河南省信阳市第四高级中学高考英语 专题训练 短文改错、书面表达（6）.doc

河南省信阳市第四高级中学2014届高考英语专题训练： 短文改错、书面表达（6）（一）a few days ago, miss wang was going home by bike. while he was76. riding in the street, she saw the man with a knife in his hand and his77. face covering with a piece of cloth running towards her. the man78. took her handbag out of the basket of her bike and ran away before79. she could do anything. there was no one she could turn for help at80. that time, for it was very late at night. lucky, she had her mobile81. phone at hand. immediately when she took it out and phoned the82. police. she told them what the man was like and in which directions83. he had run. the police came very quickly and catch the robber. miss84. wang got her handbag back and felt very grateful for the police had85. done for her.（一）76he she 77. 第二个the a 78. covering covered 79. 80. turn to 81. lucky luckily 82. 去掉when 83. directions direction 84. catch caught 85. for what*结束 a good face is a letter of recommendation some people say beauty is just a skin deep. i dont quite agree with them. good appearance often makes a big difference in social communication, competition， finding jobs and so on. not only can good appearance help you become more confident， but also it helps you be impressed. if you want to get a good job，the first sight is important. physical beauty is probable to draw much attention. however，we have to face this problem. we have no right to choose our appearance. when necessary，we can make up ourselves. if you think doing this is a good way to improve your confidence，just do what you really want to regardless others opinion. it is worth all the money and time. facing a variety of social pressures，we young people should build confidence. confidence is the key to success. in a word，you may not be the most beautiful one，but you can be the most attractive one；you may not the best one，but you can be the most confident one. show yourself and chances will kiss you in time. *结束(201*唐山联考)when i was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard，1._hoping i could get a chance to go to college. i experience2._pressure for the first time. i did that my mom expected3._because i didnt want to let her off. i was born to a poor4._peasant family, but i really knew life was not easy. all the5._things my mother did was the result of her hope that i could6._lead better life in the future. as the saying goes, “no pains7._no gains.”i was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8._have a chance to go to college. thanks to my mothers push and the 9._pressure, i made it. now, i no longer think pressure is a good thing.10._答案与解析：1去掉第二个was此处不用被动语态，故was多余。2experienceexperienced此处应用一般过去时态，与全文时态保持一致。3thatwhat这里用what引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语，that没有这种用法。4offdown结合上下文可知此处意为“我不想让她失望”，故应用let sb. down表示“让某人失望”。5butand或so此处应为顺承关系而非转折关系，故将but改为and或so。6waswere此处主语为all the things，故应用were。7better前加alead a better life表示“过一种更好的生活”。8mothermothers此处表示“达到了妈妈的期望”，故应用其所有格形式。910goodbad根据上文可知此处是指“我不再认为压力是一件坏事”，故应将good改为bad。*结束怎样做高考英语书面表达题“书面表达”是近期英语高考试卷的最后一项大题，所占分值很大（30分），做好这一题目对于考生取得理想的英语成绩至关重要。 “书面表达”是考察考生综合运用英语能力的一种题型，根据其一般规律，它要求考生对所给情景和要求写一篇书面材料，做到所写的内容符合所给的情景和要求，文理通顺。它既象作文，又不完全是作文，因为考生不能离开情景和要求自行立意、选材，随意发挥。它类似翻译，但又不同于翻译，因为考生必须根据需要进行适当的发挥，因而有较大的灵活性。所以在做这种题目时，要掌握一个总的原则是“不漏、不错、不多写、不乱写”。具体地则从以下四个方面去考虑、着手： 1、读题，明确要求，做好必要的准备工作。