我手写我心新目标8下英语作文期末复习.ppt

我手写我心 新目标英语八年级 下 书面表达专题课件 ByMr Zhu星沙英语 Hello dearfriends AreyouafraidofwritingEnglishcompositions Infact theyareverysimple Weneedn tfearthem Weallknow 英语作文不可怕 不过就是几句话 Right Now herearesomeofourcompositions Let stakealooktogether Andthinkhowtocorrectthemistakes OK let sbegin 八年级下Units7 8定时作业书面表达 10分 每个人在日常生活中都会遇到一些令人气愤的事情 请你根据下面提示 以第一人称英语写一篇短文 要求包含下面提供的信息 不少于60词 提示 你的邻居喜欢听音乐 甚至晚上音乐声也很大 影响了你的生活和学习 为此 你很生气 最后 你找到了你的邻居 你的邻居表示歉意 参考词汇 neighbor makenoise can tstand anymore wouldyoumind saysorry 原文一 08 22007 6 158分 Dearneighborhood Iknowyou reveryhappy butIcan tstandyouandyourfamilyanymore Wouldyoumindturningdownthemusic Pleasedon tmakenoisyeveryday Yourmusicsoundisverybig It sinfulusmylifeandlearn SoI mangrywithyou I msaysorrytoyou Yours sincelly Mandy 修改稿 Dearneighborhood neighbor Iknowyou reveryhappy butIcan tstandyouandyourfamilyanymore Wouldyoumindturningdownthemusic Pleasedon tmakenoisyeveryday makeanynoise somuchnoiseeveryday Yourmusicsound 删去 isverybig very tooloud It sinfulus Itinfuences mylifeandlearn study SoI mangrywithyou I msaysorrytoyou Ithinkyoushouldsaysorrytome Yours 删去逗号 sincelly Mandy 删去句号 原文二 08 22007 6 157分 Myneighborsarelikelisteningmusic Andtheylisteningmusiceveryday Thatmadealotofnoise It sbadformylifeandstudy Onenight myneighborswerelisteningmusic Themusicwasveryloudly Ican tsleep SoIwasveryangry Ican tstanditanymore SoIfoundmyneighbor Wouldyoumindturningdownthemusic No notatall Andtheysaysorrytome 修改稿 Myneighborsare 删去 likelisteningtomusic Andtheylisteningmusiceveryday listentomusiceveryday Thatmade Itmakes alotofnoise It sbadformylifeandstudy Onenight myneighborswerelisteningmusic Themusicwasveryloudly loud Ican tsleep SoIwasveryangry Ican t couldn t standitanymore SoIfoundmyneighbor wenttomyneighbors houseandsaid Wouldyoumindturningdownthemusic No notatall Andtheysay said sorrytome 原文三 08 22007 6 156分 Myneighborliketolistentomusic Sometimes themmakenoiseverylound Influencemylifeandstudy Ican tstandit Ifindmyneighbor toldthem Wouldyoumindturningdownthemusic Usually I mmadatthem Howeverneighborsaysorry Idon taguewiththem 修改稿 Myneighbor neighbors liketolistentomusic Sometimes themmakenoiseverylound theymaketoomuchloudnoise Influence Itinfluences mylifeandstudy Ican tstandit anymore So oneday Ifindmyneighbor wentandfoundmyneighbors I toldthem Wouldyoumindturningdownthemusic Usually I mmadatthem However my neighborsaysorry So Idon tague argue withthem 原文四 08 22007 6 157分 Ican tstandmyneighborhood Becausemyneighborhoodlikelistenningthemusic Ithinkthismusicisnoisy SoIsay DearMrGreen Wouldyoumindturningdwonthemusic MrGreensay Ohsorry Thismusicisverymuch SoIforget Isay DearMrGreen thankyouverymuch 修改稿 Ican tstandmyneighborhood neighbor Becausemyneighborhood neighbor likelistenningthe likeslisteningto music Ithinkthis the