Writingtask1剑桥七的考官范文1.doc

Writing task 1 剑桥七的考官范文1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.Model answerThe graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period. (175 words)分析点评： 本文主体第一段先写明了起始时间1979年的情况，紧接着两个段落对四条线进行了分组：beef，lamb，fish都在下降， 分为一段来写，而chicken在上升，放在另一段来写，既描述清楚了总体趋势，又加强了四种食物之间的比较对比，思路清晰连贯，内容详略得当。结尾段概括了总体特征，其实也可以放在开头段的第二句话的位置来写。 本文还有一个亮点值得考生关注：数据的比较对比，只是高分作文的必然要求。体现在语言上，范文使用了比较级和最高级，使用了表示比较对比的标志词，比如similar，while，also，overtaking等等。Writing task 1 剑桥七的考官范文2The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000(解释题干). Between these year electricity production almost doubled（总体趋势）, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France（具体数字）.In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units) and the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power (each producing 20 units) and oil (which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia(插入语，以来与澳洲对比), had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant（一言代之，精妙）.Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power(显著特征).表格题：The table shows the economic and social indicators for seven American countries for the year 1997.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.CountryGDP per capita (USD)Adult illiteracy rate %Newspaper sales per 1000 peopleThe Bahamas130004.499Argentina91003.6123Brazil490016.840Mexico430010.597Surinam37007.0122Jamaica260015.263Cuba21004.4118表格图的范文： The table shows the GDP per capita, adult illiteracy rates, and newspaper sales per thousand people of seven American countries.We can see from the table that GDP per capita varies substantially from 2100 USD in Cuba to 13000 USD in the Bahamas(最高与最低), with 5 of the 7 countries below 5000 USD per capita GDP（整体特点）.（寻找最高与最低值，然后再找寻共性）The illiteracy rates also differ considerably. More specifically, the highest illiteracy rates are for Brazil (16.8%) followed by Jamaica (15.2%) and Surinam (7%) lie in the middle. Surprisingly(有些许感情色彩，使行文不呆板), the adult illiteracy rate for Cuba and the Bahamas is the same, at 4.4%.Newspaper sales per thousand people are also diverse. Argentina has the lowest illiteracy rate（开始横向对比了） and the highest newspaper sales per thousand people (1231000). Surinam (1221000) and Cuba (1181000) have similar rates（相同的最高级归类）. The Bahamas (991000) and Mexico (971000) have relatively high levels, too. Jamaica (631000) and Brazil (401000) have the lowest levels and have the highest illiteracy rates.From the chart, we can see that there is no relationship between either the adult illiteracy rate, or newspaper sales, and GDP per capita（横向对比）. However, it does appear that the lower the illiteracy rate. The higher the newspaper sales. This can be seen generally, in that the four countries with illiteracy rates of 7% or less have the highest newspaper sales（细腻至极）.The table below shows the number of road accidents which occurred in Britain in different places and the ages of the injured persons.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.WhenWhere Accidents occurredAge 2-4Age 5-7Age 8-10Age 11-13Age 14-16TOTALGoing to school11282125Going home from school217103234Playing in the street98812852214Cycling in the street110258145Shopping for their parents532122152TOTAL10815283207370Model answer:The chart organizes data about road accident involving children in Britain by age and by when and where the accidents occurred. It indicates that the incidence of accidents decreases as the childrens age increases（横向规律） and that age correlates with the circumstances surrounding the accident（纵向规律）.For all ages, the most common situation leading to an accident is playing in the street（横向最显目点，第三栏）. In 25 accidents due to going to school, age 5-7 saw almost half of the cases, while after that age, the number of accidents decreased gradually（第一栏的描述）. Those accidents caus