高中英语写作课件公开课.ppt

英语书面表达 EnglishCompositionWriting Whatmakesagoodessay Theessay Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph TopicparagraphSupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph3Concludingparagraph Tomanystudents schoollifeisboringandtiring However Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful Topicparagraph Introductionparagraph GeneralstatementTopicstatement SupportingParagraphs Body Paragraphs TSSSSSSSSS ConclusionPersonally inconclusion inbrief Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove wemaydrawtheconclusionthat Insummary itiswiser Theparagraph Whatmakesagoodparagraph Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences Therearedifferentkindsofbee Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall topicsentence Whereveryougoinourschool youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater Topicsentence justlikeagarden Ourschoolis justlikeagarden Ourschoolis Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons Firstofall Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries Secondly Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet Ithasbecomeanon linelanguage Thirdly the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful Lastly 正确使用有关连接词 时间先后 first then later intheend eventually sincethen afterawhile 转折关系 but however onthecontrary nevertheless 因果关系 because since as thanksto owingto asaresultof forthereasonthat 让步关系 though although evenif eventhough inspiteofthefactthat 递进关系 what smore inaddition furthermoreontheonehand ontheotherhand 条件关系 if unless aslongas onconditionthat 表列举 forexample instance take forexample that stosay inotherwords asfollows 表总结 inshort inbrief inconclusion inaword onthewhole ashasbeenstated Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns 丰富的句式 常用到的句型结构 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思 能增加文章的文采 e g Whatakindboyheis Howdisappointedhewas 感叹句 强调句 e g Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible e g Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem Therecomesthepolicecar Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman e g Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus Cometomeifnecessary e g Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand 倒装句 省略句 with短语 e g Inmyopinion cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation Let scometothemainteachingbuilding atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary 定语从句 e g That swhatIshoulddo Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent 各种名词性从句 e g Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit Themomentwereachedthefarm wegotdowntoharvesting Solongasweworkharderatourlessons we llcatchupsoonerorlater 各种状语从句 1 Tohissurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings 使用名词性从句 2 ThoughI mweak I llmaketheeffort 使用倒装句 3 Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper 使用强调句型 4 Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp 用虚拟语气 Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇 WeakasIam I llmaketheeffort Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened Icouldn thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp 5 Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher 使用过去分词 6 Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool 使用V ing形式 7 Iwon tbelievewhathesays nomatterwhat状语从句 8 Ifyoustudyhard youwillmakerapidprogress 祈使句 and Followedbymanystudents shewalkedoutofthelab Singingandlaughing theywentbacktoschool Nomatterwhathesays Iwon tbelieve Studyhardandyou llmakerapidprogress 9 HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad 使用倒装句 10 Weallthinkheisagreatman thinkhighlyof 11 Asaresulttheplanwasafailure turnout 12 Whenhespoke hefeltmoreandmoreexcited themore themore NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad Weallthinkhighlyofhim Theplanturnedouttobeafailure Themorehespoke themoreexcitedhefelt Summary Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords Agoodparagraphisonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns Let simproveit Goodafternoon everyone Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife theyhopetolooksmartandspecial theywanttowinothers admirationandrespect Inaddition itmakesthemfeelcool westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable Thankyouforlistening thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB firstlyC lastbutnotleastD what smoreE asfarasIamconcernedF Secondly A B C D E F 苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试 最近 国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动 建议小学生每天跑1000米 初中生1500米 高中生2000米 对此 有些人表示支持 有些人表示反对 请你根据以下材料 写一篇以 Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents healthorgrades 为题的短文 谈谈你的看法 注意 1 词数150左右 短文的开头已为你写好 不计入总词数 2 对所给要点 逐一陈述 设当发挥 不要简单翻译 1 Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending 2 Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintoparagraphs 3 You dbetterusesomelinkingwords 4 Handwritingisofgreatimportance Suggestions 第一段 1 SomepeopleagreetoNO One becausetheyusuallythinkthat Inthemeantime Inaddition 2 SomepeoplethinkthatAisrightbecause 3 Somepeoplesuggest saythat Atthesametimetheypointoutthefactthat What smore 4 SomepeoplepreferNO One IntheiropinionA Inaddition 第二段 1 Ontheotherhand somepeopleholdthatBisright Theythink 2 Butmanymorepeopledon tagreewiththem TheypreferB Theysaythat Thereasonisthat 3 Onthecontrary somepeopleholdthat 4 SomepeoplethinkthatBisbetter Itisclearthat What smore Also 在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落 第三段 提出自己的见解并且加以论证1 InmyopinionBisbetterthanA Thereisnodoubtthat 2 IsupportA Thereasongoesasfollows 3 AsfarasIamconcerned Iagreetothelatter First Second Finally 4 Itislikelythatpeoplewillgoonarguingoverthesequestions Ithinkthateverythinghasbothitspositiveandnegativesides Weshouldkeepanopenmind 5 Peoplewillcontinuetoargueoverthequestions Ithinkwe dbetterkeepanopenmindbecauseeverythinghastwosides Itallrelieson 6 Ofthesetwowaysof Iprefer Firstofall Second Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents healthorgrades TheMinistryofEducationofChinahasurgedallthestudentstoparticipateinthewinterlong distancerunningactivity Itissuggestedthatprimaryschoolstudentsshouldrun1 000metersaday juniorschoolstudents 1 500andseniorschoolstudents 2 000 Differentpeoplealwaysoffervariousviews Somepeoplesay yes tothisactivity Theythink foronething itcanmakepeoplepaymoreattentiontophysicaleducation foranother runningcanimprovestudents healthandhelpthemstudyefficientlysotheycanhavegoodgrades However othersholdoppositeopinionsabouttheactivity They