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2015届钟吾培训中心高三复习-书面表达专练书面表达专练（四）-读写作文写作指导：第一段：概括所给短文内容要点注意利用原文中所给的语言材料，用自己的话来写；概括后的文章意思要通顺，行文要连贯。写作具体方法和要求:1. 第一段概括要做到开门见山，要抓住要点, 语言精练, 内容需涵盖who, what happened, how 等。例如:1) According to the passage, we know2) This article is mainly about3) The writer states that4) As can be learnt from this passage, 5) As the passage says, 2. 第二段要做到有层次感：过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由。必要时概括段中运用firstly,secondly,lastly,或but, so等来列出原文作者观点或内容。第二段的开头用语：I do agree with the authorIn some way, I agree with , butThis opinion sounds right but is hardly practical.It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact, From my personal angle aloneIn my opinion,From my personal point of viewAs far as Im concernedIt reminds me of I also experience such a before. When I As to me3. 第三段最后一段总结句开头用语：In conclusion,In short / brief,To make a long story short,In general,In a word,On the whole,All in all,To sum up / conclude ,阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。The crowd at the airport moved forward like waves. The passengers had been waiting for a couple of hours for an airline employee to open the door leading to the plane outside. No one was in a good mood. An old man got trapped in the middle of the rush. Suddenly, he fell down, his head hitting the concrete floor, with blood gushing from his forehead. He appeared to be unconscious. Everyone rushed past him, except for Dana. She called for help.A minute later, a young airline employee showed up. Hardly looking at the old man, she told Dana to get aboard her plane. She said the old man would be okay, and walked away.Dana screamed for help. An airport supervisor appeared. He told Dana to get on the plane. Dana said that she was not moving until an ambulance arrived. The supervisor said her plane would leave without her. Dana said that she didnt care.An ambulance and two doctors finally arrived. The paramedics said that the man would be okay, but he would need stitches（缝线）. They put him into the ambulance and drove off.On her way out to the plane, which was still refueling, Dana saw the employee who had ignored the old man. The employee said, “Youre lucky the plane didnt leave without you.”“The plane?” Dana asked. “Who cares about the plane? How could you be so cold? That was an old man; he could have been your grandfather! How would you like it if everyone just stepped over your grandfather and went on their way?”【写作内容】1、以约30词概括上文的主要内容；2、以约120词谈谈你阅读了该故事后的感受，内容包括：(1) 当时在场的人是怎样的一种心理？(2) 如果你当时也在场，你将如何处理？(3) 你对整个事件作如何评价？【写作要求】1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【考点】考察读写任务类短文【写作指导】本文首先要注意分成两个部分，第一部分要介绍短文内容。要和短文一样使用一般过去时；在第二部分的感受中，要说明当时的人的心态，并假设你在场会如何处理。以及对整个事件的评价。要点：第一部分要点：在等候上飞机的时候，一位老人摔倒了，同时飞机就要起飞了，Dana没有抛下老人，而是一直等到救护车到来。而另外一些很冷漠的人关心的是自己是否能够及时赶上飞机。第二部分：当时在场的人都关心的是自己，在乎是自己的事情；如果自己在场，自己也会和Dana一样。会主动打电话给医院，或者自己带着老人去医院。【一句多译】如果我在场，我好不怀疑地迅速采取行动，带着他去最近的医院。If I were present, I would undoubtedly act quickly, carrying him and rushing for the nearest hospital.If I were present, I would undoubtedly act quickly, carry him and rush for the nearest hospital.【参考范文】Possible version:According to the passage, we know that ready to get aboard, an old man suddenly got fainted, head bleeding. The rest of the passengers, including the airline employee walked past except Dana, who accompanied him until an ambulance came to his rescue.Psychologically (在内心里), the passengers must have been feeling sorry. However, already a couple of hours wasted, they couldnt wait to board the plane. That way, it could take off sooner and reach their destinations earlier. Similarly, the employee didnt want to cause more delays and complaints.If I were present, I would undoubtedly act quickly, carrying him and rushing for the nearest hospital. For me, life cant be more precious. How could I walk my way ignoring a bleeding being?Certainly, we cant blame passengers for their indifference. It was understandable when they rushed their way once time was due. However, the staff of the airport should bear the responsibility to ensure every passengers safety. It was nobody but they that were offering service.阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。I have a friend Monty Roberts who owns a horse ranch (牧马场) in San Ysidro. When he was a senior, he was asked to write a paper about what he wanted to be and do when he grew up.The next day he handed it in to the teacher. On the front was a large red F. The boy with the dream asked, “Why did I receive an F?”The teacher said, “This is an unrealistic dream for a young boy like you. You have no money. You come from an itinerant（四处奔波的）family. You have no resources. Owning a horse ranch requires a lot of money. You have to buy the land. You have to pay for the original breeding stock and later youll have to pay large stud fees. Theres no way you could ever do it.”He stated, “You can keep the F and Ill keep my dream.”The best part of the story is that two summers ago that same schoolteacher brought 30 kids to camp out on his ranch for a week. When the teacher was leaving, he said, “Look, Monty, I can tell you this now. When I was your teacher, I was something of a dream stealer. During those years I stole a lot of kids dreams. Fortunately you had enough belief not to give up on yours.”【写作内容】学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“坚守信念”的讨论。读完Monty Roberts 的故事之后，你准备写一份发言稿，主题是 “Belief can change ones fate” ，内容要点包括：1. 以约30个词概括Monty Roberts的成长故事；2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你对信念的看法，内容包括：(1) 坚守信念对一个人成长的重要性；(2) 举一个例子去论证“坚守信念能改变人的命运”；(3) 你的感想。【写作要求】1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直 接引用原文中的句子；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。One possible versionThis passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he didnt give up his dream all the time, eventually succeeded in owning a horse ranch.For a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life. As a saying goes, “Wherethereisawill, thereisaway.” Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorful life. Otherwise,