话题作文之话题21 shopping.doc

20092010 之写作训练专练话题作文之话题21 shopping词汇归纳: 必备词汇及短语：1.去逛大街浏览橱窗(常指无意购物的行为): _2.讨价还价(vt/n): _ 3.价格高/低: _4.用现金付款:_ 5.用支票付款：_6.九折折扣: _ 7.促销(vt): _ (n):_ 8.围巾(n): _ 9.靴子(n): _ 10.皮革(n):_ 11.手提电脑(n):_ 12.市场(n)：_; 超市(n)：_13.随着因特网的发展和电脑的普遍变化:_14.向某人投诉某物/事(短语):_ 投诉(n): _15.采取法律行动:_16.屏幕坏了:_17.退货:_ 18.退还货款(v/n):_19. 泄露个人信息:_20销售员(n):_ 21. 常客:_22. 消费(v):_ 消费者：_23. 信用卡：_必备句型：1. 某人花费.钱买了某物:_2. 某物花费了某人.钱：_3. 某物值.钱：_4. 某物以.价格出售：_5. 这产品出问题了：_6. 我们在大商店购物并且检查产品质量后才付款，这是很重要的。_7. 我要投诉贵公司的产品质量。_8. 请你退还货款，否则我就采取法律行动。_基础写作 假设你是李华，你新买了的某外国品牌的MP4出了故障，现在你写信到该产品负责售后服务的公司反映问题。写作内容：购买日期上个月问题一周前屏幕已经坏了，看不见显示的内容。已经和当地销售商家投诉，但是其不能解决问题。要求更换一台新的，如不能则要求退货，拿回货款。写作要求：1. 必须使用5个规范句子表达全部内容。并且将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。2. 开头结尾已为你写好，不包含在5个句子内。Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for your attention. Im writing to complain about your product. _ I am looking forward to your early reply. Li Hua任务型写作 阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People dont have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of the computer and click the mouse. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly. However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.写作内容: 1. 以约30个词概述短文的内容要点。2. 以约120个词就 “如何看待网上购物”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：(1) 你会不会选择网上购物？请结合自己的时间阐明理由。(2) 就网上购物，你有什么建议？写作要求：(1) 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点。(2) 标题制定。评分标准：概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。_Answers:必备词汇短语：1. do window shopping 2. bargain 3. high/low price 4.pay in cash 5. pay by cheque 6.10% discount 7. promote; promotion 8. scarf 9. boot 10. leather 11. laptop 12. market ; supermarket 13. with the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers 14.complain to sb. about sth.; complaint 15. take legal action 16. something wrong with the screen 17. return sth to sb. 18. refund 19. leak personal information 20. seller 21. regular customers 22. consume; consumer 23. a credit card必备句型：1. sb. spend some money on sth. 2. sth. cost sb. some money 3. sth. is worth some money 4. sth is sold at the price of 5. something wrong with the product 6. Its important the we shop in some big shops and give money after checking the quality of products. 7. I complain about the quality of your product of the company. 8. Give my money back, or I will take legal action.基础写作：构思点拨：文体：书信；记叙文，用第一人称信息组织： 1. 购买商品的时间和物品的名称； 2. 故障 3. 投诉； 4. 更换； 5. 退货，拿回货款时态： 一般过去时，一般现在时参考范文：Dear Sir or Madam,Thanks for your attention. Im writing to complain about your product.Last month, I bought an MP4 made by your company, which brought me enjoyment for some time. But last week, something went wrong with the screen and I cant see anything on it. I have complained about this to the shop which sold me this MP4, but they /it couldnt do anything about it. I hope you can get me a new one. Otherwise, I would like to return it to you and have my money back.I am looking forward to your early reply. Li Hua任务型写作构思点拨：1. 标题：Should We Shop Online?/ Should We Do Shopping Online? / Shopping Online Is a Good Choice1. Summary: 关键词/句：(1) With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life.(2) Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.(3) However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.参考范文： Shopping Online is a Good ChoiceShopping online has become commonplace in our life. Its convenience and variety make people save energy and time, which is especially desirable to those who could not go shopping in person. However, some disadvantages still exist. I do choose shopping online because of its convenience and low prices. As a student, I dont have much time and money. Buying online saves my time going from one shop to another and allows to buy things at a discount. Moreover, the goods are of good quality. After you click the mouse, just wait for its coming, which is exciting.Still, not all shops on the Internet offer good products. Therefore, i