musicis too noisy SoIsay DearMrGreen Wouldyoumindturningdwon down themusic MrGreensay says Ohsorry Thismusic Thispieceofmusic isverymuch great verybeautiful SoIforget forgot Isay DearMrGreen thankyouverymuch 原文五 08 12007 6 157分 Ihaveaneighbor Heveryliketolistenmusic Heoftenlistenmusicallday Everatnight ThemusicismakesomuchnoisythatIcan tstadlywell Oneday Ican tstandsolondlynoisyanymore SoIwenttohishouseandasked Wouldyoumindturingdownthemusic BecauseIcan tstadlywell AndIdon thaveagoodrest Finally theneighborsaidsorrytomeandagreeturedownthemusic I mveryhappy BecauseIhaveagoodrestandIcanstadyquaitlynow 修改稿 Ihaveaneighbor Heveryliketolistenmusic Helikestolistentomusicverymuch Heoftenlisten listensto musicallday Ever Andheplaysmusicevenlouder atnight Themusicis 删去 make makes somuchnoisy noise thatIcan tstadly study well Oneday Ican t couldn t standsolondlynoisy theloudnoise anymore SoIwenttohishouseandasked Wouldyoumindturing turning downthemusic Because 删去 Ican tstadly study well AndIdon t can t haveagoodrest everynight Finally theneighborsaidsorrytomeandagreeturedown agreedtoturndown themusic I mveryhappy Because because I can haveagoodrestandIcanstadyquaitly studyquietly now 二 七年春期定时作业八年级英语 Units1 2 学生作文 书面表达 10分 每个人都有自己的理想 请以MyIdeal为题写一篇畅谈理想的作文 要求 1 词数80词左右 2 写出自己的真实感受 3 提示词必须用上 提示 wanttobe inthefuture will cometrue 原文1 MyIdeal 08 3 Intenyears IthinkI llbeaactressandliveinShanghai BecauseIhard heard think Shanghaiisverynice Asaactress IthinkI llactalotofinterestingmovies AndIthinkI llbecomefamous Iwanttokeeppets Ilovepetsverymuch Andmybestpetsarecatanddog Ithinkthemareverycult Imightevenwanttotraveltheworld Butniw Ihavetofinishhighschoolandwillfinishcollege 词数 85词 作文得分 8分 全卷得分 88分 修改稿 MyIdeal 08 3 Intenyears IthinkI llbeaactress anactress andliveinShanghai BecauseIhard heard think Shanghaiisverynice Asaactress anactress IthinkI llactalotofinterestingmovies AndIthinkI llbecome very famous Iwanttokeeppets Ilovepetsverymuch Andmybestpetsarecatanddog catsanddogs Ithinkthem they areverycult cute Imightevenwanttotraveltheworld Butniw now Ihavetofinishhighschoolandwillfinish 删去 college 原文2 MyIdeal 08 1 Iwanttobeafamousbasketballplayer Iwillmakealotofmoney Iwillbuysomegitfsformyfriend familyandteacher Iwilltravelaroundtheworld Iwillmeetlotsofpeople Iwillhaveanypets Iamlikeparrotverymuch IwillliveinShanghaiinthefuture Ihopemydreamwillcometrueinthefuture 词数 67词 作文得分 9分 全卷得分 分 修改稿 MyIdeal 08 1 Iwanttobeafamousbasketballplayer Iwillmakealotofmoney Iwillbuysomegitfsformyfriend friends familyandteacher teachers Iwilltravelaroundtheworld Iwillmeetlotsofpeople Iwillhaveanypets pet Iam 删去 likeparrotverymuch IwillliveinShanghaiinthefuture Ihopemydreamwillcometrueinthefuture 3 MyIdeal 08 3 Iisastudent MyIdealverypoorly Iwanttobeadoctor ButIindoctorveryIwillisgooddoctor 可以这样把话写通顺 