高考的书面表达，题材较多，有给文字背景材料的，有看图作文的，还有两者皆而有之的。对于文字背景材料，考生要仔细阅读，看懂题目要求，并对材料进行必要的删减。文字材料中有的是有用信息，有的是无用信息。不进行必要的删减，则会使做出来的书面表达轻者增加了错误的可能性，重者文不对题，逻辑不清。 如下面一篇书面表达，请试着训练读题能力。 说明： 假定你名叫陈芳，是北京市二中学生。你舅舅曾在你所在的学校读过书，现在国外学习。请用英语写封回信给他，谈谈母校的近况。内容要点如下。 学校在你舅舅离校五年后发生了很大变化；旧房拆除，新建了几座教学楼，并扩建了实验大楼；操场已延伸到了河边；实验大楼设施（facilities）先进，除了有化学、物理、生物实验室外，还有计算机房及语言实验室。 学校鼓励发展学生的各种兴趣，学生们不再象以前那样整天埋头于书本之中，他们有更多的时间参加各种活动，学校生活丰富多彩。 注意： 1信中包括所给内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。 2长度；80120个词。 3信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 no 3 middle school beijing july 18，1992 my dear uncle， glad to hear from you again. since you miss your old school ever so much，ill tell you something about it. 经过读题，进行必要的删减。内容要点以上的都是属于基本情况，要给予删减，文中不作反映。内容要点在文中都必须一一反映出来，绝不能漏掉其中一个信息点。若有遗漏，按阅卷要求则要扣大分（23分）。有的考生不读题，不审题，全部文字材料都一一给予译出，弄得啼笑皆非。 对于看图作文，考生更应首先要读题，要看懂图中的主题，不应被图中其它次要的内容所缠住，裹足不前，或走题跑题。考试中所给的图，有的是漫画式的，有的写真式的。漫画的一般主题鲜明，画中多余的内容很少，考生一般读起来较为容易，也较易于做出必要的删减。然而写真式的图画，其中与主题无关的内容较多，学生容易拣了芝麻丢西瓜，纠缠于细小问题上而不能自拔。 2、组织，进行必要的语言准备。读题工作结束后，考生要就提供的信息或画面进行语言上的组织。这一环节非常重要，对“书面表达”的流畅和符合逻辑是举足轻重。读题的核心工作是作必要的删减，组织的主要工作是作适当的补充，给框架补“血”补“肉”，使所要写出来的文章意思连贯，语言畅通，逻辑严密。 还是举前面的例子。此题书面表达要求是写封信。信的开头部分已给出，中间部分可以根据所给材料进行加工（因材料本身已经关系密切，意思连贯，不需添加内容），但结尾部分只能由考生自行组织。学校发生了很大的变化，旧貌换新颜，理所当然应该邀请舅舅回母校亲眼目睹。因此，经过语言组织加工，结尾部分加上这一内容，与情景、情理相符。这不是多此一举，而是本身的要求，还是画龙点睛之笔。 3、转换，进入实质性的语言加工阶段。要做好这一阶段的工作，关键是掌握这么几条原则，多用简单句，少用复合句；多用短句，少用长句；讲究简明扼要，摒弃烦琐复杂，意思混浊不清。这一阶段是得分最终高低的关键所在。因此，除了掌握以上重要的原则外，还应在具体操作中注意选择正确的主语人称和动词的时态，多用贴切的固定短语，尽量使用自己“拿手”的句子，经常留意句子的语法是否符合要求。从更高要求来说，用英语思维并一气呵成地完成书面表达是最佳方法，这是上上策。但对于大多数英语水平尚未达到这一步的考生来说，转换过程中进行有效的控制是非常必要的。只有进行这样的控制，才能有效地控制错误的发生，才能少扣分，多得分。 4、检查，“书面表达”的最后一道工序。最后一道工序意味着一旦稍有疏忽，很难再有弥补，也就无法挽回。因此，仔细认真地检查对于最终的得分是十分重要的。在检查过程中应注意以下几个方面： （1）信息点是否完整，有没有遗漏。根据评分标准，漏信息点是要扣大分的（23分）。要细致小心，一一检查，确保无一遗漏。 （2）语法正确。语法包括两个方面，一是词法，二是句法。词法方面主要检查时态、语态、主谓一致、冠词、名词单复数和词语搭配等。句法方面主要检查是否使用一些熟悉句型，特别是尽力使用简单句这一原则贯彻得如何。 总之，要做好“书面表达”是一件并非容易的事情，它需要平时的积累，需要考生在平时的英语学习中加强训练，以求水到渠成之功。当然，考前的归纳和总结也十分重要。*结束高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）10. 下面的饼状图（pie chat）显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给english weekly写一篇短文，报道你的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。词数120左右。首句已给出（不计入词数）。a recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. from the pie chat, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. the second popular activity for students is surfing the internet and 36 % of the students have interest in it. only a few students, about 8 percent of them, take reading as a hobby. and even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments.in my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. guidance should be given to students on surfing the internet and ways must be found to arouse students interests in reading and music.*结束高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）11. 阅读下面漫画，先对漫画的内容进行描述，然后对这一现象发表自己的看法。（100词左右） 参考词汇： 西瓜皮： water-melon skin 长凳：benchthe boy and the girl in the picture sat on a bench talking merrily while eating a water-melon. when they went away they left the melons skin on the bench, making it very dirty. they didnt want to take any trouble to throw it into the dustbin although it was very near where they were sitting. instead, they said that there would be someone who should clean the rubbish.however, what they did makes others look down upon them. if everyone behaves in this way, the world will be a big rubbish dump with flies flying round and people will live in a world of diseases. besides, it will be impossible for dustmen to clean the world woth such people living in it.