内容简介：: 第三编书面表达靓起来扮靓策略1高级词汇增色从书面表达的评分标准可知，文章覆盖所有要点、应用较多的语法结构和词汇、有效地使用语句间的连接成分，符合这几项标准才能提高书面表达的得分档次。写作时，考生要恰当运用一些高级词汇、句型或者连接成分，恰当地变换词汇或短语。有时，即使只有一处点睛之笔，也能使文章增加亮点，给目标读者耳目一新的感觉。1表示“能够做某事”用be capable of doing代替be able to dothis way, you will be capable of communicating with other students easily.这样，你就能够与其他同学很容易地进行交流。2表示“大家公认、认可”用its acknowledged that代替its accepted thatjust as we learn how to swim, its widely acknowledged that we master english through lots of practice.正如我们学习游泳一样，人们普遍认为，我们通过大量练习掌握英语。3表示“陪伴某人”用accompany sb.代替stay with sb.wherever her husband went, she would accompany him.不论丈夫去哪里，她都陪伴左右。4表示“完成”用accomplish代替finishwe managed to accomplish the task in time even though it was difficult.纵然任务艰巨，我们也及时完成了。5表示“习惯于”用be accustomed to代替be used toshe has been accustomed to this sort of work.她对这种工作已习惯了。6表示“进步”用have a sense of achievement代替make progresstired as we were, we had a sense of achievement and pleasure. only then did i realize that if every individual does his bit, the world will be different.尽管我们很累，但是有一种成就感和快乐感。只有到那时，我才认识到如果每个人都付出一点，那么世界就有所不同。7表示“组织活动”用launch a campaign代替organize an activitylast week, our class launched a campaign, volunteering to plant trees in the nearby hill.上周，我班组织了一次活动，志愿到附近的小山去植树。8表示“实际上”用as a matter of fact代替actuallyas a matter of fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in using shared bicycles.实际上，共享单车的使用有利有弊。9表示“喜欢”用adore代替likelast but not least, it must be pointed out that i adore going travelling during holidays.最后，必须指出的是我喜欢假日去旅行。10表示“尽管”用despite the fact that代替althoughthe following day, i took him to mei lanfang grand theatre to watch beijing opera. despite the fact that he could understand few words, he was still amazed to see the colorful costumes and the unique way of performing.第二天，我带他去梅兰芳大剧院看京剧。尽管他语言不通，但是他对五颜六色的服装和独特的表演风格感到很惊讶。11表示“认真地”用attentively代替carefullywhen the teacher paraphrased the text in english, the students listened attentively and took notes.当老师用英语解释课文时，学生们聚精会神地听并做着笔记。12表示“偶尔”用occasionally/once in a while代替sometimesif youre traveling by train, walk through the cars occasionally.如果你要坐火车旅行，可以偶尔在车厢走走。13表示“花时间做”用devote . to doing代替spend . doing . it also has many learned teachers who are always devoted to their teaching work.也有许多爱岗敬业、博学多才的老师。14表示“每年”用annually代替every yearwe must harness the rivers which overflow annually. 我们必须治理那些每年泛滥的河流。15表示“担心”用be full of anxiety代替be anxiouseven though i love the autumn season, it is full of anxiety for me.尽管我热爱秋天，但是对我来说，秋天仍然充满焦虑。16表示“显然”用apparently代替clearlywell, apparently that was not the case.嗯，显然在这件事情上并非如此。17表示“有趣的，有吸引力的”用appealing代替interestingit creates an atmosphere which visitors find so appealing.它创造了一种吸引游客的氛围。18表示“即将来临”用be around the corner/be approaching代替be comingnow that the winter vacation is around the corner, i intend to find a parttime job during this period of time. 寒假快要来了，我想找份兼职工作。19表示“大约”用approximately代替aboutit will start at 1：30 pm and last approximately for three hours.一点半开始，大约持续三个小时。20表示“重视”用attach importance to代替valuewe will also attach importance to reading and writing in chinese learning.在语文学习中，我们也将重视读和写。21表示“有空的”用available代替freeim available during the week so i have enough time for the work.一周时间我都有空，所以我有足够的时间做这份工作。22表示“我相信”用im convinced that代替i believei am convinced that he must be the kind of person you need. 我相信他一定是你们所需要的那种人才。23表示“有益处的”用be of great benefit代替be usefulmoreover, i think it would be of great benefit if you could exchange ideas with your classmates.还有，我认为多与同学交流有好处。24表示“因此，结果”用as a consequence代替as a resultthe reason for my delay was that i caught a bad cold, so i was too weak to write a single word. as a consequence, i didnt finish my homework on time.我延迟的原因是我感冒了，身体虚弱无法写字。结果，我没有按时完成作业。25表示“此外”用in addition代替besidesin addition, i also actively participate in community activities and volunteer service activities.