高考英语写作summary(记叙文概括).ppt

HowToWriteaSummary 记叙文概括 高三备考资料 Summary Summaryisashortpassagegivingthemainpointsofanoriginalarticle Whatisasummary Whatshouldwepayattentiontowhenwewriteasummary 文体 时态 人称 主题 writeasummary 记叙文 议论文 说明文 记叙文的概括 1 时态 2 人称 3 5要素 11月月考读写任务 时态 人称 5要素 astudent AlanReed wasmistakenlygiven 50extrabyabankclerk returnedthemoneyafterconsideration impressedtheclerkwithhishonesty ThestorywasaboutAlanwhowasmistakenlygiven 50extrabyabankclerk Hefinallyreturneditafterconsideration Theclerkwasimpressedandcontactedthenewspapertopraisehishonesty 33words Apossibleversion Readthecriteria 评分标准 carefully Compareitwithyourversion Findouthowyoucanimproveyoursummary Practicemakesperfect Practice1 Idon thavemanyunhappymemoriesbutonesadstorytookplaceonmylastbirthday Beforethebirthday Iworkedoutaplanwithmyparents WeplannedtohavedinnertogetherinMcDonald s myfavouriterestaurant ThenwewouldgototheXinghaiConcertHallforaconcertgivenbyagroupoffamousyoungsingers Andthemostexcitingthing ofcourse wasthebirthdaypresents TheypromisedtogivemeanewMP3player However somethingunexpectedhappenedonthatday IwenthomeasearlyasIcould Iwaitedandwaitedbutmyparentsdidn tcomeback Ifeltangryatfirstandthenupset Howcouldtheytreatmethisway Theyalwaysforgotmejustbecausetheywerebusywiththeirwork Yes theywerealwaysbusy Theybroketheirpromiseandgothomelate Afterthat mygrandmotherhadatalkwithmetohelpmeunderstandmyparents situationandthatmademefeelmuchbetter 文体 时态 人称 记叙文 一般过去时 Thewriter author He Exchangeyouranswerwithyourpartners 5要素 Theauthor writer he feltangryandupsetbecausehisparentsforgottocelebratehisbirthdaywithhim understoodhisparentsaftertalkingwithhisgrandmother onhislastbirthday Theauthordescribedwhathappenedonhislastbirthday Hefeltdisappointedbecausehisparentscouldn thavethecelebrationwithhim Buthecametounderstandthemaftertalkingtohisgrandmother Apossibleversion Tips 概括不用第一人称 Practice2 AlittleboyistellinghisGrandmahow everything isgoingwrong School familyproblem severehealthproblems etc Meanwhile Grandmaisbakingacake Sheaskshergrandsonifhewouldlikeacake which ofcourse hedoes Here havesomecookingoil Terrible saystheboy Howaboutacoupleraweggs Terrible Grandma Wouldyoulikesomeflourthen Ormaybebakingsoda Grandma thoseareallawful TowhichGrandmareplies Yes allthosethingsseembadbythemselves butwhentheyareputtogetherintherightway theymakeawonderfullydeliciouscake Lifeworksthesameway Manytimeswewonderwhyitwouldletusgothroughsuchbadanddifficulttimes Butlifeknowsthatwhenitputsthesethingsallinitsorder theyalwaysworkforgood Thetrials 考验 oflifeserveameaningfulpurposeinmakingusstronger Donotloseheartiflifeisnoteasyforyourightnow butencourageyourselfandknowyouwillbemuchstrongermentallyandphysicallybecauseofthetrialsoflife Exchangeyouranswerwithyourpartners 5要素 文体 时态 人称 记叙文 alittleboy he alittleboy complainedtohisgrandmaabouthisproblems comparedproblemstocakematerials trialsmakeusstronger Aboycomplainedaboutdifficultiesinlife Hisgrandmother whoshowedthatacaketasteddeliciousbutitsmaterialstastedawful taughthimthatthetrialsoflifemakepeoplestronger Apossibleversion Tips 根据文章主题定好关键词 Practice3 Onebeautifulspringdayaredrosecameoutinaforest Asitlookedaround apinetreenearbysaid Whatabeautifulflower IwishIwasthatlovely Anothertreesaid Don tbesad wecan thaveeverything Theredroselookedatacactus 仙人掌 andsaid Whatanuglyplantfullofthorns 刺 Thepinetreesaid Redrose whatkindoftalkisthis Whocansaywhatbeautyis Youhavethornstoo Theproudredroselookedangrilyatthepineandsaid Youdon tknowwhatbeautyis Youcan tcomparemetoacactus Springpassed andtheweatherbecameverywarm Lifebecamedifficultasnorainfell Theredrosewasdying Onedaytheredrosesawbirdssuckwaterfromthecactus Doesn tithurtwhentheybiteintothecactus askedtheredrose Yes butthecactusdoesnotliketoseeanybirdssuffer repliedthepine Thebirdscanbringwatertoyouifyouaskthecactusforhelp Buttheredrosefelttooashamedofitspastwordstoask Exchangeyouranswerwithyourpartners 5要素 文体 时态 人称 记叙文 寓言 abeautifulrose laughedatthecactusforitsappearance feltashamedwhenshesawthecactusgivingwatertohelpthebirds Onceabeautifulproudrose whichwasadmiredbyotherplants teasedthecactusforitsappearance However whentheweatherbecamedry therosefeltashamedofitselfasshesawthecactusprovidingotherswithwater Score 4 5 Aproudrosethinksthatit ssuperiortootherplantsintheforestbecauseofitsbeauty Butitlaterlearnthatbeautyisnottheonlythingwhenitseesthecactushelpingthirstybirds Apossibleversion Tips 明晰主干 主题 主角 Asummarymust includethemainideainyourownwords 人称 时态 5要素 记叙文 把握主题 关键词 用好关联词 but because so 表达清晰 方法 练习 反思 includethemainideainyourownwords includesupportingideas notincludeyourownopinions includesomeshortesttransitionalwords Summary Asummarymust phraseswithsimilarmeaningdifferentsentencepatterns Conclusion Tipsforwritingasummary1 Readthepassageforoverallcontentandidentifythestructureorstyle 2 Rereadcarefully highlightingthekeywords phrases andsentences 3 Inyourfinaldraft inserttransitionalwordsandphraseswherenecessary Combinesentencesforasmooth logicalflowofideas Moretechniques Skill1 Omit 省略 thedetailsSkill2 OmittherepetitionsSkill3 OmittheexamplesSkill4 Usegeneral 概括性 wordsinsteadofspecific 具体的 wordsSkill5 Usetheshortestpossibletransitions but then thus yet for Changeunnecessaryclausesintophrases2 Changeuselessphrasesintosinglewords3 Ch