高考英语读写任务写作技巧(校高三示范课)粤教版.ppt

2009届高考英语专题复习 读写任务写作技巧 partone howtograspthemainideaofapassage intask writing 主旨题遵循四字原则 准 全 用精炼的语言概括出文章的中心思想 要注意文章的内涵和外延 把作者的观点准确地表达出来 要排除掉那些片面的选项 选取包含文章的主要内容及作者观点的选项 范围不宜过大或过小 精 阅读理解主旨要义题技巧 回顾 theheadmasterofamiddleschoolinsouthernengland davidhayes hassuspended 停课 studentsathisschoo1478timesoverthepastyear oneintwentyofallthestudentsuspensionsinengland althoughsomepeoplebelievethathisactionsgotoofar heseemstobegettingresults thenumberofstudentsreceiving a gradesinthenationa1seniorschoo1examhasincreasedfrom48 in2004to74 thisyearmr hayessaysthatmanyschoolscouldachievesimilarimprovementsiftheyimprovetheirschoolstudents behavior healsosaysthebritishgovernmentiswrongforpressuringschoolsnottosuspendtroublesomestudentsandpointsouttheharmfuleffectssuchstudentshaveonthequalityofteachingandstudentlearning suspensionsoftengetmanynaughtystudentstoimprovetheirbehavior hesays theschoolwasbelowaveragein2003 mr hayesjoinedthefollowingyearandnowsuspendstwooftheschool s1880studentsonaverageeachschoolday thetotalof478suspensionsovertheyearmeansthatalmostoneinfourstudentshavebeenpunishedthisway thisyeartheschool sacademicperformancewasjudgedasexcellent irecentlyreadanewsstoryaboutheadmasterwhooftensuspendsmisbehavingstudents andhebelievesthatstrongdisciplineimprovesbothstudents behaviorandacademicperformance hisschool sexamresultshavebeengreatlyimprovedduringhistimeincharge stylesofpassage howtosummarizeanarration story skill 要素串联法 igainedalotafteribecamepatiently i andanoldman lastsunday igotnothing2hourslater gotangrytheoldmangotalot patient alessonofthesecrettosuccess expressthemainideaofexe 1inyourownwordsusingabout30words 5mins everyonehasanexperiencetheywouldrathernotforget someareembarrassing somearemoving andsometeachusalesson hereisastoryofmine lastsundayiwentfishing aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait isatdownonthebankofthelake buttwohourslater ididn tcatchanyfish igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff preparingtogobackhome justthen isawanoldmansittingnearme tomysurprise hisbasketwasfulloffish soiwentovertohim wantingtoknowwhy excuseme buthowlonghaveyousathere iasked aboutfourhours heanswered fourhours icouldn tbelievemyears yes it sveryimportanttobepatient theoldmansaid don tconsiderfishingatiringsport justenjoyit suddenly iunderstoodwhathesaid imustlearntobepatient thenisatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently ifeltafishtouchthebait butididn tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin atlast icaughtit thismademeveryhappy inthefollowingsixhours icaughtover10fish onmywayhome ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience thestoryisaboutanunforgettablelessonofthewriterfromanoldmanwhilefishing throughwhichthewriterrealizedpatiencewasveryimportantandthatitwasthesecretofsuccess 33 youmaybeginlikethese 1 thepassage storyismainlyabout talksabout 2 thewriter authortellsusabout 3 thepassagenarratesthat 故事性阅读材料 应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么 不能拖泥带水 而且最好讲述该故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理 howtosummarizeanargumentation skill 议论三步法 段落合并法 workishelpfultohealth a workkeepspeoplebusy awayfromlonelinessb workservesasabridgebetweenmanandrealityc workgivesoneasenseoffulfillmentandasenseofachievement expressthemainideaofexe 2inyourownwordsusingabout30words 5mins scientistsfindthathard workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen careerwomenarehealthierthanhousewives evidenceshowsthatthejoblessareinpoorerhealththanthejob holders astudyshowsthatwhenevertheemploymentrateincreasesby1 thedeathrateincreasecorrespondingly 相应地 by2 allthiscomesdowntoonepoint workishelpfultohealth whyisworkgoodforhealth itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy