书面表达指导---建议信_劝告信.ppt

假如你是李华 审题 体裁 信件 aletterofadvice 主体时态 一般现在时 人称 第二人称 假如你是中学生李华 你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件 说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难 感到非常着急 请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议 帮他来解决这方面的困难 1 不要担忧 要有信心 2 给自己更多练习汉语的机会 3 让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中 假如你是中学生李华 你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件 说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难 感到非常着急 请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议 帮他来解决这方面的困难 1 不要担忧 要有信心 2 给自己更多练习汉语的机会 3 让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中 1 Beginning statetheproblem yourpurpose 问题和目的戒网瘾 戒烟 学英语 汉语 减肥 2 Body giveadvice reasons 建议和理由 3 Ending expressyourhope 表达希望 3parts 假如你是中学生李华 你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件 说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难 感到非常着急 请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议 帮他来解决这方面的困难 1 不要担忧 要有信心 2 给自己更多练习汉语的机会 3 让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中 Ihavereceivedyourletter I msorrytohearthatyouaregoingthroughahardtimelearningChinese NowI mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions Don tbeanxiousandtrustyourself Grabeveryopportunitytopracticeusingthelanguage InvolveyourselfinaChineseenvironment Lookingforwardtoyourimprovementsoon writeanoutline DearPeter Ihavereceivedyourletter I msorrytohearthatyouaregoingthroughahardtimelearningChinese NowI mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions Tobeginwith don tbeanxiousandtrustyourself Chineseisoneofthemostcomplexlanguagesintheworld soit snormalforabeginnertohavesometrouble Besides grabeveryopportunitytopracticeusingthelanguage Themoreyoupractice themorefluentyouwillbeinit organization 建议信或劝告信好用句型 Aboveall involveyourselfinaChineseenvironment MakesurethatyouaresurroundedbybooksandTVprogramsinChinese andbyfriendsspeakingChinese whichisessentialtothelearningofanylanguage Lookingforwardtoyourimprovementsoon sentencepatterns套用句型 A stateyourpurpose 1 I msorrytolearnthat soI mwritingtogiveyousomesuggetions 2 I mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon 3 Knowingthatyou I dliketosharesomesuggestionswithyou B giveyouradvice 1 Trustyourself Don tworry 2 It shelpful importantto 3 Itwouldbeagoodideato 4 should besupposedtodosth Remember C expressyourhope 1 Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration account Lookingforwardtoyourimprovementsoon 2 Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful 3 I msureifyoutakemyadvice youwillmakegreatprogress Remember Firstly Secondly Thirdly Firstofall Besides Inaddition What smore Furthermore Finally Lastbutnotleast Foronething Foranother 衔接与连贯 表示多个建议 可以用上 11 可编辑 Writing 1 假设你是李华 你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖很烦恼 她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议 请你根据以下的内容给Jane写一封信 要点 1 健康饮食 2 多锻炼 3 喝足够多的水 Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight I dliketogiveyousomesuggestions Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet Itishelpfultodomoreexercise Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy 1 Beginning purpose 2 Body advice DearJane Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight I dliketogiveyousomesuggestions First itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet Inordertoloseweight youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits Besides itishelpfultodomoreexercise Themoreexerciseyoutake themorefatyouwillburnoff andyouwillbethinner Inaddition itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater Becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities andhelpusloseweight Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy Yours LiHua Writing 2 假设你是李华 得知你的老师Mr Huang喜欢吸烟 并且已经养成长期吸烟的习惯 请你给他写一封信 向他提出戒烟的建议 要点 1 担忧老师的身体健康 2 提出戒烟理由和如何戒烟的建议 3 祝他早日戒烟成功 writeanoutline SinceIknewthatyouhavegotintothethehabitofsmoking Ihavebeenveryworried First chooseadaywhenyouarerelaxedtothrowawayallyourcigarettesandmakealistofallthebenefitsyoucangetfromstopsmoking Then rereadthebenefitswhenyouwanttosmokeagain Finally dosomesportseverydayandyouaresuretosucceed DearMr Huang SinceIknewthatyouhavegotintothethehabitofsmoking Ihavebeenveryworried Yousee notonlysmokingwastesyourtimeandmoney butitisalsoharmfultoyouhealthphysicallyandmentally soIbelieveyoushouldstopsmokingimmediately Herearesomesuggestionsforyou First chooseadaywhenyouarerelaxedtothrowawayallyourcigarettesandmakealistofallthebenefitsyoucangetfromstoppingsmoking Second rereadthebenefitswhenyouwa