初中作文专题 青岛地区.doc

初中作文专题训练中考英语写好作文开头四方式1. “开门见山”式开头一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。 对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us. 对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money (时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time. But I dont think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back， but2. 回忆性开头在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.3. 疑问性开头在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Dont you think planting trees is 再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore？4. 倒叙式开头在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. Its a . Story.写好中考英语作文结尾四方式1.自然结尾，点明主题随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。2. 首尾呼应，升华主题在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.3. 反问结尾，引起深思这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can Dont you think learning English is great fun?4. 表达祝愿，阐述愿望这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers life will be better and better.另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。作文内容：常用连接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系的：What is more, Besides3.表转折对比关系的：However, but Although+clause（从句），On the one hand On the other hand Some, while others4.表因果关系的：Because, As ，So, Thus, Therefore, As a result5.表换一种方式表达：In other words6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；7.表陈述事实：In fact8.表达自己观点: In my opinion9.表总结：In a word. In summary文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。1.宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.2.状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.3.动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes. Its bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.4.常用状语从句句型：1）时间：when, notuntil, as soon as2）目的：so that+从句; to do（为了）3）结果：sothat+从句, tooto do（太以至于）4）条件：if, unless（除非）, as long as（只要）5）让步：though, although, even though, even if ，no matter what/when/where/who/which/how6)比较：asas, not soas, than重点句型: 1). It is said that + 句子 据说 It is reported that + 句子 据报道 2). There is no need to do 没必要做 3). Its adj for sb to do 做对某人来说 4). so /such that 如此 以至于 too to do 太 而不能 5). notuntil 直到才 例： I didnt go to bed until my mother came back。 6).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 的原因是 7). The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。) 8). That is why + 句子 那是的原因 9). That is because + 句子 那是因为 10). as we all know, +句子 据我们所知 11). it is generally/ publicly known / considered that, 众所周知2. 提建议 I suggest / advice that you should do 我建议你做 If I were you, I would do 我要是你的话，我会做 Its best to do 最好做 had better (not) do 最好(不)做 how about / what about doing 怎么样? I think you should do 我认为你应该 Why not do / why dont you do? 为什么不 3. 努力做 try to do努力做 try ones best to do = do ones best to do 竭尽全力做 do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做 4. 表示喜欢和感兴趣 like / love doing enjoy doing be fond of doing 喜欢做 prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing 5. 表示想/希望 want to do = would like to do 想做 hope to do 希望做 expect to do 期待着做 wish to do 希望做 consider doing 考虑做6. 打算做 / 计划做 plan to do 打算做 be going to do 打算做 decide to do 决定做 make up ones mind to do 下定决心做7.只加doing 作宾语的动词 finish 完成/ practice 练习 / suggest建议 / consider 考虑 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜欢 doing look forward to doing 盼望做 keep on doing 坚持做 dream of doing 梦想做 cant help doing 情不自禁地做 keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做 be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做 spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做 have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心 have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing 或 with + 名词 做有困难分享给你的朋友吧：i贴吧 新浪微博腾讯微博QQ空间人人网豆瓣MSN对我有帮助08年青岛真题X书面表达（共15分）暑假即将来临，某校学生会打算在假期举行为贫困地区和受灾地区（disaster area）的孩子们奉献受心的活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书，号召同学们，用力所能及的方式伸出援助之手，奉献自己的爱心。要求：1文中应包含：至少两种帮助方式；这样做的目的和意义。 