awayfromloneliness researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy worriedandlonelywhentheyhavenothingtodo instead thehappiestarethosewhoarebusy workservesasabridgebetweenmanandreality bywork peoplecomeintocontactwitheachother bycollectiveactivities theyfindfriendshipandwarmth thisishelpfultohealth thelossofworkmeansthelossofeverything itaffectsmanspirituallyandmakeshimlikelytodisease besides workgivesoneasenseoffulfillmentandasenseofachievement workmakesonefeelhisvalueandstatusinsociety whenawriterfinisheshiswritingorteacherseeshisstudentsgrow theyarehappybeyondwords theauthorhighlightstheeffectofworkonpeople shealth becauseitcanridoneofloneliness andmakeonefeelfruitfulandproudofhimself whichalwayscontributestoagoodbody 33 usuallythebeginningofasummaryis 1 thepassagemainlydiscussesthat 2 wecanknowfromthepassage 3 asfarastheauthorisconcerned 如果是议论文的阅读短文 则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点 4 thechapteraboveisconcerning n howtosummarizeanexposition skill 中心句挖掘法 要说明的是 teamworkisaboutpeopleworkingtogetherasateam theideahasspreadfromtheworldofsportstobusiness inthe21stcentury aspeopleandtheirworkarebecomingmoretechnicallyadvanced workingasateammakesiteasiertogetthingsdone somethingscannotbedonebypeopleworkingindividually morecomplexgoalsusuallyrequirethatpeopleworktogether anyonewhohaseverbeentoajobinterviewwillalmostcertainlyhavebeenaskedwhatteamworkmeanstothem thisisbecausecompanieswantpeoplewhoareteamplayers whocangetalongwiththeircolleaguesandworktogetherinagroup becauseteamworkisrequiredbymanyorganizationstoday theywilloftenorganizeteambuildingeventsinanattempttogetpeopletoworkasateamthanasindividuals therearesevenimportantskillsthatonemustlearninordertobeasuccessfulteamplayer theyareasfollows listening listenandallowpeopletofreelyexpresstheirideas questioning askquestionsanddiscusstheobjectivesoftheteam persuading encouragepeopletoexchange defend andrethinktheirideas respecting treatotherswithrespectandtosupporttheirideas helping helpone spartners thisisthegeneralthemeofteamwork sharing shareideasandresourceswiththeteamtocreateanenvironmentofteamwork participating allmembersoftheteamareencouragedtoparticipateintheteam 写作内容 1 以约30个词概括短文的要点 2 然后以约120个词就 teamwork 的主题发表看法 并包括如下要点 a 在你的心目中 你认为团队精神的概念是什么 b 试通过简述两三个例子来说明团队精神的重要性 c 你认为如何才能建立起班级团队精神的文化 thepassagestatedtheimportanceofteamworkinbusinessandthat inamorecompetitiveworld peoplemustco operateinordertoachievetheirgoals besides seventeamworkskillsarealsodescribed 32 youmaybeginlikethese 1 itisstatedinthearticlethat 2 accordingtothepassage wecanknowthat 3 inthepassage theauthorstatesthat 4 thepassagepointsoutthat 如果是说明性短文 你就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象 summary 1 概括要抓住要点 语言精练 阅读材料的设计与 写作内容 的设计应该是浑然一体的 如果给的阅读材料是一个故事 应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么 不能拖泥带水 而且最好讲述该故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理 如果是说明性或描述性短文 你就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象 如果是议论文的阅读短文 则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点 summary 2 focusonmainideasandomit 省去 examples details 注重大意 省去详细的例子 细节 3 donotincludeyourownopinion butbesuretouseyourownwords 不能添加自己的见解 但是要用自己的语言概括 4 writeitinthethirdperson 第三人称 5 controlthenumberofwordsabout30 25 40个字之内不会造成扣分 6 howtocheckthesummary 看要点 看人称 看时态 看语法 看结构 homework 挑战高考 hi iammike ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme butatthecollegeineededtoknowsomebasiclifeskills suchasbalancingacheck book laundry andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatineverthoughtofinthehighschool itwasreallytoughformeatfirstandigotbadlyhomesick oncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandigotusedtothecollegelife ilovedit goodfacilities helpfulinstructors a