此外，我积极参加社区活动和志愿者服务。26表示“认真地”用with caution代替carefullythe official looked through our letter with caution, promising to hold another conference to discuss the issue.官员认真地看了我们的信件，答应再开一次会议，讨论这个问题。27表示“困难的”用challenging代替difficultyin the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.在接下来的三年里，我们的学校生活将充满挑战。28表示“掌握”用have a good command of代替masteri have a good command of english, which enables me to communicate with foreign friends well. 我英语好，这使我与外宾交流畅通。29表示“考虑”用take . into consideration/account代替consideri would be grateful if you could take my application into consideration.如果您能考虑我的申请，我感激不尽。30表示“重要，要紧”用matter/count代替be importantfirst impressions really do count.第一印象真的很重要。31表示“决定做”用be determined to do代替decide to dohaving listened to what the teacher said, he was determined to learn greek well.听了老师的话，他下决心学好希腊语。32表示“不同种类的”用a variety of代替different kinds ofthe school over, my classmates and i held a heated discussion, in which a variety of ideas were put forward.放学了，我和同学进行了热烈讨论，提出了多种办法。33表示“著名的”用distinguished代替famousas a distinguished professor, he was invited to deliver a speech to us students.作为一名著名教授，他受邀为我们做了报告。34表示“最后”用eventually代替finallywhen we eventually showed everybody the video on teachers day, our teacher was very moved and the rest of the class really enjoyed it. 在教师节那天，当我们最后播放视频的时候，老师很感动，同学们也很高兴。35表示“学习英语”用be exposed to english代替learn englishi have been exposed to english for about 10 years.我接触英语大约10年了。36表示“使某人做某事”用enable sb. to do sth.代替make sb. do sth.also, doing more listening practice will enable you to improve your listening ability. 还有，更多的听力训练也能帮助你提高听力。37“爱好”用have a taste for代替like it appears to me that he has a taste for music.我觉得他似乎爱好音乐。38表示“未能”用fail to do代替be not able tofirms that fail to take advantage of the new technology will go out of business. 未能利用新技术的公司会被淘汰。39表示“帮助某人”用do sb. a favor代替help sb.would you like to do me the favor to correct the mistakes in my composition? 你能帮忙为我纠正作文中的错误吗？40表示“我希望”用hopefully代替i hopehopefully, scientists can find ways to solve the serious problem. 希望科学家能够找到解决这个严重问题的办法。41表示“记住”用keep/bear in mind代替rememberand keep in mind that this holds true regardless of the length of your speech. 还要记住的是，这一点总是很适用的，这和你演说的长度无关。42表示“一就”用the moment/hardly . when . 代替as soon ashardly had i taken the book home when i set about reading it, eager to get a clear awareness of the plot.我一把书拿回家就开始阅读，急于了解书中的情节。43表示“感谢某人”用convey ones gratitude to sb.代替thank sb.im writing to convey my gratitude to you for your kind help and tender care during my stay in your country.我写信对我在贵国停留期间您对我的细心照料表示感谢。44表示“忙于”用be occupied with/be buried in代替be busy withsome of us were busy making greeting cards, while others occupied themselves with the party. 一些人在忙于制作贺卡，而另一些人忙于准备晚会。45表示“我想到”用it occurs to me that代替i remember/thinkit occurred to me that i should have guided him to the bus station. 我突然想起我本来应该把他带到公交站的。46表示“参加”用participate in代替join inin addition, it does benefit you if you participate in a variety of afterschool activities. 此外，参加各种课外活动对你也有益处。47表示“擅长”用be qualified for代替be good ati think i am qualified for being the pupils english coach, because i have good character, being independent in life and proficient in english. 我认为我擅长给小学生当英语老师，因为我性格温和，生活独立并精通英语。48表示“努力做某事”用make great efforts to do/spare no effort to do代替try to doli hua spares no effort to study so that he can catch up with his classmates. 为了赶上同学，李华学习很努力。49表示“使人们意识到”用raise peoples awareness of代替make people realizeas a volunteer of environmental protection, i am writing to raise our awareness of protecting the environment. 作为环保志愿者，我书面倡议大家提高环保意识。50表示“应该”用be supposed to代替shouldeveryone is supposed to be in room 120, the big classroom exactly at 2：30 pm, monday. 周一下午两点半所有人准时在大教室120房间集合。