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书面表达突破(一)图表类图表类基础写作是以图表的形式呈现内容要点的,要点明确,范围具体。写作时要结合写作内容中的提示确定需要表达的内容要点,有时还要留意前面的文字说明部分。此类作文多以说明文和议论文为主,根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究,弄清信息点之间的关系,提炼出中心思想,然后进行分析、概括和归纳。写作时要注意：(1)图表和数据内容不必全部描述；善于抓住总的规律、趋势,归纳增减率；过去特定的时间用过去时,经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时；(2)切忌写成“填表题”,“一对一直译”,“句式单一”,遗漏“间接要点”,应巧妙组合信息。原题再现右图的饼状图(pie chart)显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给English Weekly写一篇短文,报道你的调查结果,并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。词数150左右。写作模板学生习作A recent survey shows 图表的内容. As is shown in the pie chart,表中的内容1,这一现象说明的问题表中的内容2.表中内容3 and表中内容4. In my point of view,自己的观点如何解决问题A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. As is shown in the pie chart,53% of the students like sports,so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. Surfing the Internet is the second popular activity among the students and about 36% of the students have interest in it. Only 8% of the students take reading as a hobby and even fewer,about 3%,are fond of playing musical instruments. In my point of view,our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students interests in reading and music.名师点评本文虽没有使用较复杂的句子,但句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯,读来琅琅上口,主动语态、被动语态的灵活运用,使全文成为一个严密的整体,极好的完成了写作任务。仿写训练(2010盐城一次月考)北京市政府发出限行通告,规定每辆私家车每周停驶一天(公休日除外)。下面是某网站就此事进行的问卷调查的结果。请根据下列图表提示,描述被调查者的不同看法,并简单谈谈你自己的观点。注意：1.文章的开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数；2.词数150左右。Beijing government has announced a car restriction that private cars shall take turns off the roads one out of five workdays._【参考范文】Beijing government has announced a car restriction that private cars shall take turns off the roads one out of five workdays.A survey has been conducted about this issue on the Internet and the findings are as follows.Many people support the restriction.60% of them believe that it relieves the present traffic pressure.And 30% think it helps improve the air quality.The rest of them,about 10%,consider it saves energy.However,there are still many people who are against the new rule.About 75% among them think it inconvenient that they cant drive their own cars on a certain workday.25% are worried that more people will buy their second cars,which may cause heavier traffic.In my opinion,the new traffic rule is really an effective measure to reduce traffic jams and air pollution.书面表达突破(二)图画类图画类基础写作是以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点的,难度在于图画是形象语言,要转化为逻辑语言,考生需要仔细观察。虽然写作内容中的文字提示部分已经明确了要表达的内容要点,但比较笼统,要结合图画中的内容进一步细化,甚至补充内容要点,确定信息的主与次；同时还要注意语句之间的衔接和句式的多样化。因此,写作时要做到：1.仔细观察图画,弄清画面的含义,抓住画面的主体；2.根据画面内容,进行合理想像,使画面“动”起来,从而形成一个完整的小故事；3.认真安排内容,布局谋篇,要做到言之有序,抓住重点,突出中心,要叙述连贯,描写生动。原题再现请看下面的漫画,联系实际生活,以“Saving Water”为题写一篇短文,词数150左右。写作模板学生习作As can be seen in the picture,图画内容The picture tells us图片的大致意思 The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with,揭示涵义/原因/结果1.Second,揭示涵义/原因/结果2. In my opinion/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First, we should具体措施1. Second, we must 具体措施2. Only in this way can we solve the problem of 图画内容As can be seen/As is described/As is shown in the picture, the drinking water is running without anyone using it. The picture tells us now many people pay no attention to saving water. The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, water is the source of life, without which there could be no life on the earth. Second, there is very limited available water resources on our planet, and excessive using of water can make the situation from bad to worse. And this social problem should arise the great concern of all in the world. In my opinion/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First, we should make all the people know the importance of water and the fact that water resources are limited. Second, we must pass some laws to punish those who waste water. Only in this way can we solve the problem of waterwasting.名师点评本文采取三段论的方式：叙述图画,分析图画,提出建议,叙述简明扼要,分析切中要点,建议切实可行。文中用了to begin with,second；first, second；in my opinion等衔接语,使得文章非常连贯。此外,文章最后用了倒装结构,属较高级的句型,增添了文章的色彩。