浙江省高考英语考点突破 专题十八 短文改错（含解析）.doc

专题十八短文改错passage 1(2013浙江)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如:it was very nice to get your invitation to spend the weekend with you.luckily i wasam completely free then,so ill to say “yes”.ill arrive in bristol at around 8:00 p.m. inon friday evening.dear diary,here i am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.do you want to know why we move last week? dad lost his job,and as mom explained,“he was lucky to find other one.”his new job meant i had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else i love in the world.to make matters bad,now i have to share a room with my younger sister,maggie.tomorrow is first day of school.i am awfully tiring,but i know ill never fall sleep.good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.yours,rosemarypassage 2(2012浙江)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如:it was very nice to get your invitation to spend the weekend with you.luckily i wasam completely free then,so ill to say “yes”.ill arrive in bristol at around 8:00 p.m.inon friday evening.two years before,i traveled to brazil and i rented for a car.unfortunate,i had an accident and hit another car,and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.i called my parents,so i did not tell them what had happened.i knew that they will be worried about myself because i was so farther away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.therefore,i told them interested stories and how i was enjoying brazil.as a result,nobody knew truth.i still think that it was the right thing to do.passage 3(2011浙江)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如:it was very nice to get your invitation to spend the weekend with you.luckily i wasam completely free then,so ill to say “yes”.ill arrive in bristol at around 8:00 p.m.inon friday evening.i was playing at my cousin house.since his family was rich than mine,he had more toys than i did.there was one on particular id always wanted.i put into my pocket when he wasnt looking.i guessed,even at that age,i would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; i would always know id done something wrong.late on,my aunt drove me home.when she dropped me off,i pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.she knows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.passage 4(2010浙江)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如:it was very nice to get your invitation to spend the weekend with you.luckily i wasam completely free then,so ill to say “yes”.ill arrive in bristol at around 8:00 p.m.inon friday evening.after shopping,mother and i went to a restaurant for lunch.i notice mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple.they ate silently,and it was clearly that things were not going well.as we left,mother stopped on their table.“excuse me,”she said,put her arm around the unhappy old woman.“you remind me so many of my mother.may i hug (拥抱) you?”the woman smiled happily as she accepted to it.after we left,i said,“that was very nice of you,mother.so i didnt think she looked like grandma.”“neither did me,”said mother cheerfully.passage 5(2009浙江)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如:it was very nice to get your invitation to spend the weekend with you.luckily i wasam completely free then,so ill to say “yes”.ill arrive in bristol at around 8:00 p.m.inon friday evening.one rainy day while i was walking home with one of my friend,a truck came to a stop besides us.the driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through.i stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful.the man insisted,so i grateful accepted the offer,thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road.this man might need the umbrella himself,and he preferred to give it to everyone else.it was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.a组(参考时间:40分钟)passage 1(2013浙江五校联盟高三下学期第二次联考)a young man called low-carbon brother become a hit on the internet in 2011.he suggests living a low-carbon life,which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air.for example,she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something.while he is watching tv,he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light.therefore,he goes to work by bike instead of driving.some people think what he is doing is just a show.no one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us.as far as i am concerned,i am strongly in support his idea and his behavior.although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.passage 2(2013浙江金华十校高三二模)dear mom,as mothers day is approaching,id like to share with you a great many word.first of all,i want to tell you i am very grateful to you for which you have done for me.thank you very much for bring me up to be happy and brave in a often difficult society.you not only give me precious life,and teach me how to tell right from wrong.it is you and dad who encourage me to follow my dream as i will grow.and all the time you have been helped me to step forward towards my goal.as you know,the college entrance examination is just around the corner.i think i am good prepared for it,so i will face it bravely.please dont worry about me.im sure i can make it and will be admitted by my dream university.dear mom,may you happy every day!yours sincerely,li yuepassage 3(2013杭州第二次高考科目教学质量检测)patience is of great importance in our daily life.once i waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past,but no bus came.both