*结束高考英语作文精选范文-应用文类i. 应用文类1. 外籍教师lynne任教期满准备回国，学校答应派车送她去机场。她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师： 1)请检查(check on)明天的车是否落实，提醒司机(remind sb. of sth.提醒某人做某事)。 2)她之所以要确定一下，是因为太早不好叫出租车。 3)感谢费心，并感谢一年来的关心。 4)在学校一年来，生活愉快、难忘，很可能再来。 5)留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆，希望对学生有用。 字数：100120个词。hi, mr. li, could you please check on the car to take me to the airport? please remind the car driver of this. i want to be sure of this car, because it will be too early in the morning to call a taxi if the school car doesnt show up. i am sorry to trouble you again. here i thank you again for all that you have done for me during my stay in your school. i really enjoy teaching here, and will never forget the day i spent with my students. probably i will come back some day. i leave some english books to your library. i hope they will be useful to your students.yourslynne*结束高考英语作文精选范文-应用文类2. 假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。赞成迁出： 反对迁出：游客多，交通堵塞 建于1906年，中外闻名郊区环境好 搬迁易造成动物死亡注意：1)词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。 2)可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3)参考词汇： 郊区suburbjune 3 ,2005dear editor ,recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the beijing zoo should be moved out of the city . some of my classmates are in favor of the move .they say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .they also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. however, other students are against the idea, saying that the beijing zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well known at home and abroad. so it should remain where it is. whats more, moving may cause the death of some animals. to move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in beijing. yours truly, li hua*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：表格作文 (3)(25 min.)(2012师大附中月考)假如你是红星村的李华，家乡人民决定开发农业旅游，邀请你参与策划红星生态山庄旅游项目，并请你写一篇英语文章向旅游者推介红星生态山庄。地理位置长沙市以北35公里处， 占地面积15平方公里；北面靠山，湘江从村边经过主要产品茶叶， 绿色蔬菜，鱼等 娱乐休闲项目钓鱼，生态旅游有利条件(不少于两条)参考词汇： ecological village注意： 自拟标题，词数不少于120。_【参考范文】one possible version：a village like no otherdo you feel tired after a weeks hard work in the noisy city? why not visit red star ecological village and try something different to relax yourself? red star ecological village is a beautiful and quiet village, located 35 kilometers north of changsha, which only takes approximately 30 minutes drive from the center of the city. it covers an area of 15 kilometers. it is a place where you can see many big pine trees in the mountains in the north, where you can see a lot of ducks on the xiangjiang river, and where you can join the villagers picking up green tea leaves and growing vegetables in the garden. if you are a fishing lover, you can go fishing in the pond and barbecue what you get in the water under the big trees. it is really fantastic to enjoy your lunch in the open air with your family and friends, talking and laughing.whether you are looking to try green food or enjoy quiet country life, red star ecological village is the place for you. come to red star ecological village and try something different to relax yourself.*结束短文改错(第一节：短文改错(共10小题)假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1