高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验16.doc

2015届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验161书面表达（满分25分）2010年上海世博会即将开幕，作为一名中学生志愿者，你感觉身边还存在许多不文明行为。请你写一篇120词左右的短文。短文开头已写好短文必须包括以下要点：1召开世博会的意义（促进文化交流等）； 2简单列举身边不文明行为（不遵守交通规则；大声喧哗等）；3你的建议（个人应; 政府应）。参考词汇：2010年上海世博会expo 2010 shanghai chinaexpo 2010 shanghai china is drawing near. _2书面表达（满分30分）假定你是李华，你们学校和美国一所学校签订了教师交换协议。在过去的一年里，你们的老师是来自这所学校的sue wood,。不久前，他返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给sue写封电子邮件。写作要点：1.对他表达感谢之意。2.介绍他离开后你自己和班里发生的事情。3.希望了解他的近况。要求：1.短文必须写在答题卡的指定区域2.短文不少于100字（不包含已经写好的部分）3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯4.内容中不能体现本人真实信息3面对中学生的出国热，人们有不同的看法。请你以studying abroad为题，根据下面的信息，谈谈自己的看法advantagesdisadvantages1与不同文化背景的人交友。2学习国外先进的科学技术。3更快地学习外语。1年纪小、缺乏生活经验，自理能力差。2情感孤独，思乡。ks*5uc#3生活和学习费用高。4假如你是李华，某校高三年级学生，你想给曾经教过你的外教alan写一封邮件请教在英语学习上遇到的一些问题。主要内容包括：英语成绩不理想； 2。恐难进心仪大学；3。花时多，收效少要求：1. 不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，行文通畅；2. 词数：120左右dear alan,-best wishes5提示：(1) 书是我们的朋友。（从书与知识的关系、知识与人生的关系来说明。）(2) 历史上的伟人都爱书。（从读书与伟人所以能取得事业成功的关系来阐述）(3) 结论：书能使我们了解过去、瞻望未来，是世上最宝贵的东西。要求：1) 根据上面的提示，写一篇题为“let books be our good friends”的说理文。(2) 字数：120个左右。let books be our good friends_参考答案1one possible versionexpo 2010 shanghai china is drawing near. as a student volunteer, i feel very proud since the upcoming world expo will promote the exchange of different cultures and show the latest achievements of civilizations around the globe. but i have to say lots of bad behaviours still exist around us. for example, some people dont obey the traffic rules when crossing the road, and some even spit in public, which makes me feel disappointed. these bad behaviours will spoil the image of our country so it is high time that we solved these problems.in my opinion, we should behave politely and spare no efforts to build a harmonious society. besides, some strict measures must be taken to stop people from behaving badly. only in this way can we make expo 2010 shanghai china a great success. 【解析】2dear sue, im li hua, one of your students in china. its almost a month since you left us. we all miss you and are very grateful for what you did during the past year. thanksto you help, we are now quite interested in english study, especially oral english. every one tries to practise english in our daily life. last week, an english speaking contest was held and i got the second price, which i cant even imagine before. the public service, helping the orphans in the nearby orphan house, which was held by you at the beginning is now going on well. we decide to offer our service there once a month. how is everything with you lately? we hope to know more about you and your american students. please keep in touch with us. we are looking forward to your return next year. with best regards, li hua【解析】略 3参考范文：studying abroadin recent years, studying abroad has been populartens of thousands of chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to studymany people are trying their best to go abroadthere are many advantages in attending schools abroadfirst, students who study abroad can make friends with people of different culturessecond, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countriesthird, they can learn foreign languages more quicklyhowever, there are some disadvantagesmost of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experiencebesides, being far away from their motherland, they may feel lonely and homesickalso, the costs are much higher there than at homein spite of these, advantages are more than disadvantages【解析】 略4dear alan,recently im faced with some difficulty in learning english which has been bothering me continuously. hardly have i seen any progress in my english study even though i have spent quite a lot of time in english every day. no matter how hard i try, i would never get good results in the exams. i began to realize how serious the situation would be. i feel so worried that i always blame myself for it. to improve the situation, i have discussed it with some of my teachers and classmates. they have done their best to help me, but i am still not confident. nowadays, it has even become such a headache for me that being admitted to my dream university seems impossible. i would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. thank you.best wishes,yours, sincerely,li hua【解析】试题分析：本文是书信类作文，你的外教alan写一封邮件请教在英语学习上遇到的一些问题。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但是不是很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。而且要适当拓展，丰富内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：first，second， besides, whats more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。【亮点说明】所给范文语言流畅，句式变化多样：recently im faced with some difficulty in learning english which has been bothering me continuously. 这句话用了定语从句。hardly have i seen any progress in my english study even though i have spent quite a lot of time in english every day.这句话用了倒装句， no matter how hard i try, i would never get good results in the exams. 这句话用了让步状语从句， i feel so worried that i always blame myself for it. 这句话用了sothat句型，to improve the situation, i have discussed it with some of my teachers and classmates. 这句话用了不定式做目的状语， nowadays, it has even become such a headache for me that being admitted to my dream university seems impossible.这句话用了it做形式主语， i would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. 这句话用了it做形式宾语。考点：考查书信类书面表达5 let books be our good friendsbooks are our friends because they are bridges to knowledge. knowledge is valuable because it enriches our life and brings us happiness.almost all great men in the history of mankind loved books. we have every reason to believe it is the knowledge in books that led them to success. there is no genius without books. because books give them knowledge and knowledge gives them power. a man is half blind if he is unable to read.books make