核按钮高考英语一轮复习 专题二学会使用并列句与复合句进行写作考点突破课件 新人教版必修2.ppt

专题二学会使用并列句与复合句进行写作 根据历年高考英语评卷情况看 在高考英语写作中 考生更多使用的是结构单一 长度相当的简单句 这样 句子与句子之间缺乏连贯性和逻辑性 文章自然就显得平淡乏味 其实 一篇好的文章应含有多种句式 即简单句 并列句和复合句 它们虽各自具有不同的特点 见下表 但灵活使用 巧妙组合 就会使文章句式多变 逻辑连贯 表达流畅 具有一种表达形式多样化的美感 简单句 并列句与复合句的特点 要学会使用并列句与复合句进行写作 应从如下两个方面着手 一 掌握各类并列连词的使用并列句一般由两个或两个以上不分主次 相互独立的简单句构成 并列句通过并列连词 并列副词或分号三种方式连接起来 依据并列句前后分句的逻辑关系 并列句可表示递进关系 转折关系 选择关系 因果关系 时间关系 对比关系等 这些关系都是通过并列连词来表现的 以下为各类并列句的常用并列连词 例如 1 workhardoryou llgetfiredbyyourboss 2 you dbetterputonyourcoat forit srathercoldoutside 3 tryitonemoretimeandyou llmakeit 4 yourwayofcookingisneitherconvenientnorsafe 5 joeycouldnotspeakitalian norcouldherbrother 6 i dliketogowithyoubutican t forihavetoworkthisplanouttonight 二 掌握各类复合句的写作复合句由一个主句和若干个从句构成 主句和从句都具有完整的主谓结构 主句是主体 从句是主句的一个句子成分 不能独立存在 从句对主句进行修饰 起补充说明作用 根据从句所起的词性作用 可分为三类 名词性从句 主语从句 表语从句 宾语从句 同位语从句 定语从句和状语从句 各类从句连接词的使用是要掌握的重点 例如 1 jessicaisspokenhighlyof heressaywaswellwritten jessicawhoseessaywaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof 定语从句 2 theflatisonbellstreet itisinabuildinganditisnotfarfrommyson sschool theflatisinabuildingonbellstreet whichisnotfarfrommyson sschool 定语从句 总之 我们在学习和使用并列句时 应熟练掌握常用的由并列连词构成的句式并避免汉语化表达引起的错误 在学习和使用主从复合句时 应注意复合句中各部分的连接手段 从句与主句的时态呼应及复合句的综合语意 1 根据句子意思 使用正确的连词填空 theinternetisbridgingthedistancebetweentotalstrangers itmayalsobebreakingsomehomesorwillcauseotherfamilyproblems themainreasonforthepopulationgrowthisn tsomuchariseinthebirthrate afallindeathasaresultofimprovementofmedicalcare antsarethemostcommontinycreaturesonearth tiny theircombinedweightisgreaterthanthatofallhumans ithinkyou vegottothepointwhereachangeisneeded you llfail you vementionedit idoremember thecompanyhasameetingeveryweek thereisnothingtodiscuss iwassofamiliarwithhimthatirecognizedhisvoice ipickedupthephone key 1 while as though otherwise nowthat unless themoment assoonas theinstant immediately 2 以下是使用连词时出现的错误 请改正 onemorningitwasrainingheavily however iwaslateforschool andtheteacherdidn tcriticizemeforthat intheend wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclearforatleasttwocarstogo theownerofthewalletwasverythankfultoxiaohuathathetookouta100 yuannotetorewardherthoughwasrefused asthenightairwashot wesleptdeeplybecauseweweresotiredafterthelongjourneydownthevalley althoughregularexerciseisveryimportant butit sneveragoodideatoexercisetooclosetobedtime 2 however so therefore and but unless until till very so though but asthenightairwashot hotasthenightairwas或thoughthenightairwashot 去掉but或去掉although并将regular首字母r大写 3 请把以下简单句变为并列句或复合句 itwasthethirdtimethathehadwontherace itsurprisedusall 并列句 复合句 pleasefindwaystopraiseyourchildrenoften you llfindthattheywillopentheirheartstoyou 并列句 倒装句 key 3 并列句 itwasthethirdtimethathehadwontheraceanditsurprisedusall itwasthethirdtimethathehadwontheraceandwewereallsurprisedatthat 复合句 itwasthethirdtimethathehadwontherace whichsurprisedusall wewereallsurprisedatthefactthathehadwontheraceforthethirdtime 并列句 findwaystopraiseyourchildrenoftenandyouwillfindtheywillopentheirheartstoyou 倒装句 notuntilyoufindwaystopraiseyourchildrenwillyoufindthattheywillopentheirheartstoyou chinarecentlytightenedthecontroloveritswatersneardiaoyuislands thiswillpreventothercountriesfromattackingchinesefishingboatsintheeastchinasea 定语从句 状语从句 简单句 key 定语从句 chinarecentlytightenedthecontroloveritswatersneardiaoyuislands whichwillpreventothercountriesfromattackingchinesefishingboatsintheeastchinasea 状语从句 chinarecentlytightenedthecontroloveritswatersneardiaoyuislandssothatwewillpreventothercountriesfromattackingchinesefishingboatsintheeastchinasea 简单句 chinarecentlytightenedthecontroloveritswatersneardiaoyuislandsto inorderto soastopreventothercountriesfromattackingchinesefishingboatsintheeastchinasea 或chinarecentlytightenedthecontroloveritswatersneardiaoyuislandstopreventchinesefishingboatsfrombeingattackedbyothercountriesintheeastchinasea wearelivinginanewage inthisage mostinformationisavailablewithgreatereasethaneverbefore 定语从句 同位语从句 i vemadeapromisetomyself itsaysthatthisyear myfirstyearinhighschool wouldbecompletelydifferent 定语从句 同位语从句 宾语从句 key 定语从句 wearelivinginanewage inwhich whenmostinformationisavailablewithgreatereasethaneverbefore 同位语从句 wearelivinginanewageinthewaythatmostinformationisavailablewithgreatereasethaneverbefore 定语从句 i vemadeapromisetomyself whichsaysthatthisyear myfirstyearinhighschool wouldbecompletelydifferent 同位语从句 i vemadeitapromisetomyselfthatthisyear myfirstyearinhighschool wouldbecompletelydifferent 宾语从句 ihavepromisedtomyselfthatthisyear myfirstyearinhighschool wouldbecompletelydifferent 4 阅读短文 请将适当的连接词填入空格处 每空一词 使短文意思完整 tolerancemeansrespectingothersandvaluingdifferences matterswhenyoutrytogainfriendshipfromothers toleranceisavirtueforeveryone beingtolerantmeanskeepinganopenmind treatingotherswithaheartfullofmercy infact ididn trealizethesignificanceofbeingtolerant ihadafiercequarrelwithmybestfriendlily wehadbeengettingalongwellwitheachother twoweeksago lilymisunderstoodmeforsomething ididn tknow sheavoidedtalkingwithme iwassoangry iquarrelledwithher thus weseparated i