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Part A节写作高分突破A节真题及大纲样题A节2011、2010、2009、2008、2007、2006、2005真题2011 Part A51. Directions:Write a letter to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and2) give reasons for your recommendation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address. (10points)Dear Bob, As one of your closest friend, Im writing the letter to recommend to you one of my favorite movies Around the World in Eighty Days. The primary reasons for my recommendation are as follows. For one thing, this is a movie of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who made a bet with his club mates and managers to travel around the world in eighty days. For another, it gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happened on his journey.Wish you enjoy the movie. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li MingFor ImprovementDear friends:Recently a lot of new movies, you concern?I recently saw a movie is especially suitable for you. Its name is “If You Are The One”. First of all it has very powerful cast. Storyline is very tight. Characters language is classic and thought-provoking. But, I most like it because its morals. Dear friends, do you to love the understanding of what? Love is romantic, is costly, is simple, or plain? I think in this movie can be reflected. Perhaps now we still cant clear love, but love is already brimming with our lives, is a part of life. I want to watch the movie, we can understand a lot. Dear friends, do you also see this movie, remember to write and tell me how you feel. Miss you! From: /englishwriting/kaoyanyingyuzuowen/2011-01-15/133450.html2010 Part A51. Directions:You are supposed to write for the Postgraduates Association a notice to recruit volunteers for an international conference on globalization. The notice should include the basic qualifications for applicants and other information which you think is relevant.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the notice. Use “Postgraduates Association” instead. (10 points)Volunteers NeededJanuary 9, 2010 To improve students ability and to enrich extracurricular activities, the Postgraduate Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization to be held on April 7, 2010 in Beijing. First of all, applicants should have Chinese nationality, a strong professional spirit, cheerful personality and be aged under 35. In addition, candidates must have outstanding skills at English listening comprehension and the ability to speak Chinese and English fluently. Finally, students with relevant professional experience are preferred. Those postgraduates who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before February 1, 2010. Everybody is welcome to join in it. Postgraduate Association2009 Part A51. Directions:Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. “White pollution” is still going on. Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to 1) give your opinions briefly and 2) make two or three suggestions You should write about 100 words On ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)D XMDear Editor,I am writing this letter to you in order to give my views and opinions on the ban on the usage of plastic bags in our local areas. because I think the result of it fails a lot. I know that there are many local residents in favour of the usage of plastic bags so that many businesses would still attract their regular customers by using them. However, in order to cope with the worsening problem, my suggestion is that a substitute of plastic bags shall be made and accepted by the customers. In addition, local authorities are supposed to make relative laws against such behavior. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions seriously. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 8 pointsYours Sincerely, Li Ming Dear editor,I am writing this letter to advise you of the pressing situation we are facing now. As we know, being accustomed to using plastic bag in our daily life, some of us still take the “white pollution” for granted. sothat Plastic bag has become the indispensible part of our life, and the “white pollution” now is a ubiquitous phenomenon, which greatly worsens our environment. To prevent the situation from further aggravating, I would like to suggest that: firstly, our government should make a set of laws to punish the groups and individuals who are still polluting the environment; secondly, new technologies should be used to produce degradable and renewable materials; thirdly, the local media can make full use of its own influence to intensify the publicity in order to enhance peoples awareness of environment. I hope that my suggestions are helpful, thank you for your attention! 9 pointsSincerely yours,Li Ming 2008 Part A51. Directions:You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to1) make an apology, and2) suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address. (10 points)样题 (1)Dear Bob,I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed it last week. Yesterday I have just come back from Canada and I found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.The CD which I borrowed from you is made in Canada, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about you buy another CD and I pay for it? If you cannot find the similar one, I would send it through post office. And there are some solutions you like, please tell me.I am sorry again for my behavior. Look forward to your reply.Sincerely yours, Li Ming评分: 9分很好地完成了试题规定的任务。内容要点完整, 层次清晰, 语言流畅, 格式恰当符合语域要求。但也有一定的语法错误。如: How about you buy another CD. Yesterday I have just come back from Canada。样题 (2)Dear Bob,Im writing this letter to extend my terrible sorry that I forgot to return a music CD to you.When I was packing my luggage, I remembered that I had brought it out and had put it on a book. But my friend, Lihua, who thought it was mine, put it into my suitcase. When I told Lihua this situation, Lhua was terribly regretful because of this.So, I plan to send it to you as soon as possible. Please accept my sincere apology because of inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely Li Ming评分: 8分较好地完成了试题规定的任务。内容要点及层次清晰, 组织严宻。但某些语言表达不够准确。如: I remembered that I had brought it out and had put it on a book意思不够准确。样题 (3)Dear Bob, Im writing this letter to express my apology to you. I was so careless that get your music CD in my bag. I find it until I get arrive at China.I have tell my friend who is living in Canada, and let him buy a new one for you. If you only want to get this one, I will sent it to you by post.I am verry sorry for any inconvenience that I have caused. Please accept my sincere apologiance againe.Yours sincerelyLi Ming评分: 6分基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容中包含了基本要点且层次较清晰。但有一些语法及词汇拼写错误。如：I was so careless that get your music CD. I will sent it to you by post Please accept my sincere apologiance againe。样题 (4)Dear Bob,Im so sorry and writing for your excuse involving the matter that I found your favorate music CD in my luggage. When I come back China from Canada.You were so kind of lending me the Westlifes CD, when you knew that Iwas one of fans of this popular Band. But So careless I was that I forgot to return you.I have delivered it to you by EMS with another Westlifes CD together as an apology. I hope you can like it and our friendship will not be injuried by my facultyies. Yours Truly Li Ming评分: 4分未能完成了试题规定的任务。