（精选+详解）高三英语 名校试题汇编（第4期）专题16书面表达（教师版）.doc

（精选+详解）2013届高三英语 名校试题汇编（第4期）专题16书面表达（教师版）【2013届江苏南京二模】为了减少舌尖上的浪费，许多城市发起了“光盘行动”，倡导在日常生活中要注意节约粮食，就餐时，要吃光盘中的饭菜。你的笔友lily想了解一些关于“光盘行动”的情况，请阅读下面信件，根据要求写一封回信。dear david，five years have passed since we last met in nanjing. a campaign called clearing your plate is reported to be very popular throughout many big cities in china. it sounds very interesting. could you please tell me what clearing your plate exactly mean? why do people launch the campaign? and how is it going in your city? besides, id like to know your opinion about it.looking forward to your reply.best wishes,yours truly.lily注意：1.根据来信内容，结合实际，适当发挥。2.词数150左右。回信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及考生所在的学校和本人的姓名。dear lily，very glad to hear from you. as for the campaign called clearing your plate. _ best regards,yours faithfully,david 【解题指导】学校餐厅中学生就餐浪费现象是全国各高中学校面临的问题，几乎每个高中生都目睹过这种现象。此话题贴近学生生活，让学生有话可写，符合高考命题的要求。成文时应注意：1. 四段成文：（1）引出话题光盘行动；（2）发起光盘行动的原因；（3）结合实际进一步说明；（4）提出自己的意见。2. 人称：以第一、三人称为主；3. 时态：用一般现在时。【参考范文】dear lily,very glad to hear from you. as for the campaign called clearing your plate，its proposed by some citizens with the purpose of building a resource-saving and environment-friendly society.several reasons contribute to the launch of the campaign. firstly, while dining out, we tend to order more food than we can consume，which inevitably causes waste and has aroused public concern. secondly, people in poverty-stricken areas suffer starvation, some of whom even die of hunger. if we save food，their sufferings can be relieved to some extent. thirdly, people have realized saving food is a good virtue and can be beneficial to sustainable development of society as well.during the spring festival, people in nanjing took effective action. almost all restaurants put up signs saying you can order half portion as you wish and encourage people to take away the leftovers. personally, im in favor of the campaign because its by doing so that we will develop the good habit of saving food and respecting others7 labor. thus，an all-round and well-off society can be established.best regards,yours faithfully, david【2013届河北省保定一模】假设你是李华，david是你的美国笔友。他对目前中国出现的雾霾天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写回信。主要内容如下：1.感谢他的关注。2.简介雾霾天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害。3.谈谈你的感想。注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅；开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；词数：100左右dear david,im glad to receive your letter._yours li hu【2013届河北省衡水中学第一次模拟】书面表达假如你是某中学高三学生李华，刚刚收到美国笔友sarah发来的一封电子邮件，请你用英语给她回复一封邮件，具体内容包括：1. 学习科目、作息时间；2. 课余活动（运动、阅读、上网）;3. 理想大学及选择的原因。注意：1. 词数：120词左右；头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语以为你写好。dear sarah,im very glad to receive your last e-mail. at your request, id like to tell you something about my school life._best regards, li hua【参考范文】dear sarah,im very glad to receive your last e-mail. at your request, id like to tell you something about my school life.this year i am senior 3, and i have six subjects to learn every day. school hours usually begin at 7 am and end at 8:30 pm. we are making the most of every minute, preparing for the coming college entrance examination. though time is precious, i try to do some sports or do some reading after class. sometimes, too, i surf the internet to update and amuse myself.its been my dream to go to peking university ever since i went to senior high school because of its strong cultural atmosphere as well as its high academic status.id appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life as well. im looking forward to it.best regards, li hua【2013届山东德州第一次模拟】假如你是育才中学的学生会主席李华，准备邀请本市某高校的外籍教授brown来校做报告，请根据以下要点用英语写一封电子邮件： 1自我介绍，表达邀请意愿； 2说明报告的时间，地点，内容等； 3告知自己的联系方式等。 注意：1词数120150； 2可适当增加细节。