仿写训练假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信询问你们的学习情况。请你根据下图提供的信息,写一封回信,谈谈自从你校学生开始尝试一种新的学习方法以来,你们学习情况的变化。注意：词数150左右。Dear Tom,It was great to hear from you again._All the best. Yours, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Tom,It was great to hear from you again.There are many things going on in our school.In fact things have got much better since we started a different way of learning.In the past our teachers stood in front of the class talking all the time while we students listened,busy taking notes.After a tiring day at school,we always had a lot of homework to do.Sometimes we even worked late into the night.Now we are active in class.We often have discussions in pairs or in groups.After class we enjoy all kinds of activities,such as going in for sports,doing experiments or surfing the Internet.We are extremely happy because of the changes in our studies.All the best.补偿练习2书面表达如果你爱他,你很快就会知道他的一切；如果你恨他,他的生活将不得安宁网络人肉搜索就是这样一个让人爱恨交织的东西,有正义的揭露,有极端的骚扰,有理智的分析、调查、追认,也有一拥而上的愤怒、宣泄、甚至辱骂。请就此现象写一篇英语短文发表你的看法。词数150左右。参考范文We are becoming familiar with human flesh search engine which is used to gather a persons personal information in a short time.It is more and more widely used by a growing number of netizens to disclose some ugly phenomena,while some use it to disturb others private life,which results in a kind of Internet violence to some degree.There is no denying that human flesh search engine is just a tool,whether it is used to fight for justice or become violent just depends on ourselves.Therefore,it is not the fault of human flesh search engine but the users who use it to do something illegal.What is the most important is that we humans should use it positively and dont turn it into a tool of violence.书面表达突破(三)利弊型原题再现最近,关于“高中取消文理分科(abolishing sciencehumanities division)”,引发社会广泛热议。赞成者认为取消文理分科可避免学生“跛腿”走路,扩大他们的视野,从而提高他们的综合素质。反对者认为当前教学资源的不足难以实现学生全面发展的目标,而且会增加学生的负担。请你根据以上内容写一篇短文,并进行适当点评。词数150左右。写作模板学生习作Nowadays there is a widespread concern over作文主题. In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in作文主题. Some people go firmly for it. Firstly,they think it 优势1.Secondly,优势2. Just as a popular saying goes,“Every coin has two sides.”,作文主题. In other words,it has negative aspects. To begin with,缺点1. In addition,缺点2. From the comparison between the advantages and disadvantages of作文主题,we should take it reasonably and perform it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way美好前景预测 Nowadays there is a widespread concern over abolishing sciencehumanities division. In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in abolishing sciencehumanities division. Some people go firmly for it. Firstly,they think it can make students avoid studying just parts of their subjects. Secondly,it can broaden the students horizons and improve their comprehensive ability. Just as a popular saying goes,“Every coin has two sides.”,abolishing sciencehumanities division is no exception. In other words,it has negative aspects. To begin with,the current educational resources are too limited to fulfill the aims of offering students wide education in all aspects. In addition,studying all the subjects surely offer students heavier burdens.From the comparison between the advantages and disadvantages of abolishing sciencehumanities division,we should take it reasonably and perform it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way can we do much better in our senior high education.名师点评本文同样以三段论的方式来陈述题目所规定的三个要点：优点；缺点；点评,结构明朗,要点突出。第一段提出话题,说明优点；第二段以一句谚语Every coin has two sides.对比陈述缺点,其中用了to begin with,in addition等衔接语,用于说理,显得颇有气势；最后一段用了简单句的高级形式及倒装句。整篇文章语句正确流畅,语言表达准确无误,全文结构紧凑,完全达到了预期的写作目的,完成了试题规定的要求。仿写训练(2009南京二次统考)每年高考之前总会出现“高考移民”,他们设法到录取分数线较低的省份参加考试。你班同学就此展开讨论,提出了以下两种意见：赞同反对1想上好大学,应予以理解；2录取分数不一,对高分地区学生不公平；3学生也是公民,应该有此权利和机会。1到其他地方会增加当地升学压力；2对当地学生不利,也是一种不公平；3主要有利于有权势者,对普通百姓不公平。请就此给“学生英语报(Student Times)”写一篇报道,说明上述讨论情况。注意：1词数150左右；2标题和开头段已经给出,不计入总词数。