内容要点不够明确, 语言表达欠规范, 并且有较多语法和用词错误。如：Im so sorry and writing for your excuse involving the matter that I found your favorate music CD; I have delivered it。样题 (5)Dear Bob, Im so sorry that I forget to return The Denglijun CD to you. Ill take it for you in the next time.bye!Yours: Li Ming2008, 1. 19 airport评分: 1分未能完成了试题规定的任务。所用语言太少, 无法传达内容信息。SAMPLEDear Bob,Im writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the “the Beatles” to you when I left Canada. I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldnt have made such a stupid mistake.Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the CD enormously. I can either send it to you by express mail or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price. If you do not mind, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Canada. Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.Faithfully yours,Li Ming2007 Part A51. Directions: Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address. (10 points)Compare the following two samplesDear Sir or Madam,Im a student in the university and a loyal reader of this library. Im writing to tell some of my ideas, which I hope to be helpful for you. I notice that many magazines in our library are out of date. It would be beneficial to us students if they could be updated in time. And I suggest introducing some new journals so as to bring new fresh air to the library. Furthermore, since we have a huge number of books, it is not easy to find the right one easily. However, if we can introduce some new searching means, such as implementing new information management system that would be useful. Thank you for taking time reading this letter and Im looking forward to seeing some new changes soon. Dear Librarian,I am a frequent user of the library, and would like to thank you for providing students with such excellent service. That said, I have two suggestions for you to better your service.First, it would be very helpful if you would provide an outdoors drop-off slot for books (book drop box). I often walk by the library on my way home from class, and it would save me a lot of time if I could simply drop my books in the slot rather than going inside and giving the books to the librarian.Second, I would be delighted if you would expand the size of the computer lab. Currently, I often have to wait for quite a while before a computer becomes available. Many thanks for considering my suggestions.2006 Part A51. Directions: You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)Dear Sir or Madam, Moved by the noble cause of Project Hope and encouraged by what has been achieved so far, I would like to contribute my bit to the project by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area of your province. I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a kid to whom I could offer my help. Specifically, the child must be a girl who has just started schooling but whose family cannot afford her education. My plan is to pay for her tuition on an annual basis till she finished her secondary education. I would like to remit my donation directly to a bank account opened by her family in her local area. Yours truly, Li Ming2005 Part ATwo months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)A SampleDear Mr. Wang, I am sorry to tell you that I want to resign from my current position as an editor. Many factors contribute to my decision to quit. First of all, the salary has proven to be much lower than you originally promised, and I find it hard to make both ends meet. In addition, promotions are not based on merit, which will inevitably hinder my career advancement. Most importantly, I feel rather disappointed as in the past two months I was never given any really important responsibility to demonstrate my ability. I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Yours sincerely, Li Ming英语二小作文2011年47. Directions:Suppose your cousin Li Ming has just been admitted to a university. Write him/her a letter to 1) congratulate him/her, and 2) give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.Do not write the address. (10 points)Dear Li Ming, Congratulations! Im absolutely delighted to hear that you have just been admitted to Stanford University. I know there was a lot of competition this year but your hard work and perseverance certainly paid off. Id like to give you several practical proposals on how to prepare for your university life. Firstly, its my hope that you will take advantage of the library in your university by reading books outside the college curriculum. Secondly, I believe that free-time should be devoted to three main activities: physical exercise, relaxation, and communication with friends and family. Wish you further success in your continuing studies and hope you will invite me to your graduation ceremony in four years time. Yours, Zhang Wei 2010年47. Directions:You have just come back from the U.S. as a member of a Sino-American cultural exchange program. Write a letter to your American colleague to1) Express your thanks for his/her warm reception;2) Welcome him/her to visit China in due course.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.Do not write your address. (10 points)Dear Bob,I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your kindness to receive me when I participated in an exchange program in USA.Your generous help made it possible for me to have a very pleasant stay and a chance to know American cultures better. Besides, I think it is an honor for me to make friends with you and I will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever I go. I do hope that you will visit China one day so that I could have the opportunity to repay your kindness and refresh our friendship.I feel obliged to thank you again.Yours,Zhang WeiA节大纲样题Part A 51. Directions:You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books. Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for:1) detailed information about the books you want,2) methods of payment,3) time and way of deliveryYou should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points) Sample 1Dear Sir/Madam:I am writing this letter to inquire whether you have available in your bookstore books on HOW TO PASS TOEFL. I am scheduled to go to USA next year and TOFEL grade is a precondition. Specifically, the books I am in urgent need include TOEFL VOCABULARY BUILDING, TOEFL TEST PAPAERS OF RECENT YEARS and TOEFL MOCK TEST PAPERS. If the answer is “yes”, I would like to know the method of payment. Please reach me at 12345678 or email me at Liming to tell me your account number or any other means of payment at your earliest convenience.As I am in urgent need of the books, I hope you could send them to me by EMS no later than Feb 20, 2004. The postage will be covered by me. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for any information you would provide.Yours sincerely, Li MingSample 2Dear Sir/Madam, As a student preparing for TOEFL in the coming May, I am writing to ask if you have Approaches to TOEFL compiled by Professor Wang Siming and published by University College Press in 2004. If you have the book for sale, Id like to mail order it. Please let me know if I can pay for it by money order or do you accept Master Card?