9A_Unit3_Maintask.ppt

Unit3Teenageproblem Maintask Whatproblemdoestheboyhave Howdoestheboyfeel Hehasalotofhomework tired sleepy stressed Everybodyhasproblemssometimes Whatproblemsdoyouhave teenageproblems thecausesofstress Theyarenotfit There stoomuchschoolwork GettingtoomanytestsandexamsTheyareweakinasubject GettinglowmarksNothavingenoughsleepHavingnoclosefriendsDon thaveenoughtimeforhobbies Somepeoplelaughatthem ToonoisyathomeNocommunicationwithfamilymembers Whatareyourwaystodealwithstress Causesofstress Waystosolve Writedownthewaystosolveyourproblems Introduction Mainbody Conclusion Writing IntroductionMainbodyCauseofstressandhowtodealwithit Causeofstressandhowtodealwithit Causeofstressandhowtodealwithit 3 conclusion Millie swritingplan alotofhomework planmytimecarefully benoisyathome gotoaquietplace worryaboutexams workhardtalktoteachers alotofhomework planyourtimecarefully Thetypesofmistakes a wordusagemistakesb punctuationmistakesc wrongtensed spellingmistakese missingword Writing Onecauseofstressis Sometimes itisdifficulttoachieveabalancebetween Ioftenarguewith Thebestwaytodealwith solveitis Mybiggestproblemis Thebestadviceafriendgavemewas 第一档 13 15分上下连贯 意思完整 语言通顺 表达清楚 很少有语法错误和拼写错误 第二档 9 12分上下基本连贯 语言基本通顺 表达较清楚 少有语法错误和拼写错误 第三档 5 8分上下不连贯 语言不通顺 表达不清楚 有较多语法错误和拼写错误 第四档 0 4分上下不连贯 语言不通顺 表达不清楚 有大量语法错误和拼写错误 TheGradingStandard 评分标准 Mybiggestproblemisthatitisverynoisyathome MygrandmaisdeafandsheoftenturnsonTVveryloud Whenthishappens Icannotdomyworkcarefully Iusuallygotoafriend shomeortothelibrarywhereitisquiet mainbody WhenIhaveproblems Iwilltalktomyfriendsandfamilymembers soIamtellingyoumyproblems andIhopeyouwilltellmeyours Ifyouneedanyfriendlyadvice Iwillbehappytohelp YourfriendMillie conclusion Writeyourownletter IntroductionMainbodyCauseof