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2014高考英语 最新原创短文改错15篇1 last sunday, i went on sightseeing with my friends in the fairy lake park. the park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shone and birds singing. when i was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, anything unpleasant caught my eye. the young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughed loudly as if they were the only people in the world. whats worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, total ignoring the noticeable sign,“no littering”nearby. what a shame! so behavior left me deeply in thought. if all visitors to the fairy lake do like the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. i think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. 2three years ago i was failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. disappointed although i felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, i found the teacher patient and considerate. therefore, i enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. i decided to make the best of it. i worked hard and got along good with myteachers and classmates. whenever i was in difficulties, they were always available. soon, i became one of top students in my class, which great increased my confidence and got me motivated. my experience tells me that it is not what you are given and how you make use of it which determines who you are. 3conflicts with others are common in everyday life. during the basketball game yesterday afternoon, su hua and li jiang bumped into each other, try to catch the ball. then he started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.to be honest, it was su fault but li was also to blamethey were not calm down enough and both said some really mean things. they cared too much about winning and losing. as a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of tough game.to avoid so conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoy a harmonious life. it is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especial in such a competitive and stressful society. instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put us in others place.dont be self-centered or try to be considerate. we must learn to handle conflicts calmly andwisely.4as a student reader, i am writing to talk about the english textbooks publishing by your house. these books have many advantages. one of them is that we can find variety of topics, such as science, culture or history. these topics, i think, is very popular with us students. whats worse, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand english better. even the students who are used to dislike english have turned to be interested in the subject. however, some of the texts have too much new words and expressions which are hard for us. besides, id like to suggest changing them into easy ones.best regards,li hua5as a high school student, i consider english a very important subject. in order to learn it well, apart from english class, i took active part in english corner and other after-class english activities, which benefits me a lot. in the english corner, i meet many friends, they share the same interest with me. however, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join in us. by talking with them, my oral english improved a lot. i also find that useful to keep english diaries. i keep on doing them these years and it is helpful to my english. like a saying goes, practice makes perfect. only by practice will we make more progress. finally, some good english study websites contribute a lot for my improvement. through these websites, i can read some classic english passages, poems and stories. whats more, i can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process. all in all, every road leads to roma, and i believe hard work pays off. 6ms. li, our english teacher, should have found it strange on teachers day; she did not receive a single greeting card from our students. she would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.as teachers day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for change this year. in the afternoon of september 10，some of whom decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and other went to buy cakes, drinks or fruits. the blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which are read “happy teachers day!”enter the classroom, ms. li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “happy teachers day!” .wang hua, our monitor, presented him with the prepared flowers. some of the girls sang songs to ms. li, and three boys showed their gongfu talent.after we left, we enjoyed a new english song by ms. li.ms. li spent a wonderful time with us, and we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.7.dear ms li, i am very happy to have you as us english teacher.with the world is becoming a global village, english is getting more and more important,but mastering english means you can see the world through a new window.my english is just ok and the two main problems in my study are that i feel that difficult to learn words by heart, and that i often feel nervous when spoken english. i really hope that you can give me good advices on how to memorize new words. other suggestion is to give us many chances to practice speaking. i believe we can make much more progress in english with your help.thank you! 8in the english reading week, one of my classmate recommended a quote to us, that goes like this; your future depends on many things, but most on you. i cant agree much with this view. its true our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, and our own attitude, determination, and hard work plays a more important role. in other words, we are the master of our own future.take abraham lincoln, for an example. he was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. yet from his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of america. even to this day. lincoln was regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. therefore, i firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.9how is everything going? i feel terrible sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. you know, ive been prepared for the final exams these days, and i forgot to write back. in your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. now, i am writing to tell you about some specific details.over all, three things will make your summer vacation meaningful. to start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and i intended to work as a salesman because not only i earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. in addition, it is a good choice to visit some famous scenic spot such as mount tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealed scenery and make more friends. what is more, doing voluntary work, i think, will make a great contribution to the society, that is able to enrich my life. i sincerely apologize again for my mistake. by the way, which is your plan to spend your summer vacation? i am looking forward to your reply.yours sincerely,10ive learned that an art exhibition is to be held and youre collecting suggestions on its location. im writing that letter to share with you my opinions. in my opinion, it is much advisable to hold the art exhibition in shanghai museum than in community libraries. my reasons are as following.on one hand, it is more convenient to people to get to shanghai museum which is located in the center of the city. and a museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provide visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.on the other hand, as a well-known museum, shanghai museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. its professional security guards and advanced facility can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged and stolen.therefore, i suggest the exhibition is held in the museum.11how learning habits influence on learning results.its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. here is a famous saying “good habits lead to good endings.” , it shows the importance of habits.“an apple a day keeps doctor away .”also shows how a healthy everyday habit helps to build our body. thus, good learning habits can help us gain great learning results included high scores and abundant knowledge . at first, learning habits form our ways of thinking and attitude towards the content of our learning. obviously, a good habit can help ourselves to speed up to reach our destinations. which we can see,cultivating a good habit is such important that i would like to introduce one kind of good learning habits-keep a learning diary every day. you can start the habit by writing learning summary and remember to record everything impressive and meaningful. keeping it in mind, and gradually we can gain this good learning habit and benefit from it.12my deskmate admires my fluent english very much, but i usually feel encouraged by his compliments. one day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we asked to make a sentence with it. i volunteered to do it by saying “my deskmate is an eccentric boy which clothes never fit on him.” hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmates faces turned red. after class, i learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school unless he hadnt helped by others. my mindless words should have hurt him deeply.not until then did i realize words could be powerful in all positive and negative ways. we should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraged when we speak.13good afternoon, my dear friends.my name is li jin. im outgoing and getting on well with my classmates and teachers. i am skilling in organizing all kinds of activities. id like to run the vice president of the english club in our school. i know as the vice president, i must do the following thing for the club: i will try to make it know to every student and more students involved in the activities are organized by the club. also, to improve our english and get more students interesting in english, i intend to organize some activities at school as lectures, english parties and inter-school ones, such as english debate competitions or speech contests. i hope all of them will vote for me. thank you.14how are you doing? im writing to tell you that my uncle li ming is going to my city for a conference, and ive been asked him to take you the chinese painting youve asked before.also, id like you to do me the favor. would you please meet my uncle in the airport and take him to his hotel if this is his first visit to the u.s.? thank you in advance!his flight number is ca985, so it will arrive at 11:30 am, august 6. my uncle is tall and he is wearing glass. and he will be dressing in a blue jacket.look forward to your reply.yours,li hua15how are you doing? i wonder if you could sell some chinese knots to me. i made it myself with red silk threads, clothes and other materials. they look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, which about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. in china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. people can either give them as gifts to friends and hang them in their houses. every of them is only 12.99 us dollars. if anyone wants to know much about the knots, let them to write to me. also, do let me know if they need further informations. thank you!答案1last sunday, i went on sightseeing with my friends in the fairy lake park. the park was 去掉full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shone and birds singing. when i was shiningenjoying the 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