高中英语 高考写作分类掌握 17主题句展开模式复习课件 新人教版.ppt

17 主题句展开的模式 主题 自信的重要性 观点论证 提出观点 self confidenceplaysanimportantroleinanythingwedo justasedisonsaid self confidenceisthefirstsecretofsuccess 论证 itisclearthatself confidencemeanstrustinone sabilities 晨读狂背语篇模板 正面论证 ifyouarefullofself confidence itwillbringyoucreativepowertoplay arouseyourenthusiasmforwork andhelpyouovercomedifficulties asaresult yourdreamswillcometrue 反面论证 onthecontrary ifyouhavenoconfidenceinyourself thereislittlepossibilitythatyouwouldeverachieveanything failurewillbefollowingyou itturnsoutthatallyourplansfallthrough 论证 noonecandenyanotherfactthatself confidencegivesyoulightwhenyouareinthedarkandencouragementwhenyouarediscouraged forexample thesecretofmadamcurieliesinperseveranceandself confidence thelatterinparticular 得出结论 fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove wemaydrawtheconclusionthatyoumusthaveself confidenceifyouwanttoachieveanything 在根据要点写好段落主题句后 就要围绕主题句展开 展开的方式主要有 灵活运用超级模仿 1 正反式 如就谈诚信与人生的关系这个话题 可以利用正反式的逻辑组织材料 诚信对人生的重要性 没有诚信的人会怎样 it sobviousthatanhonestpersonwilldefinitelywinrespectfromothers whichisofgreatimportanceinourstudyanddailylife letaloneinthebusinessworld however adishonestpersonwilllosehisfameandtrustfromotherssoonerorlater nomatterhowintelligentheis dishonestywillruinhisfuture 2 递进式 如谈论 儿童肥胖的不良影响 可以从身体上进而从精神上谈论肥胖对儿童造成的不良影响 asfarasweknow obesechildrentendtoeatalotbuttheytakelittleexercise asaresultofwhichtheyoftenfallilleasily besides becauseoftheirappearance theyhavelessconfidenceinthemselves whichleadstoisolationanddepression 3 列举式 如谈论个人对网上购物的看法 一方面利用正反式谈论其优点和缺点 另一方面利用列举式分别谈其优点和缺点 例如详写其优点 ononehand onlineshoppinghasitsadvantages firstly itismuchcheaper asfarasi mconcerned onlinestoresofferlowerpricestothecustomersandsomedon tchargedeliveryfeeifwebuymorethanone secondly itismoreconvenientascustomersneedn twalktostoreafterstoreforwhattheylike andit seasierforthemtocompareproductsonline 4 相关式 指围绕对事物起决定作用的相关因素来谈论问题 如就 如何减少交通事故 的主题谈论人们应该如何避免交通事故 我们就可以围绕造成交通事故的相关因素如司机和行人来谈论如何避免 whatcanwedotoavoidtrafficaccidents 1 astodrivers keeptheiremotionsundercontrol respectothers 2 astowalkers pedestriansandcyclists strictlyobeythetrafficrules valuetheirownlives 5 细化主题句 就 压力对学生的影响 发表自己的看法 itisobviousthattoomuchpressureisharmfultousstudents asweknow pressurenotonlydestroysourmotivationforstudybutalsoruinsourhealth 6 说明结果或后果 你对国家 禁止商场免费提供塑料袋 的看法 itisnecessaryforthegovernmenttoforbidshopsfromofferingfreeplasticbags withthisban shoppingcustomerswouldgraduallyformahabitofbringingenvironmentally friendlybagswiththemsothattheconsumptionofplasticbagswouldbegreatlyreduced 写作内容 以约120个词对留堂这一做法进行议论 内容包括 你或你同学的留堂经历 你对留堂制度的看法 列举式 其它督促学生认真学习的办法 ifstudentsfailtofollowthomasjeffersonhighschool srequirements theywouldbegivendetentionsaspunishment reasonsfordetentionincludelateorincompletehomeworkandotherdisturbingbehaviors thisremindsmeofmyfriendlihua sexperienceinprimaryschool oneday hewastalkingwithanotherclassmateinclassalthoughtheteacherhadwarnedhimseveraltimes asaresult hehadtostayforanextrahourafterschool inmyopinion detentionhasitsadvantagesineducatingmisbehavedstudents foronething withthedetentionpolicy westudentswilllearnthatweshouldberesponsibleforourbehavior foranotherthing thepolicycanmakeusfinishourhomeworkontime whichisgoodforouracademicdevelopment however thereareoth