1.i wonder if you can help me to polish my application._答案：i wonder if you can do_me_the_favor/lend_me_a_helping_hand to polish my application.2i am_good_at english, making it easy for me to communicate well with foreign friends._答案：i have_a_good_command_of english, making it easy for me to communicate well with foreign friends.3remember that youd better arrive on time._答案：keep_in_mind that youd better arrive on time.4those who want to know chinese culture are welcome to take part in this activity._答案：those who want to have_a_good_understanding_of chinese culture are welcome to take part in this activity.5i sincerely hope my advice will help._答案：i sincerely hope my advice will be_of_some_help_to_you.6i would appreciate it if you could consider my application._答案：i would appreciate it if you could take my application into_consideration/account.7as_soon_as we arrived at the hill, we began to take photos._答案：hardly_had we arrived at the hill when we began to take photos.8i_believe that it is the very book youre looking_for._答案：im_fully_convinced that it is the very book youre seeking.9im writing to thank_you for your kindness._答案：im writing to convey_my_gratitude_to_you for your kindness.10with the summer holidays coming,_im planning to spend a meaningful vacation._答案：with the summer holidays approaching/around_the_corner,_im planning to spend a meaningful vacation.- 8 -扮靓策略2生动句式添彩在高考书面表达中，首先要覆盖所有要点，同时次要点齐全。还要注意适当运用含有较高级语法结构的句式，比如强调句式、倒装句式、省略句式、各类从句、非谓语动词等。这些结构的恰当运用，可以使文章语言丰富、可读性强；加上合适的连接词，可以使文章结构紧凑，从而反映出考生较高的语言运用能力。句式一：运用强调句型强调句型由“it is/was被强调部分that/who其他成分”构成。强调句型的运用可以加强语气，更加突出所表达的情感或者突出某些人物或事件的重要性。1that experience made me more confident.it was that experience that made me more confident.正是这次经历，让我更加自信了。2with the great pleasure i write to sincerely invite you to attend our comingofage ceremony.it is with the great pleasure that i write to sincerely invite you to attend our comingofage ceremony.我非常愉快地给您写信，诚恳地邀请您参加我们的成人典礼。句式二：运用倒装句1then i realized that it was by getting involved in the competition that i gained more selfconfidence and enjoyed the pleasure of teamwork.only then did i realize that it was by getting involved in the competition that i gained more selfconfidence and enjoyed the pleasure of teamwork.只有在那时我才认识到通过参与比赛，我获得了自信，享受到合作的乐趣。2we had hardly got to the farm when we started to water trees.hardly had we got to the farm when we started to water trees.我们一到农场，就开始浇树。句式三：运用定语从句1fortunately, we really did an excellent job and won the first prize. it made us delighted.fortunately, we really did an excellent job and won the first prize, which made us delighted.幸运的是，我们表现出色，获了一等奖，真让人高兴。2there is a person who plays an important role in my life. it is beyond my description.there is a person who plays an important role in my life, which is beyond my description.有一个人在我生活中起了重要作用，这是我用语言无法描述的。句式四：运用名词性从句1my hard work has paid off. i have achieved a lot. i am quite proud of it.my hard work has paid off, and i am quite proud of what i have achieved.我的努力得到了回报，我对自己所取得的成就感到自豪。2we should shoulder the responsibility to better our school. we really appreciate fulfilling it.shouldering the responsibility to better our school is what we really appreciate fulfilling.肩负起美化学校的责任是我们乐于践行的事情。句式五：运用非谓语动词1i was encouraged by her. i made up my mind to have a try.encouraged by her, i made up my mind to have a try.在她的鼓励下，我决心尝试一下。2after enough consideration, we wrote a letter to the headmaster. we sincerely expressed our great concern as well as giving some practical suggestions about the parking issue.after enough consideration, we wrote a letter to the headmaster, sincerely expressing our great concern as well as giving some practical suggestions about the parking issue.考虑再三，我们给校长写了一封信，表达了我们的关注，并且就停车问题提出了切实可行的办法。