中卫一中杨媛媛高考短文改错终结版317..ppt

welcome 宁夏中卫一中杨媛媛 proof reading 高考短文改错思路 改错题怎么做 改错题有没有技巧 改错题有没有规律 改错题考察什么能力 改错题考察什么能力 短文改错是检测语篇的处理能力和在特定语境中对语言的使用进行评价的能力 因此 短文改错中的错误及涉及到的语法或词汇 考生处理这些问题需要根据短文的整体语境来进行判断 高考短文改错的短文通常只有100个词左右 难度与考生的习作相当 在高考中改错 内容来自学生身边或社会生活中的常见话题 短文改错的题型设置通常以多词 缺词和错词这三种形式出现 命题特点 correctthefollowingsentences but a eg 1ihopeyouwillhavepleasantjourney eg 2whenhereturnedtohome hefoundhiswalletstolen eg 3thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood 改错命题统计 2007 2008宁夏卷分析 动词时态 语态的误用 1 iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek won 2 booksborrowedfromlibrarymaybekeepforfourweeks kept discussthesentencesandcorrectthemistakeswithrightsigns errorword 错词 非谓语动词 现在分词 过去分词 动名词和不定式 的误用 seen speaking 1 seefromthehill ourvillageissosmall 2 youshouldpractisespeakenglishasmuchaspossible 句式结构中平行 并列关系混乱 1 istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousaboutthenewworld feeling 2 asweclimbedthemountains wefedmonkeys visitingtemplesandtoldstories visited 主谓是否一致 人称关系是否一致 1 thewriterandpoetarebusyworking their 2 thesmithsdidhisbesttomakemeathome is 形容词和副词 比较等级 的误用 2 ifeltsadly sad 1 moreandmoreforeignersareinterestinginchineseculture interested 3 shespeaksenglishasfluentasanativespeaker fluently 连接词的误用 1 takeyourumbrellawithyou andyouwillbecaughtintherain or 2 30 girlswouldliketobecometeacherswhenonly5 ofboyswanttodoit while 人称代词 物主代词 反身代词 关系代词 连接代词 不定代词的误用 1 teachersworkhardandtryhisbesttomaketheclasslivelyandinteresting 2 weenjoyedusverymuch 3 thatsurprisedusmostwasthebeautyofnature their ourselves what 1 i llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject 名词的数是否一致 subjects information 2 wecanfindalotofinformationsfrominternet discussthesentencesandcorrectthemistakeswithrightsigns 2 enteringintothehall ifoundeveryoneseatedintheirplaces 3 wehavemadeagreatprogressinourstudy 1 heismoretallerthanme 4 motherwastoldjimnottoeattoomuch 形容词 副词比较级前是否多了相似词 及物动词后是否多了介词 固定搭配中是否多了词 是否多了系动词be superfluousword 多词 1 hissuccessisgreatsurprisetoeveryone 4 shewillpresentatthemeetingtomorrow 3 heaskedmenotgothere a be to 5 themanissittingnexthisson 2 computerplaysimportantpartinourlife discussthesentencesandcorrectthemistakeswithrightsigns an to 名词前 特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词 不及物动词是否缺介词 不定式是否漏了to 是否缺助动词be 惯用法是否漏了不可缺的词 missingword 缺词 1浏览全文 掌握大意 2分句阅读 逐句找错 4检查核对 攻克难点 3由易到难 各个击破 解题步骤 imajoratenglish 在横线上正下方写出要改的词 在其正下方写出要添的词 missingword ilikeplayingpiano 划掉该词 superfluousword iwillreturntoschoolsoon errorword in the 改错的正确格式 payattentiontothefourpoints 1 书写规范2 句首字母大写3 不调整句子语序4 只改动10处错误 practice dothefollowingexercisestogether atchristmaseve jimwentwithhisfathertochooseachristmastree theychooseabigone itwasalmostastallerastheroom theyputtheminthecornerofthesittingroom katewascovereditwithalotofchristmaslight thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment therewasafireburninginthefireplace butthechristmastreelightswasshinningbrightly jimandhisparentsweresinginganddancinghappy atchristmaseve jimwentwithhisfathertochooseachristmastree theychooseabigone itwasalmostastallerastheroom theyputtheminthecornerofthesittingroom katewascovereditwithalotofchristmaslight on chose tall it 动词的时态 介词 形容词 代词 o lights 动词的语态 名词单复数 thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment therewasafireburninginthefireplace butthechristmastreelightswasshinningbrightly jimandhisparentsweresinginganddancinghappy beautiful and 副词 连词 were 动词的主谓一致 happily 形容词 practice finishtheexercisesonyourpaperwithin10minutes dearvillageleader itissaidthatachemicalfactorywillbebuildnearourvillage andidon tthinkitisagoodidea thoughitcanimproveoureconomy butthefactorywillgiveoffpoisonoussmokeandpourwastewater whatwilldoharmtoourhealth mostofthevillagerpaymoreattentiontotheeconomy butenvironmentismoreimportance notuntiltheysufferheavilytheyrealizeitiswrongtodoso fromthebottomofmyheart isuggesttheideawouldbecanceled wecanraisecows ithinkabetterideatodevelopthedairyproductions wewillalsobenefitalotoffromthis willyouthinkovermysuggestioncarefully dearvillageleader itissaidthatachemicalfactorywillbebuildnearourvillage andidon tthinkitisagoodidea thoughitcanimproveoureconomy butthefactorywillgiveoffpoisonoussmokeandpourwastewater whatwilldoharmtoourhealth built but which mostofthevillagerpaymoreattentiontotheeconomy butenvironmentismoreimportance notuntiltheysufferheavilytheyrealizeitiswrongtodoso fromthebott