英语人教版八年级下册writing.ppt

Unit6WritingPastProgressiveTense No 35MiddleSchool WeiYuying TeachingObjectives 教学目标 Bytheendofthislessonyouwillbeableto1findoutwhatproblemscauseyounottogethighermarksinyourwriting 2 writewhatyouweredoingatthattime3 Practicespeakingandwriting 4 feellessscared 恐惧的 inwriting Manypeoplearewarm hearteddonatedmoneytoKoqianpeople IncludeabeggarwhocalledXuChao OnJuly28 2010 Koqianhappenabigflood Therearemanypeopledonatedmoney Becausetheyallwanttoexpresstheirlove WeallareChinese Wemusthelpthepeoplewhoareintrouble Chinesedon tafraidofit Tomwasdoinghishomework TimwaswatchingTV Theirfatherwasreadinganewspaper Theirmotherwascleaningthelivingroom 导致低分的主要原因 问题1句型结构混乱问题2汉式英语问题3缺少好词佳句 句式单一问题4表达不连贯 缺少过渡句和连接词问题5布局谋篇的失误 范文欣赏 LucyandLilyhadabusySundaylastweekend Theyhadbreakfastat7 30 AfterbreakfastLucywashelpinghermothercleantheroomwhileLilywaswatchingTV From10 00to12 00theyweredoingtheirhomework Afterlunch whenLucywentouttomeethisfriends Lilywashavingagoodrest Intheafternoon LucywasgettingonlinewhenLilycamebackhome From5 00p m to6 00p m LucywaswritingtohispenpalwhileLilywashelpinghermothercookInthekitchen Afterdinner whileLucywaswritingadiary Lilywenttobed Theywerebusybuthappy Topic Beginning开篇点题 Ending回扣主题或给予评价 Transitionalsentence过渡句 连接词 Mainpart正文描述各项活动 活动 Outline 好词佳句 Whatwereyoudoing 1描述你们在过去某一时刻或某一时间内的所作所为 2描述过去的大事 例如汶川地震 7 28洪水 奥运会等对现在的影响或你们对这些大事的感受以及你们正在做什么等等 审题 选材 列提纲 着手写 检查 三确1确定体裁2明确要求3确定内容 三选1选人称2选时态3选句型 三步1开门见山表主题2展开描述3归纳首尾呼应 三要1要观点准确2要运用所学3要避免平凡化 三查1查拼写2查标点符号3查语法 写作五步曲 Canyouretell 复述 thecompositionorally 口头地 accordingtotheoutline topic 三列提纲 beginning Mainpart Ending Myresolution s 1 NextyearIamgoingtoDalianforvacation2 IamgoingtobeateacherwhenIgrowup 3Iwillvisitmyunclenextweek 4Ihavearesolution Itisabouthowtodobetteratschool 开门见山表主题 Howtowritethebeginning Myresolution s 1 过渡句 2 Whatareyougoingtodo Howareyougoingtodothat Whereareyougoingtowork Whenareyougoingtostart 3连接词 展开描述 HowtowritetheMainpart and but or so for aswellas ontheonehand ontheotherhandofcourse afterall both and notonly butalso what smore 而且 first next thenfinally 最后 infactinsteadof 连接词 Linkingwords 佳句锦囊 1 First Iamgoingtowritearticlesandsendthemtomagazinesandnewspapers 2 IwanttogotoPekingUniversity 3 Dalianisabeautifulcity 4 Wellbegunishalfdone 好的开端是成功的一半 5 knowledgeispower 知识就是力量 6 Everymanhashisprice 天生我才必有用 7 Nopain nogain 没有付出就没有收获 8 Agoodplanisthebeginningofsuccess 好的计划是成功的开始 Myresolution s 1I msuremydreamwillcometrue 2Ihopetobesuccessfuloneday 3Anoldsayinggoes wherethereisawill thereisaway 4Ithinkmyresolutionswillsucceed 5 MaybeinthefutureIwillbeamoviestar 6 Ihopemyresolutionscancometrue 归纳首尾呼应 HowtowritetheEnding Let swrite Myresolution s check Isthereatopicsenence Didhe sheusetheSimpleFutureTense Arethereanyspellingmistakes Arethereanygrammaticalmistakes 语法错误 Isthereasummarizesentence 总结语 Let sshare 比赛要求 1 男女各一队 2 回答正确可得一分 1 Iamthirsty 2 Theclassroomisdirty 3 Iamsleepy 4 Iamnotfeelingwell 5 Tomorrowismymother sbirthday 6 MyEnglishisnotwell 7 IamgoingtobeaChineseteacher 8Iwanttobeagoodstudent Congratulations outline Mywinterholiday Beginning开篇点题 Ending Mainpart正文 Let shaveatry Winterholiday Beijing Can twait firstofall second third BytrainTian anmenSquareThePalaceMuseumABeijinghutongTheGreatWallBeijingduckdeliciousbeautifulInterestingtakephotos buy Hewhodoesnotreachthegreatwallisnotatrueman outline Howtodobetteratschool Beginning开篇点题 Ending Mainpart正文 Let shaveatry InChinese English mathListen carefullytake