高一英语短文改错系列(二)精华原版-有答案.docx

此文档收集于网络，仅供学习与交流，如有侵权请联系网站删除高一英语短文改错系列（二）原创精华版(有答案解析）第一篇Dear Lily,Im very happily to get your letter. I receive it after school today, and now let me to tell you something about my hobbies.I like swimming ,and I swim every day in summer . You know summer in England is real hot. I like reading ,too. I read different kind of books . I read two and three books a week. I also like playing for my dog，Mickey. He is big and needs a lot of exercise . So at weekends we often go for long walk around the lake near my house.Well ,these are our hobbies. Im looking foward to hear from you soon. Yours , Mary 第二篇Dear Mom, Today I will introduce Sunshine Town for you. It is a new town in Beijng. It takes only 40 minutes to go there from the center of Beijng by the subway. There is little air pollution there than in other areas of Beijng. There is some shopping malls in Sunshine Town. You can find kinds of souvenir there. If you want eat Chinese food, you can go to Star Shopping Mall, but there are some western restaurants,too. If you like Beijing Opera, you can go to the local theater. What do you like Sunshine Town, Mom? I hoped you and Dad will come for a visit some day and enjoy your stay there. Best wishes! Yours, Tom 第三篇Mrs Peter has two children -Sammy and Annie. Sammy loves his sister very too much and he is usually kind to her, but sometimes something happy may happen.One Saturday morning, Sammy and Annie are playing in the garden. Their mother was cooking. Suddenly Annie began to cry but ran into the kitchen with a broken toy horse. Mrs Peter asked,”Why are you crying,Annie?”“Sammy did it,” Annie answered, crying sad.“How did he break them?”her mother asked. Annie stopped cry, but did not answer for a few second . Then she said ,”I beat him on head with it.” Hear this ,Mrs Peter understood the whole thing.第四篇 The parents have two boys. One day the parents took for a trip for the weekend with friends. They left earlier on Friday morning, and left the boys at home. That evening the boys drove their father car to see movie. They had a good time. After see the movie, they got back to the car. They saw the big hole at the back of the car. They were terrified and asked someone fix the car. Their parents come back on Sunday , but the boys didnt tell them about the hole so they were too terrified . The father went out in his car. When he came back,he was surpring and said to the family, “Someone drove into the back of their car on Thursday and now it is fixed well!”第五篇 Once upon a time, where there was a little boy naming Sima Guaang. One day, he played with some boys near a big tank in front of the house. One of the boy wanted to hide himself in a tank. He thought somebody could find him if he hid in it. And he didnt know the tank was full of water. When he climbed to the top, he fell into the bank. The other boys rtan to help at once. But Sima Guang didnt . He stood there,thinking hardly. Then he had a good idea. Quickly ,he picked up a big stone and break the tank. In this way, Sima Guang saved the boy. How a clever boy!第六篇 Last Sunday I went to a animal hospital to help the doctors there. I arrived at the hospital early in the morning, And there were already much work to do:giving the pets food and water,and even giving them kisses on the heads. At first , they looked at me with frighting eyes. A doctor say to them,”Dont worry,and everything will be OK.” . I washed a dogs hurt leg. I worked careful t make sure I didnt hurt him. I wished he could know we were just trying help him. It was a long day and the work made me tired,and I was very happy. I knew I loved animal. And the animals knew I loved him . They enjoyed about my care with love!第七篇 Do you know Mo Yan, that is a great writer from China? He is the 59-year-old man. He is either short nor tall. His really name is Guan Moye, and Mo Yan is his pen name. It mean “No speaking”. He was born in Gaomi, Shangdong in February 17,1955. Now he lives in Beijing. He joined in the PLA in 1976. He began writing stories when he was 26 years old. He can write stories very well. And he can use his left hand write. He has many work and theyre very famous. He win the Nobel Prize in Literature in 2012. We Chinese are all proud of him.