3our school encouraged the students to take outdoor exercise. our school organized a mountainclimbing on april 10.to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountainclimbing on april 10.为了鼓励学生参加户外活动，我校于4月10日组织了爬山活动。句式六：运用虚拟语气1if you entertain my application favorably, i would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.should you entertain my application favorably, i would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.如果您批准我的申请，我一定会让您满意。2and i think that we need an indoor stadium and a swimming pool.and i think that if there were an indoor stadium and a swimming pool, it would be better.我想，要是有一个室内体育馆和游泳馆，那该多好啊。3with your timely assistance in giving me first aid, the consequences were not serious. if it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, the consequences might have been serious.如果不是您给我及时提供急救，恐怕结果不堪设想。句式七：运用感叹句1how happy i was to be one of the members in this warm family!成为这个温暖大家庭的一个成员，我是多么高兴啊！2how considerate of you to remember my birthday!您真的很体贴，还记得我的生日！句式八：运用状语从句1once the decision was made, we immediately set out to collect money.一旦做出决定，我们马上开始筹集资金。2no matter how (however) tough the task is, there is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and win a complete success.无论任务多么艰巨，毫无疑问我们会克服困难取得成功。句式九：运用省略句1if im given the job, im sure to make a good guide.if given the job, im sure to make a good guide.如果得到这份工作，我一定会成为一个好的导游。2be careful when you are doing your homework.be careful when doing your homework.做作业时要细心。句式十：运用高级表达1it goes without saying that . “毋庸置疑”it goes without saying that time is precious for us students. 毋庸置疑，时间对我们莘莘学子着实宝贵。2as an old saying goes “正如谚语所说”as an old saying goes, “honesty is the best policy.”俗话说得好：诚实为上策。3theres no doubt that . “毫无疑问”theres no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of overusing the mobile phones. 毫无疑问，对过度使用手机问题应予以重视。4id appreciate it if you could . “如果你能做我将感激不尽”id appreciate it if you could bring it to me at your convenience tomorrow. 如果明天你方便的话给我带过来，我将感激不尽。5it occurs to me that . “我突然想起”suddenly it occurred to me that he might have left it in the taxi.突然，我想起来他可能将东西落在出租车上了。6make joint efforts to do “齐心协力做某事”lets make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.让我们共同努力创造一个绿色和谐的环境。7be doing . when . “正在做突然(发生了另一件事)”last friday, i was stepping out of the school when a notice on the wall caught my eye.上周五，我正走出学校时，墙上的一张通知吸引了我的注意。8否定词的运用of course, no tourists will miss the local food in xian, nor will we. 过往游客都不会错过西安当地美食，我们当然也不例外。9with复合宾语结构with time going by, more and more people begin to realize the importance of protecting the environment. 随着时间的推移，越来越多的人们开始意识到保护环境的重要性。with all the factors taken into consideration, i believe that you are sure to catch up with others in the near future.考虑到诸多因素，我相信你一定会在不远的将来赶上其他同学。10cant help doing . “情不自禁做”attracted by its natural beauty, we couldnt help taking lots of pictures, cherishing the wonderful memories close to nature and history. 被自然美景所吸引，我们忍不住拍了很多照片，留住与自然和历史亲近的美好记忆。11it seems that . “似乎”it seems to me that it is a good idea for you to do more reading. 我好像觉得多阅读对你来说是个好主意。12cant be too形容词 “再也不过分，越越好”in my opinion, the importance of punctuality cannot be emphasized too much.我认为守时(punctuality)的重要性再强调也不为过。13on doing “一就”on seeing the wall newspaper the next morning, our classmates were both surprised and overjoyed. 第二天早上同学们看到墙报，感到惊讶又高兴。14cant wait to do 迫不及待做某事on returning home, i couldnt wait to share the photos and experiences with my classmates. 一回到家，我就迫不及待地把照片和感受与同学们分享。15make iteasy for sb. to do “使某人容易做某事”having a mobile phone makes it easy for me to keep in touch with my friends. 拥有手机使我更容易和朋友保持联系。16to ones joy “使某人感到惊喜的是”to our great joy, not only are our classes lively and interesting, but our school life is also rich and colorful.让我们尤为惊喜的是，我们的课堂生动有趣，校园生活丰富多彩。17what impressed me most was that . “使我感到

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