高考英语短文改错集训（十二）.doc

2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十二）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。passage 1from the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. as we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. but do you know how to protect your eyesight? first, dont keep your eyes work for a long time. youd better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. second, pay much attention to the following. dont read under the sun or in a poorly light; dont read in bed or in a moved bus. third, do eye exercise every day. it will also help you keep good eyesight. but last youshould have enough sleep. only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becomingshort-sighted.passage 2dear mom,the mothers day is coming. im sorry that i am abroadand cant send your flowers, so im writing to you. mom, i know i have never expressed my thank to youbefore. but on today, at this special time, i just want to tellyou loudly: i love you, mom! thank you so much by notonly giving me life, but also teach me how to be a goodperson. thank you for all you had done for me. mom, thoughi may often say it, i do love you. nobody can take yourpart in my heart. whenever i am, i will always love you.hope you good health and much happiness every day! your little girl, jenniferpassage 3life on the land probably was started about 430 million years ago, though it has existed in the water for perhaps so much as 3,000 million years. when we think of the first thing on the land, we probably think of strange animals come out of the oceans. in fact no animals can have been living if plants had been on land first. plant had to be on land after animals arrived. they supplied the first land animals with the surroundings and food necessity, since the plants, them are the only form of life who are able to get and store energy.passage 4when i walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. i was feeling very nervous. i had not studied at all the weekend as i had thought it would be easy test. i went through the test for many times but i could only answer three out from the twenty questions. i did not want to fail the exam. then , i put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. the teacher wasnt looking at me ,but i copied something. suddenly, i felt a hand in my shoulder! the teacher caught me cheating. i dont know what to say. luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance. passage 5i went to england last summer as a exchange student, and stayed there for three months. i used to thinking we had pretty various after-school activities. however, i was surprised to find they had even diverse projects. i made friend with the daughter of my home-stay family, which was a college student. he was a member of different kinds of clubs, so i took the chance to join in some clubs, too. can you believe i make a robot in the lego club? i felt very proudly because i got the first prize with my lego robot.time spending in england is so memorable that i will treasure it forever.passage 6as i was leaving the grocery store this afternoon, i saw a poor family a mother and her four kid sitting in the cold, it brought back memories from when i was a child. the little girl, about 13, told me he liked my under armour sweater. i said, “thank you.” when i am walking to my car, i started to feel sadly. put the groceries in my car, i suddenly thought the little girl might need a sweater at the school. so i went back to find the little girl, take my sweater off but gave it to her. i knew she would get much use out of it than me.2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十二）答案passage 11.students后加who/that或去掉are 2.which改为it 3.work改为working 4.have后加a 5.under改为in 6.poorly改为poor 7.moved改为moving 8.eye-exercise改为eye-exercises9.but改为and 10.only后加if/whenpassage 21.去掉the 2.your改为you 3.thank改为thanks 4.去掉on 5.by改为for6.teach改为teaching 7.had改为have 8.may后加not 9.whenever改为wherever10.hopw改为wishpassage 3life on the land probably was started about 430 million years ago, though it has existed in the water for perhaps so much as 3,000 million years. when we think of as the first thing on land, we probably think of strange animals come out of the oceans. in comingfact no animals can have been living if plants had been on land first. plant had to could not 或had改成hadnt plants be on land after animals arrived. they supplied the first land animals with the beforesurroundings and food necessity, since the plants, them are the only form of life who they forms that are able to get and store energy.passage 4 71. inout 72. an easy 73. for（去掉 for）many times 74. from-of 75. opening-opened 76. in-on my shoulder 77. answer-answers 78. but-so 79. dont-didnt 80. punish me passage 5i went to england last summer as a exchange student, and stayed there for three months. i anused to thinking we had pretty various after-school activities. however, i was surprised to find thinkthey had even diverse projects. i made friend with the daughter of my home-stay family, whichmore friends whowas a college student. he was a member of different kinds of clubs, so i took the chance to shejoin in some clubs, too. can you believe i make a robot in the lego club? 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