第八篇 Tom liked fish too much. One day he brought a fish to home and then went out. When his wife saw the fish, she said to himself , “I can ask my friends have lunch, and we can eat the fish.” When Tom come home in the evening, the fish wasnt there. His wife said, “Oh, your cat ate it.” But she gave Tom some breads for his supper. Tom was very angrily. So he went to a shop with his wife. He weighed the cat in a shop with his wife and said , “My fish weigh one kilo. This cat weighs one kilo , too. My fish is here, you see, then where is my cat?”第九篇 Let me tell you something about my little dog Snoopy . Snoopy was an American dog. He is very unfriendly. He never barks at strangers. Its great fun play with him. I often teach him to play games. Now he can play many kind of games. If I say “go to sleep”, he goes to his bed and lies down. If I say “play the basketball”,he goes to catch a ball and put it into a basket. If Isay “please dance with us”, he dances the music. “Can he sing a song?” one of my friends ask me. Of course he can. But he does not sing in English and Chinese . So when he sings, everybody can understand him. 第十篇 Every school has their own rules. In some schools in Asia, students cant smoke or talk aloud. In some schools in America ,each child must look for their books well. They should cover the books . But one rule is very popularly around the world: Students have to wear uniforms on weekday. Howerer ,many students dont like to wear the school uniforms so they think the uniforms are most ugly clothes in the world. The schools dont let their students to wear their own clothes at school. Some students drew beautiful pictures or their favorite stars on their uniforms,because they dont want to wear the same clothes. How do you think of it? Do you like your school uniform? 短文改错答案： 第一篇 1 第一句：happily 改为happy. be 动词后用形容词作表语。2 第二句：receive 改为received. 由时间状语after school today 可知，receive 表示的动作发生在 过去，故用一般过去时。3 第二句：去掉to. let为使役动词，后跟不带to的不定式作宾语补足语，let sb. do sth.”让某人做某事”。 4 第四句：real 改为really.修饰形容词hot用副词。 5 第六句：kind 改为kinds.此处kind 是可数名词，前有different修饰，用复数。6 第七句：and 改为or. “two or three+可数名词复数 ”是固定用法，意为“两三.”；此处表示“我一周读两三本书”。 7 第八句：for 改为with. play with. “与.玩耍 ”，是固定用法。8 第十句：long前加a。go for a walk散步，是固定短语。 9 第十句：our改为my. 由上句可知此处表示“我”的爱好，故用my.10 第十二句：hear改为hearing. Look forward to doing sth.“盼望做某事”是固定用法。第二篇1 第一句：for 改为to. Introduce.to sb.”为某人介绍.”是固定用法。 2 第三句：去掉第二个the.by后接表示交通工具的名词，不用the. 3 第四句：little 改为less. 由后面的than可知用比较级。4 第五句：is 改为are. 本句there be 句型，be动词的形式应与其后的主语some shopping malls一致，故用are. 5 第六句：souvenir改为souvenirs. 可数名词souvenir前有kinds of 修饰，用复数。 6 第七句：want 后加to. want to do sth.“想要做某事”是固定用法。7 第七句：but改为and. 逗号后的句子进一步讲述Star Shopping Mall的情况，故用连词and. 8 第九句：What改为How. How do you like.?”你认为.怎么样？”是固定句式。9 第十句：hoped改为hope. 此处应与全文时态一致，用一般现在时。 10 第十句：real改为really. 修饰动词enjoy 用副词。 第三篇1 第二句：去掉too. very much “非常”，是固定短语，too多余。 2 第二句：happy改为unhappp. 由but可知，此处表示“但有时候会发生不开心的事”，故用happy. 3 第三句：are改为were. 由时间状语on Saturday morning可知，用过去进行时，故用were. 4 第五句：but改为and,began to cry与ran into the kitchen是两个相继发生的动作，故用and. 5 第七句：sad改为sadly. 此处表示“伤心地哭”，修饰动词crying用副词。6 第八句：them改为it. 此处指代上文提到的toy horse,用it. 7 第九句：cry改为crying. stop doing sth.“停止做某事”是固定用法。 8 第九句：second改为seconds. 可数名词second 前有a few修饰 ，用复数。 9 第十句：head前加the. 表示“打人的身体某部位”时，表示身体部位的名词前要加the. 10 第十一句：Hear改为Hearing. Mrs Peter与hear是主动关系，故用现在分词。第四篇1 第二句：去掉第一个for, take a trip “去旅行”是固定短语，for多余。 2 第三句：earlier改为early.此处没有比较意义，只表示“早早出发”故用原级。 3 第四句：father改为fathers,此处表示“他们父亲的车”，故用名词所有格形式。4 第六句：see改为seeing,此处afer是介词，后跟动名词形式。 5 第七句：第一个the改为a ,泛指“一个大洞”，用不定冠词a. 6 第八句：fix前加to. ask sb. to do sth,”要求某人做某事”是固定用法。7 第九句：come改为came,讲述过去发生的事情时，用一般过去时。 8 第九句：so改为because,”他们很害怕”是“没有告诉父母”的原因，故用because 引导从句。 9 第十一句：surpring改为surprised.主语是人，表示人感到惊奇的，用surprised,surprising意为“令人惊奇的”。 10 第十一句：their改为my. 这句话是父亲说的，所以应是有人撞了“我的”车尾部，故用my. 第五篇1 第一句：去掉where. 本句是一个there be 句型，where多余。 2 第一句：naming改为named. a little boy 与name是被动关系，故用过去分词。 3 第三句： boy改为boys. one of 后跟可数名词复数。4 第三句：a 改为the,特指前面提到的tank,用the. 5 第四句：somebody 改为nobody.有下文可知，此处表示“没有人能找到他”，故用nobody. 6 第五句： And 改为But. 此处表示“但是他不知道缸里面盛满了水”前后句是转折关系，故用but. 7 第七句：ask后加for. ask for help “寻求帮助”是固定短语。8 第九句：hardly改为hard. 修饰动词think用副词hard,表示“仔细考虑”意义。hardly意为“几乎不，几乎没有”。 9 第十一句：break改为broke. And连接两个并列谓语，形式应一致；由picked up可知，用broke. 10 第十三句：How改为What. 感叹句的中心词是名词boy，故用wha