低碳四级写作.doc

四级写作，考试必过！ 2010-12-08 21:42 | (分类:默认分类) 一花一世界，一沙一天堂，下面虽然是一篇文章，但是聪明的同学一定可以看出，其实给出的是一类话题的模板“问题解决型”！2010年6月，四级、六级同时考到的就是这种天煞的题型！大家好好参考，四六级必过！Low Carbon Life 1.现在流行低碳生活 2.为什么要倡导低碳生活 3.如何做到低碳生活 You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.第一段“what,背景是什么？”1.变流行 低碳生活变得越来越流行了。 The low carbon life is becoming more and more popular. 大家注意，妖都是妖他妈生的，人都是人他妈生的，爷爷都是从孙子过来的，长难句的前身一定是超级简单的简单句，所以，不要奢求上来就写出长难句，而是把最主要信息表达清楚就可以了。 现在进行升级！如何描述一个现象变流行？ (1)Along with the process of modernization, the low carbon life is becoming increasingly prevalent. (2) As is known to all, the new lifestyle which was called low carbon life is sweeping across the globe. (3) The dawn of the new century has witnessed a phenomenon that the low carbon life is spread every corner of the world.2.造影响 低碳生活会对我们产生影响。（千万要忍住，先造出简单句，然后升级） The low carbon life，which widely arouses public attention, has exerted a profound impact (influence) on individuals, families as well as the whole society.第二段“why？1起 (启动观点) 写法一：Why do we advocate and pursue low carbon life? There are several obvious=apparent=evident=conspicuous factors, the factors which cannot be ignored. 写法二：万能句：A number of factors could explain=illustrate=account for the trend, but the following might be the most critical ones.2承 （内容承接） 发展低碳生活的好处： 1. comfortable space 2. to improve the quality of life 3. cutting down expenses and energy resources 发展低碳生活的必要性： 1. environmental degradation and pollution (environment worse) greenhouse gases/ global warming/ iceberg dissolution 2. unnecessary and exorbitant waste 不必要和过度浪费 serious waste of the resources 资源过度浪费下面是原因说明：To begin with, it is widely acknowledged that we may live in space of the comfortable, fragrant and green environmental protection by advocating ecological friendly lifestyles(绿色生活方式). In addition, this life, undoubtedly, will improve peoples qualify of life and cut down expenses and energy resources. （插足原则，放在主谓之间，不动用你任何语法基本功） Last but not least, our Mother Earth is suffering environmental degradation(恶化) and pollution suchas greenhouse gases, global warming and iceberg dissolution(融化)，which have ruined global climate and given rise to a series of negative consequences. （写到degradation and pollution千万别写句号，一划逗号你的句子注定很短，而且没有细节，聪明的学生都懂得举例子,说几个环境恶化表现。）3转 （语意转折） If we ignore these points, we may pay a heavy price, which we cannot afford.4合 （总结概括） Consequently, taking into account all these features, we may safely draw a conclusion that creating the low carbon life is of utmost significance.第三段“how？1. 呼吁 虚拟语气：It is high time+ that+主语+did （是做某件事情非常紧急和迫切的时刻了。） 问题如此严重，我们必须马上解决这个问题。 It is high time that we took effective, constant, prompt, dependable(可靠的), concrete(具体的) measures=actions=steps to advocate=bring about=accomplish this life.（玩点语言修饰的花活，多用形容词包装名词）2. 政府 First and foremost, the relevant law and regulations should be worked out=established=made=set by governments at all levels.3. 群众 Even more important, people ought to launch educational campaign to enhance the awareness of environm