dear mr. brown， yours， li hua【参考范文】im li hua, chairman of the students union of yucai high school. there are 2,000 students in our school, most of whom are interested in learning english. but now most of us are puzzled in learning it better and how to grasp so many english words and idioms. in addition, we are willing to know more about the family life in america. now on behalf of the students union, i am to invite you to give us a lecture. i wonder whether you can give us some guidance about the ways of grasping the vocabulary and americans family life at 15:00 this friday on the third floor of the stadium.once you make up a decision, please send an email to l or call me at 055555555. looking forward to your reply.【亮点说明】本文是一封邀请信，格式已经给出。文章首先向收信人介绍了自己，然后说明自己写信的目的。结构清晰，语言简洁。文章中使用了多个句子结构，如：定语从句”., most of whom are.”, 宾语从句“ i wonder .”; 还运用了许多固定结构，如 be interested in, be puzzled in, in addition 等等。【2013届河南郑州市第一次模拟】如今，社会上仍有某些不文明现象。请你仔细观察右面四幅图画，就此写一篇英语短文向某英文报社投稿。 要求： 1描述图画内容； 2就图画中的不文明现象谈谈自己的看法； 3词数：100左右（开头已为你写好，不计入总词数）； 4可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：闯红灯run the red light at present we are living in the best agehowever，there are still a small number of people who dont act responsibly_【答案】at present we are living in the best age. however, there are still a small number of people who dont act responsibly. their bad behaviors ar out of place in our civilized society. for example, some people often ignore traffic rules and risk their lives to run the red light. littering is still a serious problem. in addition, its not unusual to hear someone speaking loudly on their cellphones in public places. worse still, you can even find silly things written by some tourists in scenic spots.as far as i am concerned, everyone should learn to become a responsible citizen. we must be aware the way we behave in public places will affect others. as long as we kick some of our bad habits and care about others, we will make a great difference to our society.【2013届河南商丘市第一次月考】书面表达明天是期中考试的最后一天,上午考完英语后,学生会将组织同学们去爬紫金山。请你将此事用便条的方式通知你校的外籍学生。要求全文包括以下内容：1争取考好英语；2十点整排队,步行到紫金山（the purple mountain）山脚；3穿运动鞋,带好食物和水；4要互相帮助,特别注意安全,不能擅自离队；5在山顶,班级合影留念；6下山后,可步行或乘车回家。注意：1词数100左右；2开头已为你写好。3学生会thestudents unionboys and girls, it will be the last day of mid-term examination tomorrow,and i hope all of you will try your best to do well in your last exam _english.after that ,the students union is going to organize a mountainclimbing activity.the team will start at 10 oclock and then walk to the foot of the purple mountain.please wear sports shoes and take some food and water with you.in the course of the mountainclimbing,please donnot leave your class without permission.on the top of the mountain,each class is going to have a picture taken.after going downhill,you cannot either walk home or take a bus.【2013届河北省唐山市上学期期末】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，是2013年佛罗里达冬令营的组织者，请你给joe回一封电子邮件，介绍冬令营的相关情况。内容主要包括：1时间：2013年1月27日至2月13日2活动内容（英语课程、与接待家庭度周末、参观迪士尼乐园等）3预期收获（语言、文化等）注意：1词数100。左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：佛罗里达冬令营florida winter camp迪士尼乐园disneytan,4dear joe,thanks for your mail. im glad to know you are interested in the 2013 florida winter camp. it will be held from january 27 to february 13, during which time you will get wonderful experiences. you will have chances to improve your spoken english in the courses provided. also, activities are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn american english in authentic situations. besides, a trip to the local disneyland will certainly add to the fun of the camp. join the camp and you will have a better knowledge of american culture and life. you are sure to benefit from it. yours truly li hua【解析】试题分析：书面表达是英语写作的重要组成部分, 是语言学习的基本技能，是综合性很强的语言运用形式。在高考中所占重要较大,它是衡量学生英语综合水平和应用能力的一个重要标志。英语写作是一个人英语综合水平的体现。英语写作水平的高低包含的要素很多,而句子构造方式是非常重要的要素。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。因此，要求考生在写作过程中牢牢记住以下口诀：“先读提示，要点与格式要弄清；时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视”。学生在明确目的和掌握要领后，要严格按照规定的时间去完成作文。考点：这是一封电子邮件。