2字数80-100；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear schoolmates,While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming .Lets do something to help them. As students, Students Union20080619 June 13,2008Dear schoolmates， While we are sitting in our bright classroomremember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badlySummer vacation is comingLets do something to help themAs students，we can give away our pocket money, school things, some of our clothes or toysWe can also donate some books to them in order to open up their eyes to the outside worldWe may raise money for charity by collecting used bottles, plastics, waste paper and so on, or by doing part-time jobs, such as, handing out advertisements, selling newspapers, and so onMaking pen pals with them will be a better way to help deal with problems in their study The more we devote/do, the better our world would be! (94 words) Students Union June l3200809年青岛真题近年来，随着人们物质生活水平的不断提高，对身心健康、精神生活的要求也在提高，请根据所给的五组图片内容，阐述人们是如何关注身心健康、丰富精神生活、陶冶情操的。要求：1词数80-100。 2请从五组图片中任选三组。捕捉每组图片的主要信息，适当结合自己、家人、朋友或周围人们的情况进行阐述，并简单表明你的观点。内容可以适当发挥。 3语言流畅，语法正确。开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：food, sports, travel, relax, serve,volunteer, lifestyle, habitThese years, our life is getting better and better. People begin to pay more attention to the healthy lifestyle. We try to make our life colorful and healthy. These years, our life is getting better and better. People begin to pay more attention to the healthy lifestyle. They try to make their life colorful and healthy. My friend, Toms family used to eat more meat or fried food. But now they realize healthy eating habit is very important, so they prefer more fruits and vegetables. In their spare time they often listen to music while reading or do something interesting at home. Sometimes they go to the concert to enjoy themselves. On holidays more and more people like to travel with their families because it really makes them relaxed and more energetic to concentrate on their work. I think healthy food and different relaxing activities will help us live healthily and happily. (96 words)2010年青岛真题为了生活得更舒适、便捷，人类在不断开发利用资源，研发高科技产品。与此同 时，我们的生存环境也会受到影响。为了建设资源节约型、环境友好型城市，青岛市 政府提出了“Creating beautiful environment, building pleasant homes”的理念。请以此为题，根据自己的亲身感受或所见所闻，用英语表达自己的看法。写作要求：1.参考图表中所给提示，任选两个方面，谈谈它们的利与弊。2.作为中学生，应该怎么做？怎样带动家人、朋友及社区的人们，为建设我们美 好的家园而努力。写出至少2种具体做法。3.词数80100。（标题和开头句不计入总词数）Creating Beautiful Environment, Building Pleasant Homes With the help of high technology，life is getting more and more comfortable and convenient.【写作指导】一、审题本篇作文的体裁为记叙文，要求谈谈在当今提倡环保的 时代，明确哪些做法有利于建设资源节约型、环境友好型城 市，为建设我们美好家园我们需要做些什么。时态用一般现 在时。写作时，要注意内容要点齐全，语言准确，宇数符合要 求，语篇连贯，短文和所给信息应融为一体。二、写作要点1.生活便捷:hightechnology, comfortable and convenient2.环境问题:causepollution3.具体傲法：walkto school, save water and energy, recyclewaste things4.产生效果：pleasant and beautiful三、重点短语及句型kinds of, all year round, cause pollution, at the same time,instead of, need to do，a bit, more pleasant and beautiful One possible versionCreating Beautiful Environment, Building Pleasant HomesWith the help of high technology，life is getting more and more comfortable and convenient. Most families have refrigerators, computers, mobile phones, cars and so on. We can eat kinds of fresh fruit and vegetables all year round.However, at the same time, green land has become less and more pollution has been caused.As students, we really need to do something, such as going to school on foot, by bicycle or by bus instead of by car. We should save water and energy at any time and anywhere. We could urge more people to recycle waste paper, bottles，batteries and many other things.If everyone does a bit, our homes will become more pleasant and beautiful.2011年真题假设你喜欢的老师是Mr. Wang 或者Ms. Wang.请根据下面的提示，以My favorite teacher 为题目，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1. 必须包括description friendship the best quality 三个方面的内容，括号内的提示可以任意选择或可以适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实姓名或学校。 3字数（80-100）（文章题目和开头已经给出，不计入总次数）favorite teacher: description (appearance, character)friendship (an event between you; the story of becoming friends)the best quality （kind; warm-hearted; strict; helpful）My favorite teacherMy favorite teacher is My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36- year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too. 2012年真题当前，学生的学校生活多姿多彩，业余爱好也丰富多样。下图是我们对某所中学300名学生业余爱好的调查结果。请根据以下要求，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.必须包括：调查结果你自己的爱好、选择的原因及带来的益处。 2.