务 1 力保审题过程要 全 审题五方面 审题是高考书面表达的关键第一步 确保审题 全而不漏 是得高分的基本保证 审题要注意以下五个方面 1 审文体考生首先要根据情景提示弄清要求写哪种体裁的文章 是记叙文 说明文 应用文 还是议论文 动笔之前认真审题并确定写作体裁是至关重要的 3 审人称审人称 即弄清书面表达要求用哪种人称写作 其中有主要人称和次要人称 这一点要引起考生足够的重视 因为倘若人称不对 评卷时阅卷老师就会扣掉相应的分数 4 审时态审时态 即根据所给材料信息确定短文的基本时态 考生一定要重视时态 因为如果时态方面的错误过多 评卷时阅卷老师就会扣除3 5分 5 审要点表达出全部要点是得分的基本保证 如果漏掉要点 得分档次就会被降低 因此考生要细审题 定要点 巧构思 列提纲 2 精准规避三类错误 错在各类词汇a 拼写错误a 误 wegotstruckinthetrafficjamsowewerelateforthemeeting 改正 struck改为stuckb 变化错误b 误 peoplethrowedcans paper bagsandsoonintotheriverwater 改正 throwed改为threwc 误 thebookpresentsusalotofusefulinformations 改正 informations改为information c 词性错误d 误 duringmysummervacation ispenthalfamonthinthecountryandplayedveryhappy 改正 happy改为happilye 误 doingapart timejobalwayseffectsstudy 改正 effects改为affects 错在语法结构a 时态错误a 误 inthemorning wehadbicycledinthesuburbstoplanttrees 改正 had bicycled改为bicycled b 语态错误b 误 childrenwhoraiseinpoorfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears 改正 raise改为areraisedc 主谓一致错误c 误 myhobbyiswidespread whichincludedrawing collectingstampsandsoon 改正 include改为includes d 比较级使用错误d 误 withthedevelopmentoftransportation theworldseemstobegettingmoreandmoresmaller 改正 moreandmoresmaller改为smallerandsmallere 非谓语动词使用错误e 误 comparingwithothercountries thecountrypayslittleattentiontothepollution 改正 comparing改为compared f 平行错误f 误 theniputmybookundermydesk openingitandstartedlookingfortheanswer 改正 opening改为opened 错在汉式思维a 纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序a 误 atthisschoolstudying ireallyveryhappy 改正 studyinginthisschool iamreallyhappy b 句子成分残缺b 误 therearemanystudentsdon tsupporttheproject 改正 therearemanystudentswhodon tsupporttheproject c 误 ontheotherhand dogsareourbestfriends bringusalotoffun 改正 ontheotherhand dogsareourbestfriends whichbringusalotoffun c 句子成分赘余d 误 ononeday hewenttothecinema 改正 oneday hewenttothecinema 1 运用三大原则 体现美不胜收 1 新颖性原则写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的 别人可能想不到的词汇 会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉 但是需注意 既要避免使用俗词 又要避开冷僻词汇 2014 高考江西卷 inthecomingthreeyears ourschoollifewillbedifficult inthecomingthreeyears ourschoollifewillbechallenging 2 短语优先原则多使用词组 习语来代替一些单词 以增加文采 developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant developingagoodhabitisalsoofimportance 3 避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词 必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替 ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches 2 频变句型结构 增加得分亮点 1 肯定不如双否好对于考生来说 只要稍加注意 在文章中运用双重否定的句子可以给自己的书面表达加分 wecanimaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithphones wecan timaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithoutphones 2 陈述不如倒装妙倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法 它能使文章内容突出 富有节奏 thelibraryliesinthecenterofourschool thelibraryisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding inthecenterofourschoolliesthelibrary whichisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding iwassoexcitedthaticouldn twaittotrymyhandatridingit soexcitedwasithaticouldn twaittotrymyhandatridingit 3 主动不如被动巧使用被动语态符合英语的习惯 如果书面表达中有一两个被动语态句子 就会呈现出句型的变化 使整篇文章句型丰富 oneday whenwelearnedthenewword eccentric inclass theteacheraskedustomakeasentencewithit oneday whenwelearnedthenewword eccentric inclass wewereaskedtomakeasentencewithit 4 简单不如并列 复合强有时为了使句子连贯性更强 表达更贴切 自然 我们在两个或多个简单句之间加上and for or notonly butalso等连词 使其成为并列句 有时根据上下句之间的关系 在两个或多个简单句之间加上when as where because等从属连词 使简单句变成复合句 iwouldreallyliketointerviewhim heisthefirstchinesetogotospace heisoneofthegreatestastronautsintheworld iwouldreallyliketointerviewhimbecauseheisnotonlythefirstchinesetogotospacebutalsooneofthegreatestastronautsintheworld 5 非谓语动词不能少非谓语动词包括动词不定式 动名词和分词三种 巧用非谓语动词 使书面表达句式丰富多彩 增加高分亮点 inthepicture wecanseeaboyinwornclothes heissittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit inthepicture wecanseeaboyinwornclothes sittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit heisgoingtowriteabook thebookisbasedonthisexperience heisgoingtowriteabookbasedonthisexperience 6 篇章结构巧连贯在英语写作中 要做到篇章结构连贯 除在内容的组织安排上要注意前后的逻辑关系外 有时还需要恰当使用能承上启下的关联词语 first heshowedusthebasicstepsandskillsofmakingdoughfigurines westoodaroundhimandwatchedattentively thenwestartedtohaveatryourselves theoldmanwalkedaroundandhelpeduspatiently finally weputthefigurineswemadeonthetableandtookpictureswiththeoldcraftsman 1 起 好开头 1 常用开头词汇first ithinkeveryoneneedsfriendsandiseagertogetfriendship nowadays recently peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplainingabouttheheavytraffic tobeginwith smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas generallyspeaking themoreyoupractice themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinenglish 2 常用开头句式astheproverbsays asthesayinggoes wherethereisawill thereisaway ascanbeseenfromthetable nearlyeveryoneownsonemobilephoneinchina thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind itiswellknownthatanelephantisaverykindandgentleanimal i mexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazine 3 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onlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectourhometowntotakeonanewlookinthenearfuture wecan therefore cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousaspeaceintheworld i msurethatistillhavealongwaytogotoachievemydream nomatterhowdifficultitis iwillhaveitcometrue 3 满分作文选粹inshort notonlyhastheinclusionpoisonedchinese itmayalsobringaboutdistancebetweenthechinesepeople inaword mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful i llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation 2016全国卷i 假定你是李华 你校摄影俱乐部 photographyclub 将举办国际中学摄影展 请给你的英国朋友peter写封信 请他提供作品 信的内容包括 1 主题 环境保护 2 展览时间 3 投稿邮箱 intlphotoshow 注意 1 词数100左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 答案 dearpeter ourschoolphotographyclubisgoingtoholdaninternationalhighschoolstudentphotographyshow thethemeoftheshowisenvironmentalprotection itwillstartfromjune15thandlastthreeweeks anystudentswhoisinterestedinwelcometoparticipate iknowyoutakegoodpicturesandyou vealwayswantedtodosomethingforenvironmentalprotection irememberyoushowedmesomephotosonthatthemethelasttimeyouvisitedourschool 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