点评：考生不能遗漏要点要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词或句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。【2013届重庆市重庆一中第四次月考】请写一篇文章，介绍你校校报为高三学生创立的 “sharing feelings”专栏（column），并谈谈你的看法。内容要点包括：开设目的：缓解学生压力，促进健康专栏优势：提供及时的指导和帮助专栏的内容：学生的困惑，老师的建议你对专栏的看法不少于80字开头已写好，不计入字数our school has set up a column called “sharing feelings”for senior 3 students.【参考范文】our school has set up a column called “sharing feelings”for senior 3 students.this column, aimed at reliving pressure and improving the health of students, has a unique advantage that the experts can give us some guidance and help in time. besides, it covers the thoughts and feelings of students and provides professional suggestions.from my point of view, not only does our school attach importance to our study but also puts our mental health at the top of the list. besides, the column also provides a platform for us to communicate with our teachers and parents. moreover, we can get help and guidance from experts to solve our problems. with their help, we can achieve our goals with more confidence and in a more effective way.【2013届广东省南武中学第二次模拟】写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节 基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)写作内容请根据以下内容给校报写一篇英语短文，介绍我市“天然气车辆（natural gas vehicles）”的情况。现状 我市最近投入使用70辆天然气公交车，兴建两座天然气站。优势 和传统燃料相比，天然气节省能源，降低成本；废气排放少，噪音小，有益人们健康 及城市环境。更多举措 除政府投入外，还鼓励公司和个人使用天然气车，共建低碳城市。写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】it is reported that recently 70 natural gas buses have been put into use and two gas stations have been set up in our city. compared with traditional fuels, natural gas is not only energy-saving but also environmentally friendly. for one thing, natural gas vehicles consume much less fuels, thus greatly reducing cost. for another, unlike traditional vehicles, natural gas vehicles release very small amounts of harmful gases and they dont make loud noises, which is beneficial to the health of people as well as the environment of the city.apart from the effort of the government, companies and individuals are also encouraged to use natural gas vehicles because only by joint efforts can we build up a low-carbon city.【解析】首先通过仔细审题弄清题目要求、写作意图，抓住内容要点，确定体裁为介绍性说明文，时态用一般现在时为主。然后进行信息归类、排列及定句型，注意写作内容的要点安排；之后，连句成篇，加以润色。最后检查修改，定稿。【考点定位】考查学生清楚、连贯地传递信息和表达意思的能力。【亮点说明】所给范文层次清晰，要点齐全。文中穿插运用了主语从句、过去分词短语作状语，which引导非限制性定语从句，only引起倒装句等多种表达方式，为文章增色不少。此外，文中not only.but also.;for one thing,for another;as well as;apart from等高级短语和过渡衔接词的使用，使文章表达优美，层次清晰，行文连贯。第二节 读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。when i was in college twenty-five years ago, i spent four summers working as a maid in housekeeping at a grand hotel in downtown chicago. i did not enter the world of housekeeping enthusiastically. i had been hoping to get a job as an office assistant. when that failed, i had no choice but to work as a maid.it was tiring work, cleaning up to eighteen rooms a day. my poor attitude reflected my disdain(蔑视) for cleaning toilets, changing bed sheets, dusting, and vacuuming eight hours a day for the comfort of total strangers who rarely left a tip. my maid work was just so-so until the day i was assigned to the eighteenth floor.that was lorenas regular floor. the only time another maid set foot on it was on lorenas day off. if you left a little rubbish on the floor, a small tissue under the bed, or a pillow uncleaned, lorena would hunt you down when she returned. shed ended her lecture to me with, “take some pride in your work.”she did. and so did rosalie, helen, annette, pearlie, earline, and all the other career maids with more than one hundred years of experience among them. their commitment to doing a good job and their belief that their work was a reflection of their character stuck with me throughout my professional career. i learned a lot from them those four summers. 写作内容 1以约30词概括上文的主要内容。 2以约120词谈谈暑假生活，内容包括： (1) 你是否做过暑期工；(2) 你打算如何度过高考后的暑假；(3) 你认为怎样过暑假才有意义。