Students on the Move for Their ExamsFair or Unfair?Every year some students from highscore areas move to other provinces to take theCollege Entrance Examination.Recently we had a discussion about this._【参考范文】Students on the Move for Their ExamsFair or Unfair?Every year some students from highscore areas move to other provinces to take the College Entrance Examination.Recently we had a discussion about this.Some think it understandable for the students to move to other places to take the exam since they want to be able to study at a better university.And it seems to be the right of a student as a citizen to have such a chance,especially those from an area of high entry score.Otherwise,they have to get much higher scores to enter a university than those who are from a low entry score province.Others take a quite different stand.They think those who are from highscore areas would add pressure to the areas they move to,which also means unfair to those students in lowscore areas.Whats more,it seems to be just favourable to the powerful and not fair to ordinary people.So they dont think it a good thing.书面表达突破(四)调查报告原题再现最近我校对高一学生入学一个多月来的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查,情况如下。请你用英语表达下表的调查内容,并提出个人观点。60%左右的学生认为40%左右的学生认为我的观点1.高中学习很有压力；2.科目难度大,课后作业多；3.没有时间参加锻炼等活动。1.适应并喜欢高中生活；2.课程更有趣,活动更丰富,受益匪浅。要求：1.词数150左右；2.文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数。参考词汇：course 课程；benefit 对有益；stressful有压力的写作模板学生习作Recently,a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has adapted to the life in senior high school.As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About持有第一种观点的人数. The reasons are as follows. Firstly,第一种原因. Besides,第二种原因 On the contrary, others say他们的观点. They say that持有这种观点的原因 As far as Im concerned, we should自己的想法. Only in this way美好前景预测 Recently,a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has adapted to the life in senior high school. As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 60% of the students hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, the subjects they are learning now are obviously more difficult. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities. On the contrary, others say they have adapted to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful, which surely benefit them a lot. As far as Im concerned, we should balance our study and other activities and do everything efficiently. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.名师点评本文同样以三段论的形式进行写作的,文中用了简单句、并列句、同位语从句、定语从句、倒装句,句式丰富多样,结构复杂,恰当运用了较多高级句式,足显作者写作功底深厚；段与段之间巧妙运用了衔接语on the contrary,as far as Im concerned 使过渡自然,整篇文章浑然一体；另外,文章中还运用了一些较高级词汇,如far from relaxing,balance等。所以该篇文章应属于一篇档次较高的优秀作文。仿写训练今年寒假期间你就返乡农民工问题进行了一次社会调查。调查中发现因受国际金融危机的影响,农民工原来打工的工厂倒闭,致使25%的农民工失业。针对农民工的就业问题,政府采取了一系列的措施,如举办各种劳动力招聘会,鼓励返乡农民工自己创业,为年轻农民工提供免费技能培训等。请根据你的调查写一份调查报告,并谈谈你的看法。注意：1.词数150左右；2.文章的开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。参考词汇：economic slowdown经济危机；job fair招聘会During the winter vacation,I conducted a survey about the returned offfarm workers.75% of the surveyed offfarm workers said they would return to the original work as scheduled,but_【参考范文】During the winter vacation,I conducted a survey about the returned offfarm workers.75% of the surveyed offfarm workers said they would return to the original work as scheduled,but 25% of them lost their jobs because their factories had been closed down owing to the global economic slowdown.But they were not alone struggling to survive the economic crisis.During my investigation,I found that the local government had done what they could to help the offfarm workers to be employed.All kinds of job fairs were held to help them to find jobs in the hometown.Some farmers were encouraged to engage in the agricultural development.Some were helped to set up their own business with the loan provided by the state.Young people were offered a chance to be trained free and learn a practical skill.I think the state has attached great importance to the life of the farmers,but we still face a lot of challenges and much remains to be done.However,with the governments help and offfarm workers hard working I believe they can survive the global economic slowdown and live a better life.补偿练习2书面表达(2009南通二次调研)90后的学生,思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请你根据下表中所提供信息以“Do trust usa generation born in the 90s”为主题写一篇英语演讲稿,以消除人们的忧虑。