Unit 13　People　人学案2北师大版必修5

Unit 13People人（北师大版）作文指导记叙文(例：记人)【体裁导航】在高考写作中，要求直接对人物描述的文章不是很多，但写人的记叙文却是同学们必须掌握的。普通高中英语课程标准(实验)对记叙文的写作作了明确要求，所以，记叙文的写作,应引起同学们的重视。记叙文的写作，一般应考虑六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果。遇到以图表的形式提供的材料时，注意要点应齐全。写记叙文时，由于多是叙述过去发生的动作，所以，叙述中常用过去时态，当然有时也会出现一般现在时或其他时态，尤其是在直接引语里。写人、记事、描述地点或刻画场景，最常用的文体可能就是记叙文了。因而，平时遇到一些好句子，就应当多记。例如：Joan is a pretty gentle lady in her early twenties.My sister is a boyish girl.She has short and straight hair like a boys.He is a handsome young man with bright eyes and broad shoulders.以上例句都是用于描述人的好句子，应首先学会灵活套用。长此以往，潜移默化，同学们的表达自会在不知不觉中达到“即便信手拈来，却也恰到好处”的境界。写人的记叙文当然离不开记事，但两者的侧重点有所不同。记人者，以人为主导，所写的事都是为衬托人物服务的，所以，记述时，外貌的描写、性格的刻画等等，都要服务于人物，不可喧宾夺主、本末倒置。【写作示例】请根据下面所提供的资料，写一篇介绍潘玮柏(Will Pan)的英语短文。潘玮柏，当今著名歌手，英俊潇洒，身高1.74米,1980年8月6日在上海出生。会汉语和英语两种语言。他喜欢篮球，最喜欢的音乐是Hip Hop、R&B和华语流行音乐(Chinese Pop Music)。他为人随和、活泼好动、笑容灿烂。他的愿望就是能够成为“super idol”(超级偶像)。注意：1.可根据内容要点适当增加细节以使行文连贯；2词数：120左右。【写作要领】一审题要点1体裁：记叙文；2时态：一般现在时；3人称：第三人称。二内容要点1潘玮柏的概况描述；2他的业余爱好及性情；3他的愿望。【金点模板】一、开头参考句式：1Will Pan, who was born on.，is a.2Will Pan, one of the.，was born.3Born on.，Will Pan is a.4Will Pan was born.and he is one of the.二、主体参考句式：1He can speak.as well as.2He can not only.but also.3He likes.most and dislikes.4He is fond of.and.5Everyone likes him very much.6He is very popular among young men.为使各项内容衔接自然，可以适当添加过渡词。如：as well as；not only.but also. ；though；although. ；however；but.三、结尾参考句式：1Wish he will succeed!2Wish his dream come true!3Good luck to him!4Wish him a fantastic future!【范文点评】Will PanWill Pan, one of the most famous pop stars now in China, was born on August 6, 1980 in Shanghai.He is about 1.74 meters tall and is a handsome young man.Will Pan can speak English as well as Chinese.His most favorite songs are Hip Hop, R & B, and the Chinese Pop Music and hehimself sings many good songs of this kind. During his free time, he is fond of taking part in sports, and his favorite sport is basketball. Though he is famous, he is easy to get along with.He is lovely and actively.He always wears a big smile on his face, so more and more young men and women become his fans.Pan has many wishes. To become a super idol becomes the biggest one of them.Wish his dream come true!点评：one of the most.作Will Pan的同位语使句子灵活。as well as用得好，也可用not only.but also.。转折词使用得当。wear a big smile表示带着微笑，使句子增色很多。用动词不定式作主语避免了文章句式的单调。加上祝愿语使得文章活泼生动。【类题尝试】请用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，介绍一下该人物，要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且须包括以下三部分内容：1对该人物的简单介绍；2喜欢该人物的理由；3从该人物身上得到的启示。_One possible version：Thomas EdisonBorn in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating.In fact, he was a man full of imagination.I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world.He had more than 1,000 inventions.In his life time, he was alwayseager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo Park”He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many great inventions.What impresses me most is his famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninetynine percent perspiration.” Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but