写作要求 1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】when she was a college student, the author spent 4 summers in a hotel doing house keeping job, which had great influence on her later professional career.when it comes to my summer vacation, i never did any part-time job. instead, i had to attend a series of training classes to improve my studies.as a matter of fact, i dont like it when i have to bury myself in books in summer vacations. therefore, i am determined to do some part-time work after the college entrance examinations. with the money i earn, ill go traveling, which will enrich my life and broaden my horizon.in my opinion, summer vacation should not be spent on books only. as a chinese saying goes, walk ten thousand miles, read ten thousand books. apart from gaining knowledge from books, we should also learn from social activities such as doing part-time jobs, going traveling and participating in voluntary work. only in this way can we develop healthily and adapt ourselves to the society quickly.【亮点说明】本范文围绕要点进行写作，每段的第一句为本段主题句，后面的内容是围绕它而展开。本文段落分明，要点齐全，详略得当，行文连贯，过渡自然，在语言运用上也体现了非凡的语言功底。【2013届广东省肇庆二高第四次测试】写作 （共两节，满分40分）第一节 基础写作（共1小题；满分15分） 写作内容 你的英语老师要求你在班上用英文向同学们介绍你英语写作的方法和心得。请根据下表提供的中文提纲，选择相关的信息写一篇发言稿。学习方法 学习效果背诵范文运用英语思维，进行模仿性写作多阅读英文文章吸取语言材料多听英文广播提高听力水平学习语法正确表达多练习口语提高口头技能多写日记在做中学参考他人的习作取长补短写作要求 1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 开头与结尾已经给出。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。ladies and gentlemen,now i would like to tell you how i learn english writing._ thats all. thank you!【参考范文】ladies and gentlemen,now i would like to tell you how i learn english writing.firstly, i often recite good / beautiful english articles, which helps me think in english when i imitate english writing. secondly, i also read english articles widely so that i can take in as many language materials as possible. thirdly, in order to express myself correctly / make myself understood, i think that they are important to for us to learn about some grammar, listen to the radio and practice speaking english a lot. fourthly, i keep a diary every day so that i can learn by writing. besides / in addition, i often refer to others articles to know what i need and what i can learn from others. thats all. thank you. 【考点定位】考查学生清楚、连贯地传递信息、表达意思的能力。【亮点说明】所给范文层次清晰，要点齐全。文中穿插运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句、so that引导的目的状语从句、in order to 引导不定式短语作目的状语、what引导的宾语从句等多种表达方式，为文章增色不少。此外，firstly，secondly，thirdly，fourthly， besides / in addition等过渡衔接词的使用，使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。第二节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。everyone has different goals at different stages. if one is aimless, there is little possibility that one would ever achieve great success. in order to achieve these goals, we have to make plans and some decisions at different stages. my first concern is my study. in this new term, ill devote almost all my time and energy to my study. i dont feel like thinking about such things like love and entertainment. although ill relax myself, ill focus my concentration only on my study. i firmly believe that studying well is my primary mission. my second attention is my lifestyle. it is a pity that i had a terrible lifestyle last term. so i intended to form a new lifestyle to make me healthier and stronger. i have a strong feeling that i must keep a balanced and healthy diet, since i suffered a lot from last terms irregular and unhealthy diet.the third thing that id like to refer to is my dear father and mother. now i feel very guilty that i seldom called them last term. receiving my call is always what they long for, but i havent satisfied their wish, which i cant forgive myself. so i swear to call them often this term no matter how tired i am. 【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词就“新学期打算”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包