90后的境遇面临更多的升学和就业烦恼,所处环境竞争更加激烈。人们的忧虑1.注重自我,轻视合作2.缺乏毅力,容易气馁3.盲目追求,渴望成名我们的长处敢于挑战Good afternoon,everyone!The topic of my speech today is“Do trust usa generation born in the 90s”_Thank you for your listening!参考范文Good afternoon,everyone!The topic of my speech today is“Do trust usa generation born in the 90s”Living in an environment full of fiercer competition,we,a generation born in the 90s,are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.Under these circumstances,we are developing our special manners and values,which has raised peoples concern.They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others,which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do.Besides,they consider us as lacking in determination,and this is what it takes to do any job well.Without it,we may easily give up in time of difficulty.They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly,which will in turn ruin our values and future.However,we,a generation born in the 90s,have our own advantages despite some weaknesses.Firstly,we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks,which helps realize our dreams.In addition,we are quickminded and creative.We can do our work more efficiently.Yet,we still need to learn more from those experienced.Please do trust us!Thank you for your listening！书面表达突破(五)阐述主体类原题再现据统计,目前我国有数以百万计的中学生在国外求学。面对中学生“出国热”这一现象,社会对此有不同的看法。请你以“Studying Abroad”为题,写一篇短文简单分析这一现象并谈谈自己的看法。注意：词数150左右。写作模板学生习作Nowadays,there are more and more现象. It is estimated that现象的具体数据. Why have there been so many现象？ Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows： The first one is原因1. The second one is 原因2. In my opinion,我的观点If支持自己观点的理由 Studying AbroadNowadays,there are more and more middle school students studying abroad. It is estimated that tens of thousands of Chinese students are studying in foreign countries. Why have there been so many middle school students studying abroad? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows：The first one is that many parents believe that education abroad is far better than the domestic. And at least students can learn the foreign language faster and better. The second one is that many people in our country have become much wealthier than before. They have the money to send their children to study abroad.In my opinion,sending children studying abroad is not a bad matter.If they like to study there,they can acquire a lot of things.名师点评本文是用三段论的方式进行写作的,第一段提出问题,其中用了It is estimated that.和Why have.等较为复杂的句式；第二段说明理由,用词确切,如far better than the domestic应为较高级的词汇；第三段发表自己的看法,使用了含有条件状语从句的复合句,使文章的档次得以提高。总之,该文要点齐全,符合要求,但美中不足的是第三段中sending children.matter若改为it is not a bad matter sending children studying abroad 则更常见一些。仿写训练请你围绕“建设节约型社会,从我做起”的主题,根据下面的要点提示,用英语写一封倡议书。要点如下：1节约用水,避免不必要的浪费；2节约用电,离开时确保关掉灯及其他电器；3节约纸张等学习用品；4提醒父母及亲朋好友节约能源。注意：1词数150左右；2倡议书的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数；3内容可适当发挥,要注意行文连贯。Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build an “economized society”_【参考范文】Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build an “economized society”I think it is every citizens duty to achieve this goal.As middle school students,what should we do?We should focus our attention on details in our life.We should form the habit of saving water,especially when we brush our teeth and wash hands,and never leave water running unnecessarily.Meanwhile,we ought to save electricity.Whenever we leave classrooms or our homes,make sure that the lights and some electrical equipment have been turned off.Never keep the lights on in the daytime if unnecessary.We should also save every piece of paper as well as other materials.Whats more,we should remind our relatives and good friends as well as our parents to save energy.Dear fellow students,lets spare no effort to take action.书面表达突破(六)俗语/谚语类原题再现我国有一句著名的俗语“有志者,事竟成”。请以“Where There Is a Will,There Is a Way”为题写一篇150词左右的短文,并发表自己的看法。写作模板学生习作It is wellknown to us that the proverb俗语/谚语. It means that俗语/谚语的涵义. Indeed, we can learn many things from it.For one thing,列举1. For example,举例. For another,列举2