定语从句复习写作.ppt

WelcomeToClass10 TheAttributiveClauseUsedinWriting定语从句在写作中的运用 ByFancy NMET书面表达第五档 21 25 要求 完全完成了试题规定的任务 覆盖所有内容要点 应用较多的语法结构和词汇 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致 具备较强的语言运用能力 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 完全达到了预期的写作目的 汉语式英语句式单一平铺直叙无过渡语 关联词 Commonmistakes Howtoavoidsimplesentences Usingclauses 从句 sentencestructures thenon finites 非谓语 andotherproverbs 谚语 inwriting 定语从句的作用 定语从句可以进一步扩充句子中名词成分所携带的信息量 像一个 小仓库 可以放置很多附带的信息点 如能够在基础写作中巧妙利用 既能够使句子丰满好看有档次 能缩减句子的数量 从而为写作提分 减负 Review Theusageoftherelativepronouns 关系代词 Talkingaboutpeople Doyouknowtheman cametoseeXiaoYangthismorning Talkingaboutthings Icouldn tfindthebook wasboughtyesterday whose n the n ofwhich whom ofwhich whom the n Doyouknowtheboy parentsareonholiday Heisaman weshouldalllearnfrom Thetable youjustsawismadeofplastics I veneverbeentotheroom windowsarebroken who that who whom that whose whose which that which that Review Theusageoftherelativeadverbs 关系副词 Thisistheplace hisfatherworks Thereason hewaslatewasthathegotuplate Istillremembertheday IfirstcametoBeijing where why when 介词 which whomTherearemanytrees theycanhavearest Thisisthering shespent1000dollars In1952 Mandelawastheblacklawyer Iwentforadvice weallknow heisagoodstudent isknowntousall heisagoodstudent theproverbgoes 正如某个谚语所说 allroadsleadtoRome underwhich onwhich towhom AS AS AS as关系代词or关系副词 Enjoysomeproverbs 带定语从句的谚语1 Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves 自助者天助之 2 Hewholaughslastlaughsbest 谁笑到最后 谁笑的最好 3 Nothingintheworldisdifficultforonewhosetshismindtoit 世上无难事 只怕有心人 Hewholearnsbutdoesnotthink islost Hewhothinksbutdoesnotlearn isingreatdanger 学而不思则罔 思而不学则殆 Rewritethefollowingsentencesusingtheattributiveclause 1 ZhouLiangismybestfriend Heis16yearsold Heisofmediumbuild 2 Healwaysgiveshandtopeoplewhentheyareintrouble 3 Hehasmanyhobbies Theyareincommonwith 与 相同的 mine 4 HemadegreatprogressinEnglishstudy Itmadehisteacherhappy 5 Hehasmanygoodqualities Theyareworthlearning ZhouLiangismybestfriend whois16yearsoldandofmediumbuild Healwaysgiveshandtopeoplewhoareintrouble Hehasmanyhobbieswhichareincommonwithmine HemadegreatprogressinEnglishstudy whichmadehisteacherhappy Hehasmanygoodqualitieswhichareworthlearning Rewritethefollowingsentencesusingtheattributiveclause 6 You dbetterreadthebooks Youareininterestedinthebooks 7 Remembertoreadthebooks Youcanbenefitfromthebooks 8 It sagoodideatolookupwordsinadictionary anditcanhelpyouunderstandthenewwordsandenrichyourvocabulary 9 Youshouldinsistonlisteningandspeakingeveryday ItcanhelpyouimproveyourEnglish 10 Youshouldremembertheimportantsentencesandwords TheycanbefoundinyourEnglishbooks You dbetterreadthebookswhichyouareininterestedin Remembertoreadthebookswhichyoucanbenefitfrom It sagoodideatolookupwordsinadictionary whichcanhelpyouunderstandthenewwordsandenrichyourvocabulary Youshouldinsistonlisteningandspeakingeveryday whichcanhelpyouimproveyourEnglish YoushouldremembertheimportantsentencesandwordswhichcanbefoundinyourEnglishbooks 1 ZhouLiangismybestfriend whois16yearsoldandofmediumbuild 2 Healwaysgiveshandtopeoplewhoareintrouble3 Hehasmanyhobbieswhichareincommonwithmine 4 HemadegreatprogressinEnglishstudy whichmadehisteacherhappy 5 Hehasmanygoodqualitieswhichareworthlearning 6 You dbetterreadthebookswhichyouareininterestedin 7 Remembertoreadthebookswhichyoucanbenefitfrom 8 It sagoodideatolookupwordsinadictionary whichcanhelpyouunderstandthenewwordsandenrichyourvocabulary 9 Youshouldinsistonlisteningandspeakingeveryday whichcanhelpyouimproveyourEnglish 10 YoushouldremembertheimportantsentencesandwordswhichcanbefoundinyourEnglishbooks Ourclassisabigfamily Itismadeupof37girlsand20boys Allofthemareverydiligentandwarm hearted ZhangYanchaoisourmonitor Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehimverymuch Ourclassisabigfamilywhichismadeupof37girlsand20boys allofwhomareverydiligentandwarm hearted ZhangYanchaoisourmonitor whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers Heisagoodboy whom wealllikeverymuch Practice1 3minutes Practicemakesperfect Practice2 Describeourschool 广饶一中创建于1951年 是一所山东省著名的中学 GuangRaoNo 1MiddleSchoolofShanDong2 校园里花草树木随处可见 美丽如画 campusasbeautifulasapicture3 学校有许多篮球场 学生放学后在篮球场上打篮球 basketballcourts4 学校里有许多的优秀教师 其中樊老师是一名我们都很喜欢的英语老师 5 在过去的三年高考中 我们学校取得了令人惊讶的优异成绩 CollegeEntranceExamination 10minutes GroupDiscussion cooperation 合作共赢 2 如何将五句话进行连贯的衔接与整合 形成一篇完整的顺畅的作文 MySchoolIamstudyinginGuangRaoNo 1MiddleSchoolofShanDong Itisafamousschoolwhichwasbuiltin1951 Firstofall treesandflowerscanbeseeneverywhereinthecampus whichmakesitasbeautifulasapicture Besides intheschoolstandmanybasketballcourts wherestudentsplaybasketballafterschool What smore therearemanyexcellentteachershere ofwhomMissFanisa