upset and annoyed,i decided to walk on feet.but no sooner had i left when the bus arrived.i thought if i had waited for one more minute,i would have caught it.if i chose to take a next bus,i would have to wait for other 30 minutes.only then do i realize my problem.being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.now whenever i am close to lose my patience,ill think of this experience.passage 4(2013杭州高三第二次教学质量检测)im glad to tell you that i have made great progress in my english study since i became the senior high school student.when i started senior english,i found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and i almost lost my heart.later,i realized the important of english,so i got up early every morning,recite english words,listened to english tapes and did a lot of exercise.i also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning english.now,im improving my english greatly.but im getting more and more interested with learning it.thank you so much for your great help in your class.b组(参考时间:40分钟)passage 1(2012杭州第二次教学质量检测)the way of communication in peoples life has changed a lot of in recent years.in the past,people keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or use the public telephone.but now almost everyone have a mobile phone.people can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.whats more,people have easy access the internet,it enables them to send and accept e-mails whenever they like.with these changes,peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficiently.it used to take them several days to hear from each other,and now it takes only several minutes,even if we are in two different continents.passage 2(2012宁波八校测试)nowadays,people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic.it has serious influenced people daily life and economic development.to solve the problem,some pieces of advice is put forward.some people suggest that more streets and roads are built.by this way,the traffic density can be reduced,thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars.this can decrease the traffic flow.but on the other hand,this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.in my opinion,the number of private cars should be put under the control.and at the same time,buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles.passage 3(2012浙江桐乡二月模拟)the first time i decide to leave home was when i was upon graduation in high school.i was having trouble get along with my parents.i had about fifty dollar in my pockets,and so i thought about leaving home.it took me only two weeks away from home while i started to feel homesick.living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.because of im on my own,i get to deal with my duties without be told.i have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.in the other hand,i could make my own future plan.i have made rules for my to follow.passage 4(2012辽宁重点中学协作体期末)on saturday afternoon,li hua and wang ping,members from “green eyes”,was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground.they picked it out and found it wounded.thinking it should die without timely help,they took it home.under their treatment and care,the lucky bird got recovered soon.when time came for them to flying the bird,they felt a bit of pity but very delightful.i think its worthwhile for him to do such a thing.here i call on the public to show respects for the nature.only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.c组(参考时间:40分钟)passage 1(2012西安高三第一次质检)i went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.it was a good trip at the beginning and something unexpected happened half way.one of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldnt move any far.nobody knew what to do it.one girl tried to call her mum in her mobile phone,but there was no signal in the mountain area.lucky we had brought a tent with us.we put it up and let him rested in it.he took some medicine.then he drink some water,and ate some food.after while,he felt much better and we walked on.we all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.passage 2(2012银川一中高三模拟)i just come back from britain last week.i was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the uk from feb.16 to 28.we paid a visit to many places,like london,oxford or the lake district.i learned much about british culture and history in london,where was my favorite.i also liked oxford,in which i saw much more old buildings.the lake district was beautiful,but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there.the most excited thing for me in the britain was that i made a lot of friends there.passage 3(2012陕西澄城高三期末 )nowadays more and more people are concerning about their health,but how to keep health? first,it is necessary to take any exercise every day.research shows that get plenty of exercise makes the heart beat fast and the lungs work harder.second,eat more fruits,vegetable and less meat.third,getting rid of bad habits as smoking and drinking is also important way to keep healthy.smoking and alcohol drinking injures ones health a great deal,and therefore should be given up.if people follow these three ways of keeping fit,theyll great improve their health.passage 4(2012辽宁锦州中学高三月考)time and tide wait no man.my mother is becoming a middle-age woman quietly.she had been busy running after us all the years.my father is very busy every day outside.but the heavy burden falls on my mothers shoulder.because my school is far from my home,i