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Helpingothersmakesushappy No 3MiddleSchoolYuan Brainstorm athome atschool insomeotherplaces A Whatis are doing B is are be doing Report Inourgroup Lisausuallyhelps becausesheisgoodatitandshewantstobeamathteacher Shefeelsveryhappy Survey Whatdoyouusuallydotohelpothers Whydoyoudothat Howdoyoufeelabouthelpingothers OrientalPearl May1st Crazydream Iwill Ihopeto Iwantto Iamgoingto I dglad loveto 1995 amiddleschoolstudent reading traveling sports English atourguideforBeijingOlympics avolunteerfor Writing 上海即将召开世博会 要招聘志愿者 假如你是Mike 根据下表信息给报社写一封应聘信 成果展示 Dearsir Ireadyouradinthenewspaperyesterday Ihopetobeavolunteerfor2010ShanghaiExpo MynameisMike Iwasbornin1990 Now IamastudentinZhejiangUniversity Ihavemanyhobbies likereading traveling sportsandsoon IamgoodatEnglish too Lastmonth IwonthefirstprizeinourschoolEnglishspeechcompetition IhopeIwillbeatourguideforsomeforeignfriends ThenIwillintroduceourbeautifulcitiestothem AndIwillpracticemyspokenEnglishaswell Bytheway Iwasoneofthevolunteersfor2008BeijingOlympics Icheckedticketsattheentranceofthegym Itwastiringandkindofboring ButIstillworkedveryhard Itwasgreatexperienceforme I msureitwillbehelpfulformyfuturework Ireallyenjoyhelpingothers Thatmakesmefeelquitehappy IhopeIwillhavethechancetodosomethingforShanghaiExpo Sincerelyyours Mike Summary 写作四步法 一 写好句子1 句子要正确 2 句子要平行 3 句子要连贯 4 句子要有逻辑性 5 句子要避免过多重复 6 句子要避免头重脚轻 7 句子要避免汉式英语 二 写好段落三 用好过渡词四 写好开头和结尾 Homework 帮助人类 争做环保小卫士 以我校学生的名义写一篇短文 陈述反对在我校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由 短文须包括以下内容 1 大部分同学都反对兴建 2 尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少 但弊大于利 3 可能造成噪声污染和空气污染 4 侵占学校部分操场