Iamastudent Ihaveagoodideal Iwanttobeadoctorinthefuture Imuststudyveryhardnow Iwillbeagooddoctor AndIcanhelpmanysickpeople Ibelievethatmydreamwillcometrue 词数 24词 作文得分 3分 全卷得分 43分 范文 MyIdeal Mr Zhu写的范文 Hello dearfriends Letmetellyousomethingaboutmyideal OK IthinkIwanttobeacomputerprogrammerinthefuture ThenIwillbeveryfamous I llworkandliveinBeijingbecauseit saverybeautifulcity I llmeetmanyinterestingpeoplethere AndI llliveinanapartmentwithmyfamily becauseIlovemyfamilyverymuch I llkeepmanypets Butnow myhouseistoosmall andmysisterhatesthemverymuch Well thisismyideal Ihopemydreamwillcometruesoon Whataboutyours Canyoutellme 字数 102词 作文得分 9 99999分 全卷得分 99 99999分 8下半期考试书面表达 八 书面表达 5分 英语作文不可怕 不过就是几句话 同学们 只要你们平时注意英语知识的积累 多读多写 英语作文就肯定能拿高分 现在 就请用你们的最熟悉的单词和最简单的句子 向大家介绍一下你自己吧 题目就用 Myself 至少写5句话 原文一 Myself 08 2 MynameisMary Iamaoutgoinggril IhavelongblackhearandIhaveblackbigeyes IthinkIpopularatschool Ihavetoomunhfrinds AndMybestfrindsisLily Sheveryshy Manypepolesaidwebothlooklike ButIdon tthikso Thisisme Ifyouwanttoknowme pleacewritealetterforme 字数 67词 作文得分 3 5分 满分为5分 全卷得分 60分 修改稿 Myself 08 2 MynameisMary Iama an outgoinggril girl Ihavelongblackhear hair andIhaveblackbig bigblack eyes IthinkI am popularatschool Ihavetoomunhfrinds toomanyfriends AndMybestfrinds friend isLily She is veryshy Manypepole people said say webothlooklike lookthesame ButIdon tthik think so Thisisme Ifyouwanttoknowme pleace please writealetterfor to me 原文二 Myself 08 1 Hello everyone Iamisamiddleschoolstudent IliveinYuejiangtwon I misagoodstudent IlikeEnglisheverymuch IthinkI sgoodatwrite Ilikemath too Iusuallyreadbooksinclassroom Ilikemakefriends Ifyouwanttobecomemyfriends youcanmeetmeatYuejiangMiddleSchool MynameisMary 字数 64词 作文得分 3 5分 满分为5分 全卷得分 85 5分 修改稿 Myself 08 1 Hello everyone Iamis 删去 amiddleschoolstudent IliveinYuejiangtwon YuejiangTown thetownofYuejiang atowncalledYuejiang I mis 删去 agoodstudent IlikeEnglishevery very much IthinkI s I m goodatwrite writing Ilikemath too Iusuallyreadbooksin the classroom Ilikemake making friends Ifyouwanttobecomemyfriends youcanmeetmeatYuejiangMiddleSchool MynameisMary 原文三 Myself 08 3 Hello MynameisSelia I mastudent I m14yearsold AndI maChinese Ilikeplayingping pongandbasketball Ilikeeatsomehealthyfood myfavoritstarsare183club Ilovethemverymuch IlovelisteningtomusicandwatchingTV Ithinkit sveryinteresting IlikeEnglish andIlikemyEnglishteachertoo Areyoulikeme Iwanttomakefriendswithyou 字数 73词 作文得分 4 5分 满分为5分 全卷得分 85 5分 修改稿 Myself 08 3 Hello MynameisSelia I mastudent I m14yearsold AndI ma 删去 Chinese Ilikeplayingping pongandbasketball Ilikeeat eating some 删去 healthyfood my My favorit favorite starsare183club Ilovethemverymuch IlovelisteningtomusicandwatchingTV Ithinkit sveryinteresting IlikeEnglish andIlikemyEnglishteachertoo Are Do youlikeme Iwanttomakefriendswithyou 8