have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time.i often choose a seat where is close to the window,so i can see her.however,i always cant help run tears from my eyes.all the buildings and people outside the window disappear.i wave gentle to my mother and i look at her till the view of her back disappears.up to now,even if he is busy,she still does it as usual.the view of my mothers back will never change in my heart.d组(参考时间:40分钟)passage 1(2011辽宁实验中学期末)when jack bowed to someone,he always did it much too quickly.they neednt to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head.so he was blamed for no manner.then a warm-hearted man teaches him,“when you bow to somebody next time,you can count the january,february,march,until december.then you can lift your body.thus,the ceremony will almost perfect.” the next day,he met his uncle,but he did as the man told him to.the bow was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising look.when jack looked down,he found his uncle gone.so he asked a passer-by,“in which month did she go away?”passage 2(2011河南郑州47中高三第三次月考)it was dinner time.mr.and mrs.smith were about to begin their dinner then they find that their son,mike,wasnt there yet.so mrs.smith asked her husband to go and find him.mr.smith went to mikes room and found mike laying on his face on the floor,read a book.he was laughing!mr.smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite unwilling.wondering that what absorbed his son so much,mr.smith took a look at the book.now mrs.smith and mike were at the table,waiting mr.smith.she got quite patient and sent her son for his father.mike went back to his room.to his great surprised,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of hers on the floor!passage 3(2011宁夏银川一中模拟)im eighteen years old and i live in small village in the peak district,not far from nottingham.i grow up in this village,so i know everyone here.thats the problemthe problem is theres nothing to do,and nobody of my age to do it with!at the moments i travel into nottingham every day to the shop as i work.theres a bus at 7:30 in the morning or the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30.from september,therefore,im going to stay in nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the navy.i can use his room.im really looking forward to living in nottingham.passage 4(2011黑龙江哈九中高三月考)growing up is not easy.sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.for many years,she was mum.my mother was a career woman and has her own problems to take care,but when i needed her,she was always there.her strength came from anywhere i dont quite know,somewhere very deep.she was so strong that she would never break down,even while i went to her with all my little-boy problems and shout at her.her strength made me strong and gave to me courage to try things other thought were impossible.a helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up.第四部分写作专题十八短文改错五年真题精华passage 1dear diary,here i am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.do you want to know why we movemoved last week? dad lost his job,and as mom explained,“he was lucky to find otheranother one.”his new job meant i had to say goodbye to my classmateclassmates,my school orand just everything else i love in the world.to make matters badworse,now i have to share a room with my younger sister,maggie.tomorrow is the/my first day of school.i am awfully tiringtired,but i know ill never fall sleepasleep.good night and remember,you,dear diary,isare my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.yours,rosemary剖析:1.far away是不具体的,与前面的350 miles相矛盾,故应去掉。2.宾语从句的时间状语是last week,故应改为过去时。3.又找到一份工作,又一个应该是another one。4.根据上下文可知是“同学们”应用复数形式。5.此处是并列关系应改为and。6.上文讲到的不是什么好事,这里应该是“更糟糕的是”应用比较级。7.first day是特指的需要限定,故应加the或my。8.tiring是使人感到疲劳的,主语应该是物或事,故应改为tired。9.fall asleep是固定搭配。10.主语是you,被插入语dear diary隔开了应改为are。passage 2two years beforeago,i traveled to brazil and i rented for a car.unfortunateunfortunately,i had an accident and hit another car,and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two weekweeks.i called my parents,sobut i did not tell them what had happened.i knew that they willwould be worried about myselfme because i was so fartherfar away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.therefore,i told them interestedinteresting stories and how i was enjoying brazil.as a result,nobody knewthe truth.i still think that it was the right thing to do.剖析:1.由下文时态得知。2.因为rent是及物动词。3.此处是副词作状语。4.前有two,故用可数名词复数形式。5.此处上下文之间表示语意上的转折,所以用but。6.由上下文时态得知。7.此处是介宾短语,需宾格代词。8.此处无表示比较之意。9.interesting“有趣的”,修饰物,interested“感兴趣的”,修饰人,因为此处修饰stories,所以用interesting。10.因为指代上面的真实情况。passage 3i was playing at my cousincousins house.since his family was richricher than mine,he had more toys than i did.there was one onin particular id always wanted.i put it/that into my pocket when he wasnt looking.i guessed,even at that age,i would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or facedface my cousin again;i would always know id done something wrong.latelater on,my aunt drove me home.when she dropped me off,i pulled out the toy slowslowly and gave it back.she knowsknew what had happened,but she thanked me and evernever mentioned it again.剖析:1.考查名词所有格的用法。“我正在堂兄的家玩”,cousin后加s表示“堂兄的”。2.有比较级的标志词than却没有形容词比较级,一定是错了,rich的比较级为规则变化richer。3.考查习语搭配in particular,意思为“尤其,特别”。4.考查动词短语用法和代词,这里漏填了指代那个玩具的单词it/that。5.enjoy后面跟v.-ing,所以去掉多余的to。6.句中有连词or,表示后面省略的部分跟前面一致,为i would never be able to.or i would never be able to.,接在be