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绿色倾斜句：为可替换上一句的句子，防模板重复，第一次看只看黑色 ( 第一段，简单描述图画)I was profoundly shocked/moved by what I have seen in this picture /cartoon/ drawing/ painting which is so symbolic/ interesting /educational and instructive .As is apparently demonstrated in the drawing above，_ /Shocked /moved as me, what I have seen in this picturewhichis so symbolic and instructive ,as is apparently demonstrated above,_（描述图画内容）.( The other picture informs us that_用来描述图二，如果有图二). what a philosophic and thought-provoking/ compelling scene it is！（最后一句的可替换句However symbolic/ interesting /educational and instructive it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon does carry rather thought-provoking/ compelling implications . / The picture , at the first glimpse , seems to be simple ,but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.）（出题的哪幅图画不让人深思呢？）（消极主题意义的第二段，原因段）Obviously /Evidently, the drawing mirrors a current phenomenon about _（主旨）is both inspiring and thought-provoking . Therere numerous reasons why it is and I would like to explore the most typical ones. For one thing ,with the miraculous economic better-off brought about by more than thirty-year of reform and opening up, people tend to pay more attention to self-interest and talk less about the spirit of_.（主旨词）（注意第一个原因句前半句是国情后半句是意志品质精神类，很容易万能）For the other ,there are an increasing number of people who are not realizing_（主旨）is indispensable to us（人们的意识也容易万能、最多换个主语比如政府）. Undoubtedly, the nightmare will knock our door, if we turn blind to the problem.（积极主旨意义的第二段，原因段）Obviously /Evidently, the drawing mirrors a current phenomenon about _（主旨）which is both inspiring and thought-provoking . Therere numerous reasons why it is and I would like to explore the most typically ones. For one thing ,with the miraculous economic better-off brought about by more than thirty-year of reform and opening up, people tend to pay more attention to_（主旨）.For another ,there are increasing numbers people who are realizing_（主旨）is indispensable to us. Undoubtedly, _（主旨） to us is just like water to fish and wing to bird.（第 三 段，措施段、总结段，一般用于消极意义主题） as far as Im concerned/ personally , lack of _（主旨词）will lead to the corruption of public moral and irredeemable financial losses ,and even building harmonious society will become an empty talk. There are some immediate measures that should be taken before its too late. On one hand, “eight honors and eight disgraces” advanced by H u Jin t a o should be publicized so as to enhance our scenario of traditional virtues. On the other hand ,its the responsibility of the government and mass media to enhance peoples awareness of_(主旨)as soon as possible ,and at the same time ,strengthening the regulations and Laws should be done.(替换句On the other hand, we should appeal to authorities that explicit laws were worked out （implemented） to control/protect_).Only when these above-mentioned steps are carried out can we succeed in solving the problem, and make our world dimensional, colorful and vigorous.（最后一句替换句In brief, only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.）( 第四段，备用段，即举例段、意义段、总结段，用于不适合写措施的题目，可代替第三段或第二段，一般用于积极意义主题)looking around, we can find similar happenings are too numerous to list, the most persuasive example is George Soros.His_ （主旨）has been pivotal in helping eastern European countries develop democratic societies and market economies （哪件积极意义的事不能促进社会和经济发展呢所以万能的例子）. If he hadnt done the good deed , eastern European countries would not get the achievements now. we should learn from him so as to keep bright the key that opens the treasury of great achievement . Today, the sprit of_（主旨）can also broaden our horizon ,enlarge our scope of knowledge and enrich our spiritual civilization and even be conducive to the building-up a harmonious society/world. In addition, to a country, the international image can be elevated by the enhancement of_. （主旨）Altogether/ In summary/ To conclude , I fi