外研版高中英语必修二教案：Module 6 Films and TV Programmes SectionⅤWriting影评.doc

module 6 films and tv programmessection writing-影评一、基本结构影评就是观众在观看完电影以后的所感所想。影评一般可分为三个部分。第一部分：简介背景。对电影名称、导演等做简单介绍。(此部分可以省略)第二部分：简述情节。包括主演及影片内容概述。影片概述只需要叙述大概情节，最主要的是分析人物和情节安排，重点突出作者自己要评论的内容。第三部分：发表评论。就影片中自己感兴趣和有价值的故事情节发表观点，可有选择性地就电影的结构、节奏、演员角色、宣传、票房等方面有重点、有选择地展开评论，最后可以对电影进行总体评价。注意：电影评论中一定要有自己鲜明的观点，不可人云亦云，要有论据来证明自己的观点。二、增分佳句1the film is set in a remote mountainous village.这部电影是以一个偏远的山村为背景。2this is a very touching film, a mustsee.这是一部非常感人的电影，一部必看的电影。3in a word, this film is well worth seeing.总之，这部电影非常值得一看。4even with these small problems, the film is still a great film, and i really enjoy it!即使有这些小问题，这部电影仍然是一部伟大的电影，我非常喜欢它。5judging from the wild clapping and cheers that filled the cinema, everybody agreed that it was indeed the best film of the year.从电影院里热烈的掌声和欢呼来判断，大家一致认为，这部影片的确是今年的最佳影片。题目要求根据表格提示信息，写一篇关于电影2012的影评，词数100左右。name2012directorroland emmerichfilm starsjohn cusack, chiwetel ejiofor, amanda peet, oliver platt, danny glover, thandie newton and woody harrelsonplot由于太阳活动异常，人类将遭遇灭顶之灾(catastrophe)。以写小说谋生的jackson在带孩子们到黄石公园度周末时发生了一连串怪事。最后jackson带领自己的家人靠着互爱和对生命的尊重渡过了难关你的感想第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为影评，属于议论文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称为第三人称；3确定时态：影评主要用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分，背景简介。第二部分，故事情节简介。第三部分，个人评价。第二步：核心词汇想周全1tell_of/relate/give_an_account_of讲述2main_character/leading_actor/role 主角3be_good_at/be_expert_in/be_skilled_in 擅长4a_series_of 一系列的5go_through_the_difficulty/pull_through 渡过难关6respect_for_life 对生命的尊重7take_measures/steps/action 采取措施8protect_the_earth/care_for_the_earth/save_the_earth 保护地球第三步：由词扩句雏形现12012是一部灾难电影，它由罗兰艾默里克执导。(and连接两个并列分句)2012 is a disaster film and it is directed by roland emmerich. 2.这部电影由john cusack, chiwetel ejiofor, amanda peet, oliver platt, danny glover, thandie newton and woody harrelson主演。(主谓宾结构)the_film_stars_john_cusack,_chiwetel_ejiofor,_amanda_peet,_oliver_platt,_danny_glover,_thandie_newton_and_woody_harrelson.3这部电影讲述了主要人物如何在由太阳活动异常引起的人类大灾难中幸存下来的故事。(how引导的宾语从句作介词的宾语；过去分词短语作定语)the_film_tells_of_how_the_main_characters_survive_the_human_catastrophe_caused_by_unusual_sun_activity._4杰克逊擅长写小说，他和孩子们在黄石公园经历了一系列奇怪的事情。(and连接两个并列谓语)jackson_is_good_at_writing_novels_and_experiences_a_series_of_strange_things_with_his_children_in_yellowstone_park.5最后杰克逊和他的家人用互爱和对生命的尊重渡过了难关。(主谓宾结构)at_last_jackson_and_his_family_go_through_the_difficulty_with_love_for_each_other_and_respect_for_life.6我认为它是一部最令人满意的电影之一并且可以被称为“灾难电影之母”。(and连接两个并列的宾语从句)i_think_it_is_one_of_the_most_satisfactory_films_and_it_really_can_be_called_“the_mother_of_all_disaster_movies”. 7从这部电影中我们知道人类应该采取措施来保护我们的地球。(that引导宾语从句)from_it_we_learn_that_human_beings_should_take_measures_to_protect_our_earth.8如果我们不保护我们的地球，这样的灾难可能会在未来发生。(if引导状语从句)if_we_dont_protect_our_earth,_such_a_catastrophe_might_come_in_the_future.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用过去分词短语作定语改写句12012 is a disaster film directed by roland emmerich.2用形容词短语作状语改写句4jackson,_good_at_writing_novels,_experiences_a_series_of_strange_things_with_his_children_in_yellowstone_park.3用if省略句改写句8if_not,_such_a_catastrophe_might_come_in_the_future.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇2012 is a disaster film directed by roland emmerich. the film stars john cusack, chiwetel ejiofor, amanda peet, oliver platt, danny glover, thandie newton and woody harrelson.the film tells of how the main characters survive the human catastrophe caused by unusual sun activity. jackson, good at writing novels, experiences a series of strange things with his children in yellowstone park. at last jackson and his family go through the difficulty with love for each other and respect for life.i think it is one of the most satisfactory films and it rea