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2013年高中会考作文分析09年夏天范文 本文分三段 时态为一般现在时 讲述学生的一般生活情况 Our school made a survey of the daily average amount of time high school students spend on different after-class activities. 文章总括（题目已提供） The students spend the most time,120 minutes, in doing their homework. They put about 60 minutes in enjoying entertainment, such as listening to music, watching TV and playing on the computer. (1) They spend 30 minutes in doing sports while 15 minutes goes into housework.第二段展开分述。注意标黑部分为花时间做某事的不同用法。 It is a pity that only 15 minutes is spent (被动语态)on housework. I think parents should encourage (allow, tell) their children to do more housework. (2) In this way children may learn to do their own things by themselves.最后一段写出“你自己的看法”。 备注：表示时间的另外的用法(提高版本)： （1）It takes up 30 minutes for them to do sports. （2）In this way children may learn to be more independent and responsible.10年春天范文 本文分四段 时态为一般现在时 讲述个人现在的情况 My name is Li Hua, a Senior 2 student from Evergreen High School. I am interested in this activity so Id like to take part in it as a volunteer. 文章开头先描述自己的一般信息，是表格的第一部分，并提出自己想要参加志愿活动 I am a member of our schools Water-Saving Club. I can speak good English. I am in the habit of saving water and good at team work. I am sure that I can become a good helper for you.第二段描述自己进一步的信息，为表格第二部分的内容。注意划线部分为补充的细节。内容主要是要点+细节的搭配，根据你的英语能力适当补充细节。 The world is short of water. I think I should do something for it. Whats more, its also a good chance for me to make more friends.最后一段写出“你申请成为志愿者的目的”。至少写出两个目的，使得文章内容饱满。Please give me a chance, I will try my best to do a good job.文章收尾 备注：更多的参加志愿者活动的目的。（见笔记）10年夏天范文 本文为活动类作文，讲述已经发生的活动 时态为一般过去时 Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity called “Building a Green World”. 文章总括（题目已提供） My classmates and I went to the city park near our school. We did some volunteer work there. We set out at nine oclock. After we arrived at the park, we began to work at once. Some helped water trees and flowers. Some cleaned the benches and picked up litter. Others cleaned the childrens playground. 第二段展开分述。划线部分为补充的细节，黑体字部分为补充描述(“冒号”要求补充的细节)。 All of us were tired but happy because we did good things to others and to the environment. Environment is so important to our life. We should do something to protect it. Protecting the earth is protecting ourselves. (1) I hope to take part in this kind of activity again. 最后一段写出“你对此次活动的感受”。 备注：(1)更多的活动感受： Whats more, I made a lot of good friends through this activity. I got along very well with them. I felt so excited. I learnt a lot of life experience from this activity. I knew more about how to work together with others. It was very useful( valuable) for my life. 2011年春季(B)篇 介绍类的作文，主要用一般现在时或一般将来时，情态动词（ We can visit theGreat Wall） Dear Peter,You mentioned in your last letter that you want to learn Chinese in Beijing. I have some good news for you.文章总括（题目已提供） Our school is offering a short-term Chinese course for beginners, just like you. (1) It will last from 22 nd January to 22 nd February, 2011. You can take courses in many subjects here, such as listening, speaking, Chinese painting, and Chinese cooking. The tuition fee is 4,000 RMB in all. 第二段描述题目提供的英文信息 Im really eager to meet you in Beijing. When you stay here, I can show you around. We can visit the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and other interesting places. You know that the Spring Festival is coming. You can spend this most important day (festival) in China with my family. Whats more, I can help you to improve your Chinese because we can talk (communicate) with each other every day.第三段描述“如果他来中国，你给他安排的许多有趣的活动”。 If you have any questions, please ask me. I am looking forward to your early reply.第四段文章收尾 备注：(1) It will begin on 22 nd January and end on 22 nd February, 2011. 更多的有趣活动： (2) We can also enjoy delicious Chinese food and wonderful Beijing Opera together. Whats more, it is a good idea to do some shopping in some famous streets in Beijing, such as Xidan, Wangfujing and so on. 2011夏 介绍类的作文 现在的一般状况 主要用一般现在时态Welcome to Evergreen High School. Its a great honor for me to meet you and make a general introduction to our school. 文章总括（题目已提供）Our school was founded in 1976. It is located in the centre of the city. （1）We have about 200 teachers and 1,500 students here. There are two teaching buildings, a lab building, a sports ground and a library in our school.第二段描述 “学校的基本情况” We enjoy studying here because we can learn a lot of knowledge every day. Whats more, we love taking part in lots of interesting activities here. （2）We do sports at least one hour a day. We can read our favorite books in our library. It has a huge collection of books. (3) We can also join different clubs according to our interests. In short, we really have a colorful life in our school. 第三大段描述“学生的学习生活”。如果学校的基本情况补充的东西不多，就多介绍一下学校的生活。Hope you enjoy your visit to our school. Thanks.文章收尾（题目已提供）（1） 注意have和there be 表示有的区别。（2） We do many different kinds of sports every day, such as playing football or basketball and go swimming. At weekends, we often go climbing. It is very useful for us to keep fit. 2012春 介绍类的作文，将要进行的活动，主要时态用一般将来时和一般现在时。 Ladies and gentlemen. Attention, please. Id like to introduce to you the one-day tour for the coming Saturday. 文章总括（题目已 提供）This one-day tour will include (cover) some famous places such as the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven and the Summer Palace. They are your dream places. （1）The total fee for the tour is only $70. Well leave at 8:30 in the morning. （2）We will travel around by bus. (3) At about 12:30, We will have traditional Chinese food for lunch, such as Beijing Roast Duck and Chinese dumplings. (4)Well finish (end) our tour at 5:30 in the afternoon.第二段“根据表格提供的信息，介绍旅游活动的安排”。I strongly advise you to take a camera with you, so you can take many photos to record these interesting moments. Whats more, I think youd better put on sports shoes, because we will walk a very long way. I am sure everybody will have a good time.(5)第三段“对他们的出行提出建议“备注：(1) You will pay only 7 dollars for this tour.（2） Our school bus will pick you up. (3) At about 12:30, we will have lunch at a local restaurant for Chinese dishes such as Beijing Roast Duck and Chinese sweet dumplings. (4) The tour will start at 8:30 in the morning and end at 5:30 in the afternoon (5)更多的出行建议：I strongly advise you to take enough money with you if you want to buy Chinese goods for your friends as gifts. I strongly advise you to put on your coat because it is very cold these days in Beijing. I think that you had better take a map with you. In this way, you can find your destinations at any time.2012年夏 活动类作文（已经发生的活动） 主要用一般过去时 注意动词要变过去式。 Our school organized an activity name our life and our environment. 文章总括（题目已 提供）（1）It lasted from June 15th to 20th 2012. During these days, we took part in a lot of interesting activities. A teacher from Beijing University gave us a speech on Human and Nature. We learned a lot from the speech. We had a discussion on public transportation. We decided to go to school by bus or subway more often. W