2012届-第(1)篇求助类.doc

第 1 篇求助类 假定你是王海，正在一所美国学校学习暑期课程，学习中遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介； 2.具体求助内容；3.约定时间；4.你的联系方式（Email: ; phone number: 538296）注意：1. 词数100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文段的开头、结束语已写好，其字数不计入所完成的文段内。Dear Sir / Madam, Im Wang Hai, _Yours,Wang HaiOutline: (写作提纲)1.本人简介； 2.具体求助内容；3.约定时间及你的联系方式；4.收尾致谢或表示期待。Beautiful sentences（美文美句）Step 1: Self-introduction 简单介绍自己 Im Wang Hai, a Chinese exchange student （who is） taking the summer course / program / lessons / classes in your school. (此处，你的年龄、爱好、父母等等信息并不重要；重要的是表明你是交换生，在该校上暑期课程) Step 2: State your aim 开门见山，表明目的Im writing to say that I hope to get help from the school Learning Center. Im writing because I have some trouble in my study and I need your help.Step 3: State your problems in learning 讲明问题 （重点）要讲学习中遇到的问题，而非无处住、无友等。以下句式要讲到，为重点之处。have difficulty / problem / trouble in sth. / in doing sth. Ube in trouble / be in difficulty have a hard / difficulty time ( in ) doing sth. I have the following difficulties / problems / troubles CHere /These /The following / The above are my difficulties / problems / troublesfind it hard / difficult to do sth cant do well in / do badly / poorly in / be not good at / be poor at / be weak inget bad scores / always fail / the last one cant keep up with / cant catch up with cant follow / understand / express / remember / think of / work out I need to improve / My listening needs improving. Im worried / anxious /upset / frustrated / unhappy because/because of Step 4: Ask for help 再次表明寻求帮助 Step 5: State time available （大晚上或周末肯定不合适吧; 求人语言要客气）Im free this Friday / I have time on Thursday afternoon, 2 to 4Will it / this time be OK / suitable? / Will you be available at that time? Can I go and meet you ? / Tell me if its OK Would you let me know ？ / Would you be kind enough ？Step 6: Your contact information 联络信息 You can reach me / contact me through e-mail / Call me at 538296Step 7: Ending ( State your expectation / thanks ) 结尾 Id really be grateful if you could help me. / Im looking forward to your reply.Sample 1：（范文1）Im Wang Hai, who is a Chinese student now studying at your school. I am really having a good time here but I also have a little trouble in my study, so I am anxious to get the help from the Learning Center.As a Chinese student, I was confident that my English was good enough, but too many new words in math and physics are recently driving me mad. Therefore, I think I need your help. Could you please tell me how to learn them quickly? These new words have now become a big problem in my study.As for the time, either this Sunday or next Tuesday will be suitable for me. You can e-mail me at or call me at 538296.Hope anxiously to get your help.Sample 2：（范文2） Im Wang Hai, a Chinese student taking summer coursed in your university / school. Im writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulty in note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. Yo may email or phone me. Here are m